Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct article use, and add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, replace "center of city" with "city centre" or "the centre of the city," and avoid saying both "hometown" and "my city."

Ejemplo: Yes — I live in the centre of the city, so there are many tall buildings nearby. For instance, there are several office towers and apartment blocks within a ten-minute walk.

Sugerencia: Remove fillers and repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, "because" or "so"). Use more precise vocabulary like "landscapes" or "skylines."

Ejemplo: Not really. I rarely photograph buildings because I prefer taking pictures of landscapes and skylines, so I usually focus on natural views rather than architecture.

Sugerencia: Be specific and correct grammar. Give one clear example of a building you want to visit and explain why using linking words (for example, "because" or "because of"). Avoid vague phrases like "content how ancestored" — instead say "because of their history" or "architectural details."

Ejemplo: Yes. I would love to visit historical buildings such as the Forbidden City in Beijing because of its rich history and intricate architecture, and I’m interested in learning how people lived there in the past.

Sugerencia: Organise your answer with a clear topic sentence and a concise reason. Use correct grammar for comparisons and avoid hesitation. Provide a linking phrase such as "because" or "however" and one specific detail (e.g., earthquakes in Taiwan).

Ejemplo: It depends. I wouldn’t choose to live in a very tall building in Taiwan because earthquakes are frequent, so I’d prefer a low-rise house for safety and peace of mind.

× Yes, of course, 'cause I live in the center of city, so there are many tall buildings in my hometown or in my city.

✓ Yes, of course, because I live in the center of the city, so there are many tall buildings in my hometown or in my city.

Use of definite article 'the' is required before 'center' and 'city' when referring to a specific, known place. Also replace colloquial 'cause' with 'because' for formality and clarity. Suggestion: say 'the center of the city' to be grammatically correct. Grammar problem type ID:17

× MMM, I think, uh, for me, I don't really, I don't really take photo of the buildings 'cause I more appreciate or, or the more admire the landscape or the like sky or something. So I think not.

✓ MMM, I think, um, for me, I don't really take photos of buildings because I appreciate and admire the landscape, the sky, and similar scenes more. So I don't.

Use plural 'photos' when speaking generally. Fix word order and reduce redundancy ('more appreciate' is incorrect; use 'appreciate and admire ... more'). Replace informal filler and clarify sentence structure. Suggestion: use 'take photos of buildings' and place 'more' after the verbs or before the adjective phrase: 'admire ... more'. Grammar problem type ID:14

× Yes, there are some of building that I really, really want to visit in my whole life, in the rest of my life, especially those historical building such as, uh, such as the building, they are content how ancestored.

✓ Yes, there are some buildings that I really want to visit in my lifetime, especially historical buildings, such as those that show how ancient people lived.

Use plural 'buildings' not 'building' after 'some of' or 'some'. 'In my whole life' is awkward; use 'in my lifetime' or 'for the rest of my life'. 'Those historical building' needs plural agreement. The clause 'they are content how ancestored' is ungrammatical; clarify meaning to 'that show how ancient people lived' or similar. Suggestion: simplify and use consistent plural forms and clear relative clauses. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I think it depends on the situation, like for example, because I live in Taiwan and Taiwan is where one of the country that the earthquake most frequently happen.

✓ I think it depends on the situation. For example, I live in Taiwan, which is one of the countries where earthquakes happen most frequently.

Prepositions and relative clauses were incorrect: use 'one of the countries' (plural) and 'where earthquakes happen most frequently' rather than 'that the earthquake most frequently happen'. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: use 'one of the countries where ...' and ensure subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID:11

× So in this situation I think I might not really want to live in a tall building 'cause I feel like you sometimes, uh, dangerous.

✓ So in that situation, I think I might not want to live in a tall building because I sometimes feel it is dangerous.

Tense and pronoun use: 'you sometimes, dangerous' is incorrect — the speaker should use 'I sometimes feel it is dangerous' or 'I sometimes feel unsafe'. Also 'in this situation' -> 'in that situation' to match hypothetical context. Suggestion: use clear subject 'I' and link feeling to 'it is dangerous' or 'I feel unsafe'. Grammar problem type ID:6}]}{