Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetitions and incorrect word forms (e.g., “no any”, “build tall buildings”). Use linking words if you add a second detail.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live about 20 kilometres from the city centre, so the area is mostly low houses and farmland.

Sugerencia: Give a single clear response and a specific reason. Fix grammar (e.g., use present simple: “I often take photos”, “skyscrapers give me ideas”). Limit to two to three sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit the city because skyscrapers inspire me with interesting shapes and patterns. For example, I like photographing reflections on glass facades.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and provide a specific reason and one brief detail. Correct phrases (e.g., “the tallest building in Karachi”, “its presence” instead of “their aura stands there”). Keep to two sentences max and use a linking word like “because” or “so”.

Ejemplo: Yes — I would like to visit the HBL building in Karachi because it is one of the tallest buildings there. I want to see its architecture up close and feel its impressive presence.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, structured response: state your present preference, then explain briefly why. Fix grammar (e.g., “I’m not interested now”, “living on upper floors can be inconvenient”). Use linking words like “because” and limit to two sentences.

Ejemplo: Not at the moment. I might consider living in a tall building in the future, but now I prefer lower floors because going up and down can be inconvenient and time-consuming.

× Not at all, my hometown is far from the city, like 20 kilometers away from the central city, so there is no any skyscraper there.

✓ Not at all, my hometown is far from the city, about 20 kilometers from the city center, so there are no skyscrapers there.

The phrase 'no any skyscraper' is ungrammatical. Use 'no' with a plural noun ('no skyscrapers') or 'not any skyscraper' with singular; here plural fits better. Also 'central city' is unnatural; 'city center' is correct. Ensure subject-verb agreement: plural 'skyscrapers' takes 'are'. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× But I like the build tall buildings.

✓ But I like tall buildings.

The phrase 'the build tall buildings' is incorrect word order and uses 'build' unnecessarily. Use the adjective phrase 'tall buildings' as the object of 'like'. Remove extra articles and verbs. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× Yes, I will. I will. I'm very keen to doing that type of fun whenever I go in the central city, because skyscraper give me the lots of ideas that how I take photos or things.

✓ Yes, I do. I'm very keen on doing that kind of activity whenever I go to the city center, because skyscrapers give me many ideas about how to take photos.

Repeated 'I will' is unnatural; use present simple 'I do' for habits. Use 'keen on doing' (preposition + -ing). 'Type of fun' is awkward; 'kind of activity' is better. Use 'go to the city center' not 'go in the central city'. 'Skyscraper give' needs plural and agreement: 'skyscrapers give'. 'the lots of ideas' -> 'many ideas'. Also rephrase 'that how I take photos or things' to 'about how to take photos'. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× Yes, absolutely. I am very keen to visit HBL Well Informed Bank in Pakistan. It has a tallest building in Karachi so I want to visit there to see how that building stands and their aura stands there.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I am very keen to visit HBL Well Informed Bank in Pakistan. It has the tallest building in Karachi, so I want to visit to see how that building stands and what its atmosphere is like.

Use definite article 'the tallest' (there is one tallest). 'Visit there' is redundant; 'visit' plus object suffices. 'Their aura stands there' mixes pronouns and strange verbs; use 'its atmosphere is like' to describe the building's presence. Also ensure 'has the tallest building' is correct 'there is/it has the' construction. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× In future it's a big yes, but now I have no any interest to go in a in the to live in up because whenever I live or someone lives in the upper portion of the building, it is very headache to go down there for something.

✓ In the future it would be a big yes, but now I have no interest in living up there because when I, or anyone, lives on an upper floor, it is very inconvenient to go downstairs for things.

Use 'in the future' and conditional 'would be' for preference. 'No any interest' is incorrect; use 'no interest' or 'not any interest'. Use 'interest in living' (preposition + gerund). 'Live up there' or 'living on an upper floor' is natural. 'Very headache' is incorrect; use 'very inconvenient' or 'a headache' as a noun. 'Go down there for something' -> 'go downstairs for things'. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× So that's why I'm not.

✓ So that's why I'm not interested.

Sentence is incomplete: 'I'm not' needs a complement. Add 'interested' to complete the meaning. This fixes a sentence fragment and clarifies the reason. Grammar problem type ID: 26}]} PMID: null