Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 回答要更直接并且注意语法与时态，一至两句开门见山说明情况，随后用一两句具体细节支持。避免重复和含糊的表达，例如‘built by 50 years ago’应改为‘built about 50 years ago’。使用连词让句子更连贯，如‘however’或‘while’。

Ejemplo: There aren't many tall buildings near my home. Most nearby buildings were built around 50 years ago and are low-rise, while a few newer ones, built recently, reach about ten storeys.

Sugerencia: 回答要自然且言之有物。先直接回答，再给出1–2个具体原因并用连接词衔接。注意词汇选择和语法（例如‘natural and people’应为‘nature and people’，‘quite bored’应为‘quite boring’或‘I get bored’）。

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking photos of nature and people because they feel more dynamic, whereas buildings are static and I quickly get bored with them.

Sugerencia: 回答应更简洁并正确使用句子结构。先直接说想去哪个建筑，然后给出具体理由或背景。避免冗长重复，如‘I have to go there once’可改为‘I would like to visit it someday’。

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Taipei 101 in Taipei City. It's a famous landmark in my hometown and I've never been inside, so I'd like to go someday to see the view from the observation deck.

Sugerencia: 直接给出立场并用具体、连贯的理由支持。注意语法（例如‘the disadvantage is more than advantage’应为‘the disadvantages outweigh the advantages’），用更自然的表达描述担忧，并可补充一两条其他原因。

Ejemplo: No, I wouldn't want to live in a tall building because the disadvantages outweigh the advantages. For example, earthquakes could cause severe shaking, which is frightening, and evacuating quickly from a high floor could be difficult; plus, I prefer easier access to outdoor spaces.

× most of the buildings nearby my home are not really tall because they are built by 50 years ago, at least recently.

✓ Most of the buildings near my home are not very tall because they were built about 50 years ago, at least until recently.

句子使用了不正确的过去时表达和介词短语。应使用被动过去式“were built”来表示建筑在过去被建造，不能用“are built by 50 years ago”。“by 50 years ago”也不自然，改为“about 50 years ago”或“around 50 years ago”。另外“nearby my home”顺序不自然，改为“near my home”。建议：用过去式被动描述过去发生的动作，时间短语用“about/around + 时间”更自然。

× Uh, the buildings is newer.

✓ Uh, the building is newer.

主谓不一致。原句中主语“the buildings”（复数）与动词“is”（单数）不一致。根据语境应指代单个新建筑，用单数“the building is newer”；若指多个要改为“the buildings are newer”。建议：确认主语是单数还是复数，动词要相应变化。

× It is taller almost 10 floors than the old one.

✓ It is almost 10 floors taller than the old one.

比较结构的词序错误。比较级短语应为“almost 10 floors taller than...”，而不是“taller almost 10 floors than...”。建议：把数量和程度短语放在比较级形容词之前或之后形成正确顺序，如“almost 10 floors taller than...”。

× I prefer to take natural and people because I like the things which is active and the buildings just stable on the same location.

✓ I prefer to photograph nature and people because I like things that are active, while buildings are just stationary in the same place.

代词和名词使用不当：“take natural”不是正确表达，应为“photograph nature”；“people”作宾语可以，但需要动词匹配。关系从句中“which is active”修饰复数名词时动词应为复数“are active”。“just stable on the same location”不地道，改为“stationary in the same place”。建议：注意可数/不可数名词用法，关系从句中动词要与先行词数一致，使用更自然的搭配如“photograph nature”或“take photos of people”。

× It's quite bored for me.

✓ I find it quite boring.

形容词/副词使用错误。原句“It’s quite bored for me”把“bored”（表示人感到无聊）错误地用作描述事物。应使用“boring”描述事物，或“bored”描述感受者。更自然的表达是“I find it quite boring”或“I'm quite bored by it”。建议：区分情态形容词“bored”(人)与“boring”(事物)。

× There is one I would like to go someday is in Taipei City called Taipei 101 building because it is located in my hometown and I've never been there before so I think I have to go there once to visit it.

✓ One building I would like to visit someday is in Taipei City; it's called Taipei 101. It's located near my hometown, and I've never been there, so I think I should visit it once.

存在结构和句子结构混乱。“There is one I would like to go someday is...”结构重复且不通顺。应改为“One building I would like to visit someday is...”。“Taipei 101 building”也不自然，常说“Taipei 101”或“the Taipei 101 building”。“I have to go there once to visit it”用词和语序不自然，改为“I should visit it once”或“I want to visit it someday”。建议：避免在同一句中重复存在结构，使用清晰的主语+谓语结构，并用自然短语描述计划或愿望。

× I think I have to go there once to visit it.

✓ I think I should go there once to visit it.

情态动词使用不当。“have to”表示强制性义务，而句子表达的是愿望或计划，使用“should”或“want to”更合适。若强调必须可用“have to”，但语境更倾向于愿望。建议：根据语气选择合适情态动词：表示建议/愿望用 should / want to，表示必要性用 have to / must。

× No, I'm not interested in living in a tall building because the disadvantage is more than advantage.

✓ No, I'm not interested in living in a tall building because the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.

情态/比较表达不自然。“the disadvantage is more than advantage”语法和搭配都不对。应使用“disadvantages outweigh the advantages”或“there are more disadvantages than advantages”。建议：使用常见固定搭配“outweigh”或“there are more... than...”来比较利弊。

× If the earthquake comes, it will shake heavily.

✓ If there is an earthquake, it will shake violently.

时态和用词需更自然。“If the earthquake comes”不如“If there is an earthquake”自然；“shake heavily”搭配不佳，改为“shake violently”。建议：条件句第一类使用“If there is ... , it will ...”，动词搭配选择更自然的副词。

× It feels scared for people and it is hard to escape in the short time.

✓ People would feel scared, and it would be hard to escape in a short time.

代词和被动/主动表达问题。“It feels scared for people”把“scared”作为被动形容词使用不当，应把人作为主语“People would feel scared”。“in the short time”不自然，改为“in a short time”。建议：把感受的主体放在主语位置，并用自然时间短语。