Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor mistakes. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition ("small homes and small houses") and fix articles and phrasing ("in a suburb area" → "in a suburb"). Add one specific detail to enrich the answer using a linking word.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a suburb with mostly single‑storey houses, so the skyline is low; for example, the tallest building nearby is a two‑storey community centre about five minutes away.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and avoid repetition. Use correct tense and smoother linking phrases (e.g. "It depends"). Provide a concise reason and one clear example instead of vague phrases like "signifies the important importance."

Ejemplo: I don’t usually take photos of buildings. It depends on the place; for instance, when I visited a famous landmark last year I took several photos because it was architecturally unique.

Sugerencia: Improve clarity and use more natural vocabulary. Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add specific, well‑linked details. Avoid awkward phrases like "signifies the importance of the Riyadh sitting." Mention a reason why you want to visit and describe a distinctive feature clearly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the King Faisal (or King Festival) Tower in Riyadh because it is an iconic landmark. In particular, I’m curious about the sky bridge that links two towers, which must offer impressive city views.

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and correct grammatical errors. Give a brief reason using linking words and a clear example. Replace awkward expressions like "spread in a horizontal direction" and "from the tallest."

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn’t want to live in a tall building. I prefer a single‑storey house because I dislike climbing many stairs or using lifts; for example, I find it much easier to move around in a bungalow with everything on one level.

× My home is situated in a a suburb area of the city where small homes and small houses are present.

✓ My home is situated in a suburb of the city where small houses are common.

The sentence has an extra 'a' and uses 'a suburb area' incorrectly; 'suburb' as a noun can be used alone or with 'area' but 'a suburb' is correct. 'Small homes and small houses' is redundant; use 'small houses'. Also 'are present' is awkward; 'are common' is more natural. Remove the duplicate article and simplify. Suggestion: say 'in a suburb of the city' or 'in a suburban area of the city' and use 'houses are common.'

× I don't have that interest.

✓ I am not interested in that.

The original uses 'have that interest' which is grammatically acceptable but unnatural. 'Be interested in' is the correct idiomatic expression to express lack of interest. Use the present simple 'I am not interested in' for a general statement. Suggestion: use 'I'm not interested in taking photos of buildings.'

× If I'll go on a touristic place and has a famous building that, uh, signifies the important importance of the city, then maybe I'll take the photo.

✓ If I go to a tourist place with a famous building that signifies the importance of the city, then I might take a photo.

In conditional clauses introduced by 'if', English uses the present simple ('If I go') not 'If I will go'. 'Touristic' is non-idiomatic; use 'tourist'. 'Has a famous building' lacks a subject agreement and should be rephrased 'with a famous building'. 'Important importance' is redundant; use 'importance'. 'Maybe I'll' can be softened to 'I might' for naturalness. Suggestion: use present simple after 'if' and simplify noun phrases (e.g., 'a tourist place with a famous building').

× But usually on daily basis and day-to-day activity, I don't take the pictures of the.

✓ But usually, on a daily basis, I don't take pictures of buildings.

The phrase 'on daily basis and day-to-day activity' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'on a daily basis' or 'in day-to-day life'. 'I don't take the pictures of the.' ends abruptly and lacks the object; complete it as 'pictures of buildings.' Suggestion: keep one time phrase and ensure the object is present: 'I don't take pictures of buildings.'

× Yes, I would like to visit King Festival Tower which is situated in the city of Riyadh.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit the King Festival Tower, which is situated in the city of Riyadh.

This sentence needs the definite article 'the' before the proper name of the building and a comma before the non-restrictive relative clause. Adding 'the' is an article correction (ID 22) but the main issue is article usage with named buildings and punctuation; present participle not needed. Suggestion: include 'the' before specific building names when appropriate and set off descriptive clauses with commas.

× This signifies the importance of the Riyadh sitting in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.

✓ This signifies the importance of Riyadh in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.

'The Riyadh' is incorrect because city names do not take the definite article. 'Sitting' is an unnecessary participle here; use 'in' to indicate location. The phrase 'the Riyadh sitting in the Kingdom' is awkward; streamline to 'Riyadh in the Kingdom of Saudi Arabia.' Suggestion: drop 'the' before city names and avoid unnecessary participles.

× Another interesting part of that building is it has a slight bridge between two portions.

✓ Another interesting feature of that building is a small bridge connecting two sections.

'Part' is awkward; 'feature' is better. 'It has a slight bridge between two portions' is wordy and has awkward nouns; use 'a small bridge connecting two sections.' 'Portions' is uncommon for building parts; use 'sections' or 'towers.' Suggestion: use concise nouns and active participle 'connecting' to show relationship.

× So this bridge connects the two offices.

✓ So this bridge connects the two offices.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. It correctly uses the present simple 'connects' for a general fact. No further action required. Suggestion: keep as is.

× No, I never wanted to live in the tall building.

✓ No, I never wanted to live in a tall building.

'The tall building' implies a specific building mentioned earlier; since none was specified, use the indefinite article 'a.' Also 'never wanted' suggests past preference; if the speaker means present preference, 'I do not want to live in a tall building' is better. Suggestion: choose 'a tall building' for general reference, or use present tense 'I do not want' if expressing a current preference.

× I just want to live in my house which is spread in a horizontal direction instead of vertical direction because I don't want to have an issue of going and coming from the tallest.

✓ I just want to live in my house, which is spread out horizontally rather than vertically, because I don't want the trouble of going up and down to the top floors.

Several issues: 'spread in a horizontal direction' is wordy; use 'spread out horizontally.' 'Instead of vertical direction' should be 'rather than vertically.' 'Have an issue of going and coming from the tallest' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'the tallest' is wrong noun choice. Clarify as 'the trouble of going up and down to the top floors.' Suggestion: use adverbial forms ('horizontally', 'vertically') and clearer nouns ('top floors', 'upper floors') and idiomatic verbs ('going up and down').