Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Sửa ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để trả lời rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Sử dụng số ít/ số nhiều đúng (city/cities, building/buildings). (2) Dùng mệnh đề chủ đề ngắn gọn làm câu mở (topic sentence), rồi bổ sung chi tiết bằng một câu hỗ trợ. (3) Tránh các cụm từ lặp và từ không cần thiết. (4) Dùng từ vựng phù hợp như "apartments", "office buildings", "more than ten floors".

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. Most are apartment and office buildings, and several of them have more than ten floors.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện tính mạch lạc và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No) rồi giải thích bằng 1–2 câu. (2) Sử dụng liên từ đúng (however, but, if) và cấu trúc điều kiện đơn giản (if + clause). (3) Dùng danh từ số nhiều khi cần (photos, landscapes) và cụm từ phù hợp như "a beautiful building" hoặc "a striking background".

Ejemplo: No, not really. I usually take photos of landscapes, but if I see a particularly beautiful building or an interesting background, I would try to photograph it.

Sugerencia: Làm rõ thì và chọn từ chính xác; tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và cải thiện độ tự nhiên. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng động từ đúng thì/động từ nguyên mẫu sau "look forward to" (looking forward to + -ing). (2) Kết hợp các câu ngắn thành câu mạch lạc bằng liên từ hoặc phân từ. (3) Dùng tính từ phù hợp: "warm city" có thể không phù hợp — nếu ý là "vibrant" hoặc "beautiful" thì dùng từ đó. (4) Giữ độ dài tối đa 3–4 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I’m looking forward to visiting Landmark 81, the tallest tower in Vietnam. I want to go up to the observation deck to enjoy the stunning view of the city, which I think will be really exciting.

Sugerencia: Trả lời rõ ràng theo câu hỏi và tránh lặp ý với câu trước. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp có/không rồi giải thích lý do. (2) Sử dụng cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác (e.g. "it is the tallest tower" -> "it is the tallest tower" và động từ chia phù hợp "offers"). (3) Dùng từ đúng (observation deck, not dance). (4) Nếu muốn nói về sống trong tòa cao tầng, nêu lợi ích và bất lợi ngắn gọn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it usually offers great views and modern facilities. However, I would also consider noise and the cost before deciding.

× I live in a big cities and it is very common to see a tall buildings.

✓ I live in a big city and it is very common to see tall buildings.

Use singular 'city' after 'a big' because 'a' requires a singular noun; remove 'a' before 'tall buildings' since 'buildings' is plural. Suggestion: match articles with noun number and use plural without an article or use 'a tall building' for singular.

× Most of them are. Apartments and office is very towns and properly the over ten floor.

✓ Most of them are apartments and offices located in towns and usually have over ten floors.

Original has fragmented sentence and incorrect nouns and verb forms. Combine ideas into one sentence, use plural nouns 'apartments and offices', plural verb 'have' to match plural subject, and 'floors' plural. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and coherent sentence structure.

× No, I'm not really.

✓ No, not really.

'I'm not really' is incomplete because 'really' modifies a verb; native response is 'Not really.' Suggestion: use 'Not really' to answer negatively without unnecessary 'I am.'

× I tend to take photo of the landscape.

✓ I tend to take photos of landscapes.

Use plural 'photos' when speaking about taking pictures in general and plural 'landscapes' if referring to various scenes. Suggestion: pluralize countable nouns when speaking generally.

× However, if. It's have a beautiful success in the background. I would try to capture about.

✓ However, if it has a beautiful scene in the background, I would try to capture it.

Original contains sentence fragments and wrong words: 'if.' fragment, 'It's have' incorrect verb, 'success' wrong noun, 'capture about' incorrect phrase. Correct to conditional 'if it has' and 'capture it.' Suggestion: form complete conditional clauses and use correct nouns/objects.

× I look forward to visit Landmark 81.

✓ I look forward to visiting Landmark 81.

After 'look forward to' the verb should be in -ing form (present participle). Suggestion: use 'visiting' after this expression.

× It is amazing when I can see the warm city from up there.

✓ It will be amazing to see the city from up there.

Context expresses future desire to visit; use 'will be' or 'would be' and 'to see' for infinitive. 'Warm city' is unusual; using 'the city' is more natural. Suggestion: match tense to intended meaning and use infinitive after adjectives like 'amazing.'

× It's a really exciting.

✓ It's really exciting.

'Exciting' is an adjective and does not require the article 'a' before it when used predicatively. Remove 'a'. Suggestion: say 'It's really exciting' or 'It's a really exciting experience.'

× I look forward to visiting Landmark 81 because it is a tallest tower in Vietnam and offer a spectacular view of the city from the observation dance.

✓ I look forward to visiting Landmark 81 because it is the tallest tower in Vietnam and offers a spectacular view of the city from the observation deck.

Use 'the tallest' with definite article for a unique superlative; 'offers' must agree with singular subject ('tower'); 'deck' is correct noun instead of 'dance'. Suggestion: use 'the' with superlatives, ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct noun vocabulary.