Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and unclear phrases, use correct names and simple descriptive vocabulary, and add one specific detail with a linking word. Also correct grammar (plural/singular, word choice).

Ejemplo: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home, including Landmark 81. For example, Landmark 81 is very tall and has a modern glass exterior, so it stands out in the skyline.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use correct tense and articles. Use linking words to explain why and give one specific example. Avoid irrelevant or unclear details and casual phrases like 'very funny'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of interesting buildings because I like architecture. For instance, I photographed a pink building near Pathu Park because its unusual shape and color made it memorable.

Sugerencia: Give a clear statement and correct factual and vocabulary errors. Use present tense when appropriate and link reasons with connectors. Be specific about activities and avoid unrelated words ('fur').

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Vietnam because it is the tallest building in the country. Moreover, I heard it has observation decks and shopping areas, so I could enjoy the view and try local food there.

Sugerencia: Respond directly and use accurate vocabulary (e.g., 'fear of heights'). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific personal example using linking words. Reduce hesitation and repetition.

Ejemplo: No, I would not like to live in a tall building because I have a fear of heights. For example, when I climb a mountain with friends and look down, I feel very dizzy and anxious, so high places make me uncomfortable.

× Too much specific.

✓ Too many specific buildings.

The phrase 'Too much' is used with uncountable nouns; 'specific' here refers to countable 'buildings', so use 'too many'. Also 'specific' as a noun is incorrect; use 'specific buildings' to clarify meaning. Suggestion: use 'too many' with plural countable nouns and place the noun after the adjective.

× It was Lamech 40, Landmark 81 SA Skycropper.

✓ They are Lamech 40 and Landmark 81, SA Skycraper.

The sentence mixes singular 'It was' with multiple buildings and uses incorrect word 'Skycropper'. Use plural 'they are' for multiple buildings and correct the name to 'Skycraper'. Also use 'and' to list items. Suggestion: match pronoun number to the subject and spell proper nouns correctly.

× Very tall and very maturity.

✓ Very tall and very modern.

'Maturity' is a noun meaning 'ripeness' and does not function as an adjective here. Likely intended was 'modern' or 'well-built'. Use adjectives to describe buildings. Suggestion: choose appropriate adjectives (tall, modern, impressive).

× I sent him two photo of the buildings because I think they are designed so cool and I want to have them in my collection of very weird building like the pink one I found near Pathu park.

✓ I sent him two photos of the buildings because I think they are designed so coolly and I want to have them in my collection of very weird buildings, like the pink one I found near Pathu Park.

Use plural 'photos' and 'buildings' for countable nouns. 'Designed so cool' is informal and mixes adjective/adverb use; 'coolly' is an adverb but 'designed so cool' could be better as 'designed so well' or 'that look so cool'. Also capitalize 'Park' if part of a proper name. Suggestion: ensure nouns match plurality and use adverbs to modify verbs.

× It's very funny.

✓ It's very unusual/interesting.

While 'funny' is grammatical, in this context describing a building 'funny' may be ambiguous. Suggest using 'unusual' or 'interesting' for clarity. This is a style suggestion to improve precision.

× I think if I can visit a building I want to visit the landmark 81 in Vietnam because it was the tallest building skycropper in Vietnam and it had many fun thing to do like skateboarding, parkour side and even some very delicious fur.

✓ I think if I could visit a building, I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Vietnam because it is the tallest skyscraper in Vietnam and it has many fun things to do like skateboarding, parkour, and even some very delicious food.

Several issues: conditional meaning requires 'could' and 'would like' rather than 'can' and 'want'. Use present tense 'is' and 'has' when describing current facts. 'Skycropper' is misspelled; correct is 'skyscraper'. 'Fun thing' should be plural 'fun things'. 'Parkour side' is unclear; use 'parkour' alone. 'Fur' is a noun unrelated to food; likely intended 'food'. Suggestion: use appropriate conditional forms, correct noun forms, and accurate vocabulary.

× Uh I don't think I want to live in a tall building because I have fear of high and I I can easily panic by height.

✓ I don't think I want to live in a tall building because I am afraid of heights and I can easily panic at great heights.

Use the adjective 'afraid' and the plural noun 'heights' for the phobia. 'Have fear of high' is ungrammatical. Also 'panic by height' is incorrect preposition; use 'panic at' or 'panic when at' followed by 'heights'. Suggestion: use standard collocations 'afraid of heights' and 'panic at heights'.

× For example when I climb mountain with my friend, when I look down I feel like I will drop every moment so I hate high place.

✓ For example, when I climbed a mountain with my friend, when I looked down I felt like I would fall at any moment, so I hate high places.

Narration of a past event requires past tense verbs: 'climbed', 'looked', 'felt'. 'I will drop every moment' is awkward; use 'I would fall at any moment'. 'High place' should be plural 'high places'. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent when describing past experiences and use natural collocations.