Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and directly answer first, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and overly long phrases. Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas and keep sentences to a maximum of 3–4. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g., "my home is in the city centre" instead of repeated "around my home").

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in the city centre, so there are many tall, modern buildings nearby. For example, a shopping complex and several office towers stand within a five-minute walk of my house.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and avoid filler words (uh). Give a clear reason and one specific example of when or what you photograph. Use proper tense and simple, correct structures (e.g., "I keep pictures" or "I take photos to study architectural styles"). Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings near my home because I admire their design. For instance, I recently took photos of a historic library to study its stonework and decorative windows.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer naming the type of building you want to visit, then give a specific reason and one example. Avoid repetition (do not repeat words like "ancient" many times). Use linking words such as "because" or "for example" and keep sentences clear and grammatical.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit historical buildings, especially old forts and temples, because they tell the story of my country's past. For example, I want to tour the old royal fort to learn about architecture and ancient daily life.

Sugerencia: Answer directly (Yes/No) then support with one clear reason and an example. Avoid incomplete sentences and awkward endings. Use linking phrases like "but" and "because" correctly, and keep to 2–3 sentences to be natural and effective.

Ejemplo: No, I would prefer to live in a small house with my family because it feels quieter and encourages closer relationships. For example, in a small home we can share meals and talk more often, which helps us stay close.

× Yes, there are a lot of big and beautiful tall buildings near my home as my home is in the center of the city which is filled with numerous houses around my home and the homes around my home are really big.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of tall, beautiful buildings near my home because it is in the centre of the city, which is filled with numerous houses, and the houses nearby are very big.

The original repeats nouns unnecessarily ('homes around my home' and 'the homes around my home') and uses plural/singular awkwardly. 'Homes around my home are really big' is wordy; use 'houses nearby are very big'. Also adjust word order 'big and beautiful tall' to 'tall, beautiful' for natural adjective order. Suggestion: remove repetition and streamline noun phrases.

× Yes, there are numerous beautiful buildings, uh around my home and I love taking pictures of them because they are so beautiful and I feel like in future I will also make that kind of buildings. Uh, so for that I had keep picture.

✓ Yes, there are numerous beautiful buildings around my home and I love taking pictures of them because they are so beautiful, and I feel that in the future I will also design such buildings. So, for that I have kept pictures.

Several issues: 'make that kind of buildings' is unnatural; use 'design such buildings' (verb choice). 'I had keep picture' is grammatically incorrect: use present perfect 'I have kept pictures' to indicate possession of photos for future reference. 'In future' → 'in the future'. Also remove filler 'uh' and correct plural 'pictures'.

× Yes, there are a lot of buildings which are related to the history of my country. So I would like to visit those type of buildings in the future to gain the knowledge about my ancient, ancient, ancient periods and.

✓ Yes, there are many buildings related to the history of my country, so I would like to visit those types of buildings in the future to learn about ancient periods.

Use 'many' or 'a lot of' with 'buildings' is fine but 'those type of buildings' should be 'those types of buildings' (plural agreement). 'Gain the knowledge about my ancient, ancient, ancient periods' is repetitive and ungrammatical; simplify to 'learn about ancient periods'. Also remove trailing 'and'.

× I really enjoy watching the tall buildings, but I prefer living in a small home with my family members because a small home can give you a peaceful environment and healthy relationship with your family. Then living in the tall building with.

✓ I really enjoy looking at tall buildings, but I prefer living in a small home with my family because a small home can provide a peaceful environment and foster healthy relationships. I would not prefer living in a tall building.

Problems: 'watching the tall buildings' is unnatural; use 'looking at' or 'admiring'. 'Family members' can be shortened to 'family'. Sentence 'Then living in the tall building with.' is incomplete and lacks a verb and object—fixed by adding a clear contrasting clause. Also change 'give you' to 'provide' and 'healthy relationship' to plural 'healthy relationships'.