Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response grammatically correct, more concise, and clearer. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use linking words and correct articles/plurals (e.g., “a”, “many”, “under construction”). Avoid trailing conjunctions.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in an apartment block, and there are many tall buildings nearby. In fact, several new skyscrapers are currently under construction close to my building.

Sugerencia: Good content and structure. Make it slightly more natural by tightening the phrasing and adding a linking word. Use consistent verb forms and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Sometimes I take photos, especially when a building has impressive architecture or interesting details. Also, I prefer shooting from the highest viewpoint inside a building to capture a better perspective.

Sugerencia: Be more natural and specific. Use a clear topic sentence, then explain why and what you would do. Correct verb forms and add linking words (e.g., “because”, “also”). Avoid listing activities without structure.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa because it is the tallest building in the world. I would go to the observation deck to take photographs and, if possible, capture drone shots of the skyline.

Sugerencia: Improve grammar, clarity and conciseness. Start with a direct answer, then give a specific reason. Use correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “the highest floor”, “I would enjoy”). Avoid conditional phrasing that confuses the point.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live on the highest floor of a tall building because I would enjoy the panoramic views of the surrounding area.

× I currently living in a apartment block which is also a tall building and there is a many tall buildings around near to my apartment and some other buildings are still constructing and.

✓ I am currently living in an apartment block that is also a tall building, and there are many tall buildings near my apartment; some other buildings are still under construction.

Errors: missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous (Present tense issue), incorrect article 'a' before a vowel-starting word 'apartment' (Article errors), incorrect use of 'there is' with plural 'many tall buildings' (Singular and plural issue/Subject-verb agreement), awkward preposition 'around near to' (Incorrect use of prepositions), and incorrect verb phrase 'still constructing' instead of passive 'under construction' (Incorrect passive/verb form). Suggestions: use 'am currently living' for present continuous, use 'an apartment', use 'there are' for plural, use 'near my apartment' (drop redundant prepositions), and say 'under construction' for buildings being built.

× I sometimes take a photograph if they have really impressive architecture or interesting details, and I prefer taking pictures from inside the highest viewpoint in the building.

✓ I sometimes take photographs if a building has really impressive architecture or interesting details, and I prefer taking pictures from the highest viewpoint inside the building.

Errors: subject reference 'they' is unclear for singular 'building' (Incorrect use of pronouns) and inconsistent noun number 'a photograph' vs general habit 'photographs' (Singular and plural issue). Also word order 'inside the highest viewpoint' is awkward (Incorrect order). Suggestions: refer to 'a building' and use 'has' for present simple, use plural 'photographs' for habitual action, and order as 'from the highest viewpoint inside the building.'

× Of course I would like to visit Burj Khalifa and go to the highest point of that building and take photograph and get a drone shot these things.

✓ Of course I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa, go to the highest point of the building, take photographs, and get drone shots.

Errors: missing article 'the' before 'Burj Khalifa' (Article errors), singular 'photograph' used where plural or 'a photograph' fits (Singular and plural issue), awkward phrase 'get a drone shot these things' (Sentence structure errors) and inconsistent verb forms. Suggestions: add 'the' before well-known building names, use parallel verb forms 'go', 'take', 'get', use plural 'photographs' or 'a photograph', and simplify to 'get drone shots.'

× Of course, I do like to live in highest point of tall building because I enjoying seeing the view around the area if I live in the reality.

✓ Of course, I would like to live at the highest point of a tall building because I would enjoy seeing the view of the surrounding area if I actually lived there.

Errors: incorrect modal/tense 'do like to live' for hypothetical desire (Modal verb usage/Present tense issue), missing article 'the' before 'highest point' and 'a' before 'tall building' (Article errors), wrong preposition 'in highest point' should be 'at the highest point' (Incorrect use of prepositions), incorrect verb form 'I enjoying' missing auxiliary 'would' and gerund issue (Verb + -ing form), and awkward phrase 'if I live in the reality' (Incorrect phrase/Sentence structure). Suggestions: use 'would like' for desire, 'at the highest point of a tall building', 'would enjoy' + gerund 'seeing', 'view of the surrounding area', and 'if I actually lived there' for conditional hypothetical.