Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific supporting details, and avoid repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas. Also correct number agreement and use plural forms properly.

Ejemplo: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home because I live close to the city center. For example, about ten apartment towers and a couple of office blocks line the main road, so the area feels quite urban.

Sugerencia: Give a clear reason and a brief example. Keep it concise (1 topic sentence + 1 supporting detail) and use linking words to make it coherent. Avoid unfinished sentences and vague phrases like "something."

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find their architecture beautiful and striking. For instance, when I go shopping with my family we usually walk past an old cathedral and I like to take pictures of its façade.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear answer naming a specific building and give a coherent reason with one or two concrete details. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep sentences grammatical and focused.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Burj Khalifa in Dubai because it is the tallest building in the world; from the observation deck you can see the whole city and the sea, which would be an amazing view.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and give one clear reason with specific details. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., fire escape, evacuation) and avoid repetition and vague words like "nasty." Organize into 1–2 sentences and use linking words (because, so).

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because I worry about emergency situations; for example, evacuating from high floors during a fire can be difficult and stressful.

× There are 10 building, 10 tall buildings near my home because my home is near the city, so it has a lot of building around my house, yeah.

✓ There are 10 buildings, 10 tall buildings, near my home because my home is near the city, so there are a lot of buildings around my house.

The noun 'building' is plural when referring to more than one; use 'buildings'. Also replace 'it has' with 'there are' to correctly refer to multiple buildings. Suggestion: always add -s for plural nouns and match verbs/expressions to plural subjects.

× Yes, I take photos of buildings. I think the building is so beautiful and because it's really tall, definitely. So I think I always go there with my family, like go shopping or something. We always.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings. I think the buildings are very beautiful and really tall. I often go there with my family to go shopping or for other activities.

Use present simple consistently: 'building is' should be plural 'buildings are' to match subject. 'Very' is more natural than 'so' here and move 'definitely'. 'Always' placed before the main verb as 'I always go' or use 'often' for frequency. Complete the sentence to avoid fragment. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and place adverbs before main verbs.

× Yes, it is a building that I would like to visit because I think I know that everyone just show you about their specific, but the building is the higher place for me that I go there to see the sky to see something.

✓ Yes, there is a building that I would like to visit because I feel it is special; it is the tallest place for me where I can go to see the sky and the view.

Use 'there is' to introduce existence rather than 'it is'. 'Everyone just show you about their specific' is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and verbs. Replace with clearer phrasing. Use 'where' to introduce purpose/place. Suggestion: use 'there is/are' to state existence and 'where' for place clauses; keep pronouns clear and match verbs.

× I think I don't want to live in a tall building because when we have a fire firework, we always don't know how to go to the UPS, the downstairs, because if we are live in a tall building we should know it's have a lot of nasty.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because in case of a fire we might not know how to get downstairs. If we lived in a tall building, we should know the safety procedures because there can be many hazards.

Use correct tense and modal verbs: 'I think I don't want' can be simplified to 'I don't want'. 'When we have a fire firework' is incorrect—use 'in case of a fire'. 'Always don't know' is ungrammatical; use 'might not know'. 'Are live' should be 'lived' for hypothetical; 'it's have' should be 'there can be' or 'it can have'. 'Nasty' is informal and vague; use 'hazards' or 'dangers'. Suggestion: use conditional/past modal for hypothetical situations and choose precise nouns for risks.