Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and precise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (use 'Yes' or 'No' rather than 'Yeah' in formal test), and add one specific detail about the building using a linking word. Avoid contractions and unnecessary words.

Ejemplo: Yes, there is a tall building near my home. It is called West Point Mall, and it houses a cinema and several shops, so it attracts many visitors on weekends.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use cohesive linking words to contrast your preference. Start with a clear direct response, then briefly explain why you prefer other subjects with specific examples. Watch word order and article use ('the' or none) to sound natural.

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings; instead, I prefer landscapes such as mountain ranges, lakes and rivers because I enjoy capturing natural light and wildlife, like birds or deer.

Sugerencia: Use more formal phrasing and correct grammar (use 'are' for plural or 'that are' and correct location). Mention one reason for wanting to visit and use linking words to list examples. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa because of its amazing views; I would also like to see the Petronas Twin Towers in Malaysia, as I am interested in modern architecture and city skylines.

Sugerencia: Provide a complete sentence with clear structure: state your preference, give a reason, and use linking words. Avoid fillers like 'uh' and fix grammar (singular/plural, articles). Be specific about safety concerns and optionally offer a short contrasting point.

Ejemplo: I might like to experience living in a tall building, but I would not prefer it because during incidents such as fires or earthquakes high-rise buildings can be unsafe; for that reason, I would choose a low-rise apartment near emergency exits.

× Yeah, there is one tall building near my home.

✓ Yeah, there are some tall buildings near my home.

The examiner asked 'Are there tall buildings near your home?' which expects plural. The original reply uses singular 'is one tall building' but the question is plural; to match and sound natural, use plural 'there are some tall buildings' or specify 'there is a tall building' if you mean one. Suggestion: keep number consistent with the question or clarify quantity.

× No, I usually like to take photos of environments of mountain ranges and lakes, rivers and wild animals.

✓ No, I usually like taking photos of mountain ranges, lakes, rivers, and wild animals.

After verbs of preference like 'like' it is more natural to use the -ing form for habitual actions: 'like taking' rather than 'like to take photos of environments of'. Also 'environments of' is awkward and unnecessary; list the subjects directly and use commas for clarity.

× Yeah, I would like to visit Burj Khalifa and also the twin towers that's located in Malaysia when I get a chance to visit that city.

✓ Yeah, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa and also the Twin Towers that are located in Malaysia when I get a chance to visit that city.

'Twin Towers' is plural, so the relative pronoun clause needs plural verb agreement: 'that are located' not 'that's located'. Also use articles: 'the Burj Khalifa' and capitalise proper nouns. Suggestion: match verb number to the plural noun and include appropriate articles.

× Want to experience but I don't prefer tall buildings as during uh incidents like fire and or earthquakes it's usually pretty unsafe to live in such a high rise buildings.

✓ I would like to experience living in a tall building, but I don't prefer them because during incidents like fires or earthquakes it's usually unsafe to live in such high-rise buildings.

The original lacks a subject and has awkward structure. Begin with a subject 'I would like' and contrast with 'but I don't prefer them'. Use plural agreement 'fires' and 'high-rise buildings', remove filler 'uh' and redundant 'or'. Also hyphenate 'high-rise' when used as a modifier. Suggestion: form complete clauses and ensure subject-verb and noun-pronoun agreement.