Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) and give one or two specific reasons or examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete clauses. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' correctly and complete the sentence.

Ejemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home. Although we live in the city, most structures are low-rise residential blocks because the area was developed for families rather than high-density offices.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and then provide specific details about why and what you photograph. Use correct word order for questions and statements, and avoid mixing question form into a statement. Use linking words like 'because' to connect reasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings because I’m fascinated by their structure and design. For example, I like capturing the contrast between old brick facades and modern glass fronts when I walk through the city.

Sugerencia: Be specific about the building and explain why you want to visit it with sensitive phrasing when mentioning tragedies. Avoid repetition and give one or two clear reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'although'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the 9/11 Memorial and Museum in New York because it is a significant place for learning about recent history and honoring victims. Although the events were tragic, I believe visiting would help me understand the memorial's design and the stories it tells.

Sugerencia: Give a clear opinion sentence and then provide concise, specific reasons. Correct phrasing: explain privacy concerns and neighborhood issues clearly. Use a linking word like 'because' and avoid redundant words.

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I value privacy and prefer a standalone house. Also, high-rise living can be noisy and crowded, whereas a house usually offers a quieter environment and a private garden.

× Around in my home actually, actually you will. You wouldn't see any tall buildings even though we are in the city because.

✓ Actually, around my home you wouldn't see any tall buildings, even though we are in the city.

The original has disfluent word order and redundant words. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Reorder subject and adverb phrase: 'Around my home' or 'Around my home you' and remove repeated 'actually' and the unnecessary 'will'. Use a single coherent clause: 'you wouldn't see any tall buildings' and attach the contrast 'even though we are in the city' to show contrast. Suggestion: plan the sentence before speaking, avoid repeating filler words, and use a clear subject-verb-object order.

× I take photos in the building since I am amazed how the structure is made or how does the what is the design of the building itself?

✓ I take photos of buildings because I am amazed by how the structures are made and by the design of the buildings.

Multiple issues: incorrect preposition and question word order, but primarily misuse of verb forms and sentence structure (ID 10). Use 'take photos of' not 'in', replace 'since' with 'because' for causal relation, change 'amazed how the structure is made' to 'amazed by how the structures are made' and convert the remaining fragment into a statement 'and by the design of the buildings.' Avoid mixing a question-form word order ('how does the what is the design') in a statement. Suggestion: choose either a statement or a question and use correct prepositions (of, by) and parallel structure for multiple reasons.

× Yes, there is. There is actually a building I like to visit, one of the buildings that I'd like to visit. This is the building that is known for 911 since it is a pretty big building, even though there's a tragic that happened there.

✓ Yes, there is. There is a building I would like to visit. It is known for 9/11 and is quite large, although a tragic event happened there.

Repetition and awkward clauses create sentence structure errors (ID 26). Remove redundancy ('a building I like to visit' and 'one of the buildings that I'd like to visit' repeat the idea). Use clear references and natural phrasing: 'It is known for 9/11' (use numeral and avoid 'since' which can be ambiguous), 'and is quite large' for description, and 'although a tragic event happened there' for contrast. Suggestion: avoid repeating the same idea, use concise clauses, and choose appropriate connectors ('although' for contrast).

× I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because it's very near for a near neighborhood and I would like a privacy that's why I prefer a house.

✓ I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because it is too close to other houses in the neighborhood, and I would like privacy, so I prefer a house.

Multiple issues including incorrect modal phrasing and preposition use; main error is modal / phrasing (ID 4). 'I wouldn't like to live' is acceptable but more natural is 'I would not like to live' or 'I don't want to live'. 'Very near for a near neighborhood' is ungrammatical: use 'too close to other houses in the neighborhood.' 'A privacy' is incorrect article use; 'privacy' is uncountable and needs no article. Combine ideas using 'so' to show result. Suggestion: use natural modal constructions ('I wouldn't like' or 'I don't want'), correct prepositions ('close to'), and remember that 'privacy' is uncountable so omit 'a'.

× I take photos in the building since I am amazed how the structure is made or how does the what is the design of the building itself?

✓ I take photos of buildings because I am amazed by how the structures are made and by the design of the buildings.

The original uses the wrong prepositions (ID 11): 'take photos in the building' should be 'take photos of buildings' and 'amazed how' should be 'amazed by how'. Also use 'by the design' to express cause of amazement. Suggestion: learn common verb+preposition collocations (take photos of, amazed by) and use them consistently.