Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần ngắn gọn, mạch lạc và đúng ngữ pháp. Tránh lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ “fuse building” là sai) và cấu trúc rời rạc. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể. Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “few buildings/small buildings” và sửa ngữ pháp (because → so, or because).

Ejemplo: No, there are no tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. Most of the area is covered by rice fields and only a few small houses, although there are taller buildings in more developed towns nearby.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá tốt nhưng cần gọn hơn và sửa vài lỗi nhỏ (thừa chữ “I” và lặp từ). Hạn chế dùng nhiều câu ngắn lắp ráp; dùng liên từ để nối ý mạch lạc. Có thể thêm một ví dụ cụ thể và giới hạn độ dài dưới 5 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I enjoy interesting architecture and shapes. For example, when I visit old towns or big cities, I always photograph historic houses and modern skyscrapers. I usually do this while traveling to capture memorable details.

Sugerencia: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng cần sửa ngữ pháp và tên gọi chính xác (Landmark 81). Nên mở rộng thêm một lý do cụ thể vì sao muốn đến thăm (ví dụ: view, thiết kế, trải nghiệm). Giữ tối đa 2–3 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City because it is the tallest building in Vietnam. I would love to go to the observation deck to enjoy panoramic views of the city and learn about its modern design.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời có mâu thuẫn nhẹ (bắt đầu phủ định rồi lại khẳng định). Nên trình bày rõ quan điểm chính, sau đó nêu lý do ủng hộ hoặc phản đối với liên từ phù hợp. Thêm cụ thể về nỗi lo (ví dụ: haze, elevators, safety) để thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: Not really; I have some reservations because I worry about haze and safety in very tall buildings. However, I admit the idea of living high up appeals to me because I could enjoy fantastic views of the whole city.

× No, because I live in the countryside so here most of the rice fields and fuse building but in more developed areas there.

✓ No, because I live in the countryside, so there are mostly rice fields and few buildings; those are in more developed areas.

The original sentence has sentence structure and word choice problems. It omits the verb 'are' for existence (There be issue), uses 'most of' incorrectly and 'fuse' is a misspelling of 'few'. The corrected sentence adds 'there are' to show existence, uses 'mostly' for distribution, corrects 'few buildings', and reorganizes clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use 'there are' when describing existence and check adjective choice and spelling. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Well, yes, I often take photos of buildings because I like interesting architecture and shapes.

✓ Well, yes, I often take photos of buildings because I like interesting architecture and shapes.

This sentence is correct. It properly uses the verb 'take' and the infinitive 'to take' is not required. No change needed. Grammar problem type ID:8

× For example, I when I visit old towns or big cities I always take pictures of historic houses and modern skyscrapers.

✓ For example, when I visit old towns or big cities, I always take pictures of historic houses and modern skyscrapers.

The original sentence has a misplaced word order: 'I when I visit' is incorrect. The clause 'when I visit' should come before or after the subject with proper punctuation. The correction moves 'when I visit' to the correct position and adds a comma for clarity. Suggestion: place time clauses before or after the main clause with correct punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:26

× And I do it sometimes when I travel.

✓ I also do it sometimes when I travel.

The sentence is understandable but word order is awkward. Placing 'also' improves fluency. Tense 'do' matches present habitual action, so keep present tense. Suggestion: use 'also' rather than beginning with 'And' and maintain natural adverb placement. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I would like to visit landmark 81 buildings in Ho Chi Minh City, which is the tallest building of Vietnam.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81 in Ho Chi Minh City, which is the tallest building in Vietnam.

Problems: misuse of plural 'buildings' for a named singular building and article/preposition choice 'of Vietnam' is better as 'in Vietnam'. Proper noun 'Landmark 81' is a single building. The correction uses the correct name and preposition. Suggestion: use correct singular for named buildings and 'in' to indicate location within a country. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Not really because I'm afraid of haze, but I do want to live in a tall building so I can go up to see the view of the whole city.

✓ Not really, because I'm afraid of haze; but I would like to live in a tall building so I can go up and see the view of the whole city.

Original is understandable but has punctuation and modal inconsistency. 'Do want' is acceptable but 'would like' is more natural when expressing preference. Replacing 'go up to see' with 'go up and see' improves verb connection. Suggestion: use appropriate modal verb for preferences and connect verbs with 'and' for sequential actions. Grammar problem type ID:26