Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammatical errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix verb forms and articles.

Ejemplo: There aren't many tall buildings near my home, but near my college there are several high-rise towers. At night they are lit up and look beautiful, so I often walk along the street to admire them.

Sugerencia: Clarify the sequence and use correct verb forms. Provide one reason and one consequence with linking words to make the answer coherent. Keep it to two or three sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph interesting buildings, especially tall or ornate ones. However, when I review the pictures later they rarely capture the atmosphere, so now I mostly enjoy looking at them in person.

Sugerencia: Reduce hesitation and organize your response: give a clear topic sentence naming a specific building or type, then add 1–2 specific reasons. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g. 'museums', 'architecture', 'well-designed').

Ejemplo: I would like to visit several museums, especially historical ones. Their architecture and interior decoration are very impressive, and I enjoy learning about the history and design behind the exhibits.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar (singular/plural and sentence structure) and avoid repetition. Give one or two specific benefits of living high up using linking words to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building, ideally around the 20th floor, because the view of the city is wonderful. Also, it feels quieter and more peaceful up there, which helps me relax.

× There are not many top buildings near my home, but in the places where I go to the college there have many tall buildings.

✓ There are not many tall buildings near my home, but in the places where I go to college there are many tall buildings.

The sentence mixes plural nouns and auxiliary verb usage. 'Top buildings' is awkward; 'tall buildings' is clearer. More importantly, 'there have many' is ungrammatical: use the existential 'there are' with plural nouns. Also 'go to the college' is unnecessary article; say 'go to college.' Use 'there are' for plural existence.

× They are beautiful in the night and they are shining.

✓ They are beautiful at night and they shine.

Use the prepositional phrase 'at night' not 'in the night.' Also 'they are shining' is grammatically acceptable but 'they shine' is more natural to describe a habitual quality. This corrects adverbial/preposition choice and makes tense/aspect consistent.

× I very like to walk in the street at night and to to look at it and enjoy.

✓ I really like to walk in the street at night and to look at them and enjoy it.

'Very like' is incorrect; use 'really like.' Remove duplicate 'to.' 'Walk in the street' is acceptable but 'walk on the street' or 'walk in the streets' is more natural; kept 'in the street' to preserve meaning. 'Look at it' should match plural 'buildings' so use 'them' or change to singular; also add 'enjoy it' to indicate enjoyment. This fixes adverb use, pronoun agreement, and extra word.

× Actually I take many photos of those high and beautiful little buildings but when I review my photos I think it's not as beautiful as I see so I so the next time I just admiring it.

✓ Actually I take many photos of those tall and beautiful buildings, but when I review my photos I think they are not as beautiful as they appeared in person, so next time I just admire them.

Tense and form issues: 'it's not as beautiful' mismatches plural 'photos'—use 'they are not.' 'As I see' should be past perception 'as they appeared' or 'as I saw them.' 'I so the next time I just admiring it' is ungrammatical: change to 'so next time I just admire them.' Also 'little buildings' contradicts 'high'; using 'tall' is clearer. These corrections fix present tense consistency, pronoun agreement, and verb forms (remove incorrect -ing form 'admiring').

× Yes, uh yes, I have many buildings which I want to like to uh, which I would like to visit.

✓ Yes, I have many buildings that I would like to visit.

The original contains disfluencies and redundant phrases. 'Which I want to like to' is ungrammatical. Simplify to 'that I would like to visit.' This fixes sentence structure and unnecessary repetition.

× Umm, so many museum.

✓ Umm, so many museums.

'Museum' is singular; when indicating quantity use the plural 'museums.' 'So many museum' is a quantifier error—correct to 'so many museums.'

× Yes, the museum, uh, they have very gorgeous out looking and well designed, uh decorating in them and so many historical and architect.

✓ Yes, the museums have very gorgeous exteriors and are well designed, with beautiful decorations and many historical and architectural features.

Pronoun 'they' referring to 'museum' (singular) is inconsistent; use plural 'museums' or change pronoun. 'Out looking' is incorrect; use 'exteriors' or 'outlooks.' 'Decorating in them' is ungrammatical; use 'decorations.' 'So many historical and architect' mixes noun/adjective; use 'historical and architectural features.' This corrects pronoun agreement, noun choices, and word forms.

× Of course, I like to live in a tall buildings, especially about the 20th floor, which can take the whole side of the city.

✓ Of course, I would like to live in a tall building, especially around the 20th floor, which offers a view of the whole side of the city.

'A tall buildings' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'a tall building' or 'tall buildings' without 'a.' 'About the 20th floor' is better expressed as 'around the 20th floor.' 'Which can take the whole side of the city' is awkward—use 'offers a view of the whole side of the city.' This fixes singular/plural agreement and improves phrasing.

× That makes me makes me feel quiet and calm and relaxed.

✓ That makes me feel quiet, calm, and relaxed.

Duplicate 'makes me' should be removed. 'Quiet' is used where 'quiet' as an adjective is acceptable but 'calm' and 'relaxed' are redundant—kept for emphasis. Also add commas for separation. This corrects redundancy and adjective usage.