Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add one or two concise supporting points. Avoid unnecessary detail about your past employer unless it adds relevance. Use linking words to improve coherence and reduce run-on phrasing.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live near several tall buildings in Pioneer Street, Mandaluyong. For example, there are corporate towers nearby, including offices where I previously worked, and the area is very convenient because shops and transport are within walking distance.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct topic sentence, then briefly explain why and give a specific example or frequency. Use correct collocations ("lighting" not "lightings") and a linking word to connect idea and reason.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially at night. The lighting on the facades is very attractive, so I like to capture the contrast between lights and shadows, for instance when I walk along the riverfront in the evenings.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and sequence events clearly. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "but") to connect ideas and be specific about why you couldn't see the view and what you want to do next. Avoid short, disjointed sentences by combining related information coherently.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to return to Taipei 101 because it is one of the tallest towers in Taiwan and I want to enjoy the observation deck. I visited Taipei last October, but unfortunately I couldn't go up to the viewing platform due to long queues, so next time I plan to buy tickets in advance.

Sugerencia: Begin with a single clear sentence answering the question, then give concise supporting reasons with linking words. Remove repetition and correct small errors ("in the in the", "safer the there"). Mention one or two specific advantages to be more persuasive.

Ejemplo: Yes, I already live in a tall building; I rent a 16th-floor condo. I prefer mid-to-high floors because they feel safer and quieter, and the condominium has 24-hour security and controlled access, which makes me feel more secure.

× I am currently renting an apartment within Pioneer St. Mandaluyong and within the vicinity there are corporate buildings for Accenture where I used to work and it's a good location because everything is accessible.

✓ I am currently renting an apartment on Pioneer St., Mandaluyong, and in the vicinity there are corporate buildings for Accenture where I used to work; it's a good location because everything is accessible.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'within' used for a street/address and punctuation/connector issues. Use 'on' for streets and 'in the vicinity' (or 'nearby') for location. Also add commas and a semicolon to separate clauses for clarity. Suggestion: use 'on Pioneer St., Mandaluyong' and 'in the vicinity' and split long sentences into clearer clauses. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Yes, I take photos of buildings, especially at night because the lightings are very pleasing to the eyes and it gives a sense of hope.

✓ Yes, I take photos of buildings, especially at night, because the lighting is very pleasing to the eye and it gives a sense of hope.

Errors: 'lightings' is not correct in this context; 'lighting' is an uncountable noun. 'to the eyes' is awkward; use the singular idiom 'to the eye'. Keep subject-verb agreement: 'lighting ... gives' works because 'lighting' is singular. Suggestion: use uncountable noun 'lighting' and the idiomatic 'to the eye'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× I would like to go back to Taipei 101 and experience the highest building in Taiwan.

✓ I would like to go back to Taipei 101 and visit the tallest building in Taiwan.

Errors: 'experience the highest building' is unnatural; use 'visit' and 'tallest' as the proper adjective form for comparison. 'Highest' and 'tallest' can both be superlatives, but 'tallest building' is the common collocation. Suggestion: use 'visit the tallest building' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:26

× However, I wasn't able to visit the view.

✓ However, I wasn't able to visit the observation deck to see the view.

Error: 'visit the view' is ungrammatical because 'view' is not a place to visit; you visit a place that offers a view. Clarify by specifying 'observation deck' or 'viewing platform' or say 'I wasn't able to see the view.' Suggestion: use 'see the view' or 'visit the observation deck.' Grammar problem type ID:12

× I am already living in a tall building. I am renting a condo unit on the 16th floor. I feel safer living in the mid floors.

✓ I already live in a tall building. I'm renting a condo unit on the 16th floor. I feel safer living on the middle floors.

Improvements: 'I am already living' is acceptable but 'I already live' is more natural. 'Mid floors' is incorrect; use 'middle floors' or 'on the middle floors' and preposition 'on' for floors. Also contract 'I am' to 'I'm' if spoken. Suggestion: use 'middle floors' and 'on' for location. Grammar problem type ID:6

× What's good about living in the in the condominium is it's safer the there are security personnel.

✓ What's good about living in the condominium is that it's safer because there are security personnel.

Errors: duplicated 'in the', missing conjunction 'that' after 'is', incorrect 'the there are', and unclear comparison. Use 'because' to show reason and include 'that' for a noun clause: 'is that it's safer because there are security personnel.' Suggestion: remove duplicate words and use 'that' and 'because' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22