Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary, and a couple of supporting details. Avoid filler words and pronunciation errors (e.g., "buildings", "village side", "quiet"). Use one or two linking words to add coherence.

Ejemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home. I live in a village because my family prefers a quiet, rural environment, so most houses are low-rise. However, we do visit the nearby town sometimes to see taller structures.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct yes/no and then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Improve grammar (e.g., "we live in a village", "city side", "we love tall buildings", "photos of buildings") and reduce repetition. Use linking words like 'because' or 'when'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I travel. Because I live in a village, I find tall city buildings fascinating, so whenever I visit the city I take pictures of interesting architecture, such as skyscrapers or historic facades.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give a clear, specific description of the building and reason. Correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., 'Yes, there is', 'a tower located in Kathmandu', 'my financial situation'). Use one sentence for the topic and one for details, and avoid unclear words like 'toddler' here.

Ejemplo: Yes, there is one: I would like to visit the Dharahara tower in Kathmandu. It is a historic tower with great views of the city, but I haven't been able to go because of financial constraints and travel costs.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion in one sentence and support with a specific reason. Fix grammar (e.g., 'a tall building', 'I grew up in a small town', 'I cannot afford it'). Use a linking word like 'but' to contrast your preference and limitation.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy city views and modern amenities, but I grew up in a small town and currently cannot afford the higher rent and maintenance costs.

× Once you talk about this question, we don't have any tall billies near our home because we prefer to live in a village side and we love to be we, uh, stay in silent place. So yeah.

✓ To answer this question, we don't have any tall buildings near our home because we prefer to live in the countryside and we like to stay in a quiet place.

Multiple issues: 'Once you talk about this question' is unnatural — use 'To answer this question' (sentence structure). 'billies' is a misspelling of 'buildings' (word choice). 'village side' is incorrect; use 'countryside' or 'village' (preposition/word choice). 'love to be we, uh, stay' is ungrammatical; use 'we like to stay' (sentence structure). 'silent place' should be 'quiet place' (word choice). Suggestions: simplify the opening phrase, use correct nouns and collocations (countryside, quiet), and construct a clear subject-verb phrase: 'we like to stay in a quiet place.'

× Will you talk about this question? Yes, of course I do take photos of buildings.

✓ To answer this question, yes, of course I take photos of buildings.

'Will you talk about this question?' is an odd, irrelevant question tag; use 'To answer this question' (sentence structure). 'I do take photos' is not wrong but sounds emphatic; 'I take photos' is more natural here. Suggest using a simple, direct reply: 'To answer this question, yes, of course I take photos of buildings.'

× As I said earlier, uh, we are living in a village site, so we don't have any tall buildings near our home.

✓ As I said earlier, we live in a village, so we don't have any tall buildings near our home.

Present continuous 'we are living' implies a temporary action; for a permanent situation use simple present 'we live' (present tense issue). 'village site' is incorrect collocation; 'village' or 'countryside' is correct. Suggest using simple present for habitual or permanent situations: 'we live in a village.'

× So whenever we are visiting, uh, City side, we obviously loves tall buildings.

✓ So whenever we visit the city, we obviously love tall buildings.

'we are visiting' is awkward for habitual trips; simple present 'we visit' is better (tense). 'City side' should be 'the city' (article/preposition). 'loves' is incorrect with plural subject 'we' — use 'love' (subject-verb agreement). Suggest: use simple present for repeated actions and match verb to subject: 'we love.'

× So we love to take photos of building.

✓ So we love to take photos of buildings.

'building' should be plural 'buildings' because 'photos of buildings' refers to multiple structures (singular/plural issue). Suggest using plural nouns when referring generally to more than one item: 'photos of buildings.'

× He is of course. There is a building that I wanted to visit that was a toddler in located in Kathmandu capital city of Nepal.

✓ Yes, of course. There is a building that I wanted to visit that is located in Kathmandu, the capital city of Nepal.

'He is of course' is wrong pronoun and structure; use 'Yes, of course.' (pronoun/use). 'was a toddler in located' is garbled; likely intended 'is located' (verb tense/word choice). Use present simple 'is located' for the building's location. Also add article 'the' before 'capital city.' Suggest clear, concise phrasing: 'There is a building I wanted to visit that is located in Kathmandu, the capital city of Nepal.'

× I want to visit that building so badly but my financial condition was not wide in this situation.

✓ I wanted to visit that building so badly but my financial situation was not good at the time.

Mix of tenses: 'I want' should match past context 'I wanted' (past tense issue) if referring to a past inability. 'financial condition was not wide' is incorrect collocation; use 'financial situation was not good' and 'in this situation' -> 'at the time.' Suggest use consistent past tense and natural collocations: 'I wanted to visit... but my financial situation was not good at the time.'

× Well to talk about this question, yes of course I want to live in a tall buildings but sometimes I feel like I grown up in small town and with small houses so I I cannot afford a tall buildings.

✓ Well, to answer this question, yes of course I want to live in a tall building but sometimes I feel like I grew up in a small town with small houses, so I cannot afford a tall building.

Multiple errors: 'to talk about this question' -> 'to answer this question' (sentence structure). 'a tall buildings' mixes singular 'a' with plural 'buildings' — remove plural or article (article errors/singular-plural). 'I feel like I grown up' mixes tenses; use past 'I grew up' (past tense issue). 'small town' needs article 'a.' 'so I I' duplicate word. 'cannot afford a tall buildings' same article/plural error. Suggestions: ensure article matches noun number ('a tall building' or 'tall buildings' without 'a'), use correct past tense 'grew up,' and remove duplicates.