Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is clear, relevant and well-structured with a topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, correct small grammatical issues and choose more precise vocabulary (e.g., say “stand out” not “stand down”), and avoid minor repetition. Also vary sentence openings with linking words (for example, “however” you used correctly) and keep responses concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Ejemplo: I live near the city center, so there are several tall buildings nearby. Most are office towers and apartment blocks, which give the area a modern, lively feel. However, during rush hour the streets can feel crowded and noisy.

Sugerencia: Content is relevant but contains grammar and word-choice errors that affect clarity (e.g., “had that stand down” is incorrect; “a great way” not “the great way”). Improve by using precise phrases and correct tense, and add a linking phrase to connect ideas. Aim for short, specific details (what buildings, where, why).

Ejemplo: Yes, occasionally I take photos of buildings with unique architecture or historical importance. In particular, I like structures that stand out from their surroundings or reflect the city’s culture, because photography helps me preserve memories and appreciate architectural details.

Sugerencia: Good direct answer with clear reasons and supporting details. To refine, be slightly more specific (name a particular castle or temple) and use a smoother linking word when moving to the second reason (for example, “also” or “furthermore”). Ensure adjective use is natural (e.g., “atmospheric” is fine).

Ejemplo: Yes. I would love to visit a historic castle, for example Edinburgh Castle, to learn about its history and admire its stone architecture. I also think walking through its rooms and hearing stories of past events would be both educational and atmospheric.

Sugerencia: The transcript does not contain your actual answer to this question — instead it shows examiner feedback. Because there is no student response to evaluate, provide a direct answer with 1 topic sentence and 2–3 supporting sentences (reasons, examples). Use relevant vocabulary (e.g., “high-rise,” “amenities,” “privacy”) and correct grammar.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it often offers stunning views and good amenities like gyms and security. However, I might be concerned about noise and limited outdoor space, so I would choose an upper-floor apartment with balcony access.

× In particular, I'm attracted to the buildings that had that stand down from the surroundings or reflect the culture of the city.

✓ In particular, I'm attracted to the buildings that stand out from the surroundings or reflect the culture of the city.

The original sentence contains an incorrect past participle phrase 'had that stand down' which is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is present and general, so use the simple present verb 'stand out' to describe a characteristic (these buildings stand out). Remove the extraneous words 'had that' and replace 'stand down' with the correct phrasal verb 'stand out'. Also keep 'reflect' in simple present to match the general truth.

× For me, photography is the great way to preserve memories and appreciate an impressive piece of architecture.

✓ For me, photography is a great way to preserve memories and appreciate an impressive piece of architecture.

Using the definite article 'the' before 'great way' implies a specific unique way, which is not intended. The correct form is the indefinite article 'a great way' to indicate one of many possible good ways. This fixes article misuse and improves naturalness.