Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Corrigez les erreurs grammaticales et améliorez la clarté. Par exemple, utilisez le singulier/pluriel correct et reformulez les phrases maladroites. Raccourcissez légèrement pour éviter la redondance et assurez une phrase thématique claire suivie d'un détail précis.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are a few high-rise apartment buildings near my neighborhood. They were built recently, so they look modern and well designed. I don't live in one, but they have definitely changed the skyline and made the area feel more urban.

Sugerencia: Corrigez le mot erroné (« boarding ») et faites un lien plus clair entre l'habitude et un exemple précis. Utilisez un mot plus précis pour décrire le type de bâtiments et une conjonction pour relier l'idée générale à l'exemple.

Ejemplo: Yes, I take photos occasionally. I usually photograph buildings with unique architecture or impressive designs, for example old churches or modern museums when I travel. I enjoy capturing places that blend historical charm with contemporary style.

Sugerencia: Corrigez le vocabulaire inapproprié (ex: « skycropper ») et enrichissez par un détail concret sur ce que vous attendez de la visite. Gardez les réponses naturelles et évitez la répétition de l'idée de « voir en personne » sans précision.

Ejemplo: Yes, I'd love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. It's an iconic skyscraper, and I'd like to go to the observation deck to see the city and desert spread out below. Seeing the building's engineering up close would be an unforgettable experience.

Sugerencia: Améliorez la précision grammaticale et la fluidité en ajoutant les articles manquants et en reliant les idées par une conjonction. Ajoutez un exemple concret de « bonnes installations » pour montrer la spécificité.

Ejemplo: Yes, I think I would. Living on a higher floor would give me a beautiful view and a quieter environment away from street noise. As long as the building is safe and has good facilities, such as a gym and reliable elevators, I'd really enjoy that lifestyle.

× Yes, there are a few high rise apartment buildings near my neighborhood.

✓ Yes, there are a few high-rise apartment buildings near my neighborhood.

The compound adjective 'high-rise' should be hyphenated when modifying a noun. This is not strictly singular/plural but relates to correct form of the compound; keep plural 'buildings' as is. Use hyphen to clarify adjective use.

× Most of them were built quite recently so they look modern and well designed.

✓ Most of them were built quite recently, so they look modern and well-designed.

Add a comma before 'so' when connecting clauses; 'well-designed' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. Tense 'were built' (past) with present result 'look' is correct.

× Although I don't live in one, they're definitely change.

✓ Although I don't live in one, they definitely change the skyline of the area.

Original sentence lacks an appropriate noun after 'change'; 'definitely change' needs an object. Added 'the skyline of the area' to complete meaning and make sentence grammatically correct.

× The skyline amid the area feel more urban.

✓ The skyline in the area feels more urban.

Use correct preposition 'in' rather than 'amid the area' for natural English. Subject 'skyline' is singular so verb must be 'feels' (subject-verb agreement). 'In the area' is the correct phrase.

× Yes, occasionally. I usually take photos when I come across boarding with the unique architecture or an impressive design.

✓ Yes, occasionally. I usually take photos when I come across buildings with unique architecture or an impressive design.

'Boarding' is incorrect noun here; use 'buildings'. Remove 'the' before 'unique architecture' because it's general; 'with unique architecture' is correct.

× I enjoy capturing places that have a combination of historical charm and modern style, especially when I'm traveling.

✓ I enjoy capturing places that combine historical charm and modern style, especially when I'm traveling.

Both versions are acceptable; revised to a slightly more concise structure using 'combine'. No tense change necessary.

× Yes, I'd love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. It's an iconic skycropper and the view from the observation deck must be breathtaking.

✓ Yes, I'd love to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai. It's an iconic skyscraper, and the view from the observation deck must be breathtaking.

'Skycropper' is a misspelling; correct word is 'skyscraper'. Added comma before 'and' joining two independent clauses.

× I've seen plenty of photos and videos, so experiencing it in person would be.

✓ I've seen plenty of photos and videos, so experiencing it in person would be amazing.

Sentence ends incomplete with 'would be.' Added 'amazing' to complete the comparative clause and convey intended meaning.

× Yes I think I would, living on higher floor would give me a beautiful view and quieter environment away from street noises.

✓ Yes, I think I would. Living on a higher floor would give me a beautiful view and a quieter environment away from street noise.

Add commas and separate into two sentences for clarity. Use 'a higher floor' (article), 'a quieter environment' (article), and 'street noise' (uncountable, singular) not 'street noises'.

× As long as building is safe and has good facilities I'd really enjoy that lifestyle.

✓ As long as the building is safe and has good facilities, I'd really enjoy that lifestyle.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'building'. Added comma before main clause. Ensure subject is specific with 'the building'.