Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler and repetition, and fix subject-verb agreement. Add one supporting detail with a linking word.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in Xiamen, a bustling coastal city, so there are many tall, high-rise buildings around my apartment. For example, several residential towers and office blocks are within a five-minute walk from my home.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence, correct grammatical errors, and provide a brief reason with a linking word. Use clearer vocabulary and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Not really. I grew up in the city and see buildings every day, so I don't feel the need to photograph them. However, I sometimes take pictures of particularly interesting or historic buildings when I travel.

Sugerencia: Give a concise direct answer, correct grammar and include specific reasons with linking words (e.g. because, for example). Avoid trailing off and finish the thought.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the N Seoul Tower because it is a famous landmark with great city views. For example, I want to go to the observation deck at sunset because the view looks very romantic and memorable.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, reduce fillers and hesitations, and give a clear reason with a linking phrase. Provide one concrete supporting detail about what you like about rural life.

Ejemplo: I would prefer to live in a house in the countryside because I have lived in high-rise apartments for many years. For instance, I enjoy quiet surroundings and more green space, which help me relax and recharge on weekends.

× 'cause I'm living in Xiamen, which is a really bustling coastal city right now, and I live in an apartment so that the buildings surrounding my my home is all high rise buildings.

✓ 'cause I live in Xiamen, which is a really bustling coastal city, and I live in an apartment, so the buildings surrounding my home are all high-rise buildings.

Use simple present 'I live' rather than 'I'm living' for habitual facts. Remove redundant 'my'. Subject-verb agreement: plural subject 'buildings' needs plural verb 'are' (Grammar problem type ID 27). Hyphenate 'high-rise' as a compound adjective. Also adjust word order and punctuation for clarity.

× Actually I don't really like taking photos of buildings cause I was born in city and grow up in city so every day I can see the buildings.

✓ Actually I don't really like taking photos of buildings because I was born in the city and grew up in the city, so I can see the buildings every day.

Use past tense 'grew up' for completed action in the past (Grammar problem type ID 5). Include definite article 'the city' (article error ID 22). Move 'every day' for natural word order. Replace 'cause' with 'because' for formality.

× I think it's meaning meaningless to record them.

✓ I think it is meaningless to record them.

Unnecessary and incorrect insertion 'it's meaning' creates ungrammatical structure (Grammar problem type ID 26). Use 'it is meaningless' or 'it doesn't make sense'.

× Yeah, I think actually I would like to visit the National Tower in Seoul 'cause it is a famous building in Seoul and it is really romantic place located in the highest position so.

✓ I would like to visit the N Seoul Tower because it is a famous and really romantic place located at the highest point in Seoul.

Use correct name 'N Seoul Tower' if intended; keep conditional 'would like' for preference. Use 'located at the highest point' for natural preposition (preposition issue ID 11) and add articles 'a' before 'really romantic place' (article error ID 22). Remove trailing 'so' that fragments the sentence (sentence structure ID 26).

× Well, compared with living in a tall building, I think I prefer to live in a house in rural areas right now 'cause I have lived in the tall building for a long time and umm, I think, uh, we all need uh, sometimes to uh, relax ourselves in a peaceful environment.

✓ Compared with living in a tall building, I prefer to live in a house in a rural area at the moment because I have lived in a tall building for a long time, and sometimes we all need to relax in a peaceful environment.

Use 'prefer' not 'I think I prefer' redundancy; keep present preference. Use 'a rural area' or 'rural areas' consistently (article error ID 22). 'the tall building' should be 'a tall building' unless referring to a specific one (article error ID 22). Remove unnecessary filler words and correct infinitive use 'to relax' (verb form issue ID 8).