Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question. Begin with a direct topic sentence (yes/no or a short description), then add one specific supporting detail. Keep it concise and relevant. Use linking words if you add extra information.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, a 20-storey apartment block is just two streets away, and it has shops on the ground floor so I often buy supplies there.

Sugerencia: The answer is confusing and off-topic in parts. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no), then give one or two specific reasons and an example. Use correct nouns and simple sentence structure to improve clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I sometimes take photos of buildings because I appreciate architectural details. For example, last year I photographed an old Catholic church because its decorations and stained glass were very beautiful.

Sugerencia: Your answer shows the idea but uses incorrect phrases and unclear expressions. Give a direct response, then add a specific reason and one detail about what you expect. Avoid unrelated words and keep sentences simple and logical with linking words like because or for example.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower because it is an iconic landmark. I expect the view from the top to be amazing, and I would like to see the whole city spread out below.

Sugerencia: The answer does not respond to the question and is not understandable. Start with a clear yes/no or a short opinion, give one reason and a concrete detail (comfort, view, noise, convenience). Keep sentences short and grammatically correct.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I prefer a quiet environment. For example, I would rather live in a low-rise house with a garden so I can relax outdoors.

× And buy supplies that way.

✓ I buy supplies that way.

The original sentence lacked a subject and used an inappropriate conjunction 'And' at the start, creating a fragment. Adding the subject 'I' makes it a complete sentence and fits the context of answering the question about nearby tall buildings. Suggestion: Always include an explicit subject and verb in short answers, e.g., 'I buy supplies that way.'

× Because I like and I feel like oh, when do I go to work and often take food to kitchen when I'm traveling.

✓ I like taking photos, and I feel that when I go to work or travel, I often bring food to the kitchen.

The original sentence is a run-on with unclear clause structure and missing gerund forms. 'Because' began a subordinate clause without a main clause. 'Take food to kitchen' misses the article 'the' and needs consistent verb forms. Using gerund 'taking' clarifies the activity and restructuring into two coordinated clauses fixes the sentence. Suggestion: Avoid starting answers with 'Because' unless you provide a complete main clause; use gerunds for activities (e.g., 'I like taking photos').

× For example, I photograph an old Catholic test girl last year because it was decoration was beautiful.

✓ For example, I photographed an old Catholic church last year because its decorations were beautiful.

Multiple errors: wrong noun 'test girl' seems to be a misrecognition and should be 'church'. Tense should be past ('photographed') to match 'last year'. Possessive 'its' is needed instead of 'it was' and plural 'decorations' matches 'were'. Suggestion: Match verb tense to time expressions, use possessive pronouns for attributes (its decorations), and ensure correct nouns are used.

× Yes, you are a beautiful thing that I would like to visit and I like to visit Eiffel Tower.

✓ Yes, there is a beautiful building I would like to visit, and I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower.

The original incorrectly uses 'you are' addressing the examiner and calls them a 'thing.' The response should refer to a building, so 'there is' or 'a beautiful building' is appropriate. Also the Eiffel Tower needs the definite article 'the'. Suggestion: Refer to objects with appropriate nouns, avoid addressing the examiner as 'you' for describing places, and use 'the' with famous landmarks like 'the Eiffel Tower.'

× Perfect ironic routine and I think the view from the top will be amazing.

✓ It would be a perfect, iconic structure, and I think the view from the top would be amazing.

The phrase 'Perfect ironic routine' is nonsensical; likely intended 'perfect iconic structure'. Also modal consistency: use 'would' to express hypothetical desire. Commas and adjective order ('perfect, iconic structure') clarify meaning. Suggestion: Choose precise adjectives and maintain consistent modality (would/will) for hypothetical or conditional statements.

× You are 1200. The building is taller the the view is tower.

✓ No, I would not want to live in a tall building. The Eiffel Tower is about 1,200 feet tall and offers great views from the top.

The original is unintelligible: 'You are 1200' and 'taller the the view is tower' are fragments and pronoun misuse. Interpreting intent: student likely tried to refer to the Eiffel Tower's height. Provide a clear negative answer to the question plus factual statement. Use correct units and articles and fix word order. Suggestion: Answer the question directly ('No, I would not want to live in a tall building' or 'Yes, I would') and if giving factual details, state them in a clear, grammatically correct sentence.