Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the response more natural and concise: give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and a short supporting detail. Avoid hesitations and redundancy.

Ejemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a quiet residential area made up mostly of low-rise houses, so the skyline is mostly rooftops and trees.

Sugerencia: Use a direct topic sentence and give one clear reason with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid vague phrases and unnatural expressions; use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t usually photograph buildings because I rarely find them striking. However, I can see why some people do — certain historic or modern structures can be very inspiring to them.

Sugerencia: Start with a direct answer, then add one or two specific possibilities to make the reply informative and natural. Keep it concise and avoid filler phrases like 'in my mind' or 'to be honest.'

Ejemplo: Not at the moment, but I would like to visit some famous modern buildings in the future, such as the Sydney Opera House or a contemporary skyscraper, to see their design up close.

Sugerencia: Give a clear, grammatically correct topic sentence and one specific reason. Remove hesitations and incorrect words (e.g. 'paranormal' is wrong here). Use linking words for coherence and avoid contradictory or unclear endings.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building in the future because I enjoy the panoramic view of the city at night; it helps me relax and reflect after a busy day.

× Umm, there is not any tall buildings in my hometown because I live in really quiet residence area so only a lot of house around my place.

✓ Umm, there are not any tall buildings in my hometown because I live in a really quiet residential area, so there are only a lot of houses around my place.

Errors: 'is not any tall buildings' uses singular verb with plural noun and wrong determiner; 'residence area' is incorrect noun form and missing article; 'only a lot of house' uses singular 'house' instead of plural. Suggestion: Use plural verb 'are' with plural noun 'buildings'; use the adjective 'residential' and include the article 'a'; use plural 'houses'. Also add a subject 'there' for the second clause and a comma for clarity.

× No I don't. I don't take any photo of buildings because I don't really get impressed with any of buildings.

✓ No, I don't. I don't take any photos of buildings because I don't really get impressed by any of the buildings.

Errors: 'any photo' should be plural 'any photos' when speaking generally; 'get impressed with' is not the usual collocation in English — 'be impressed by' or 'get impressed by' is preferred; 'any of buildings' needs an article 'the' before 'buildings'. Suggestion: Use plural for countable nouns when speaking generally, use correct preposition 'by', and include 'the' for a specific group.

× But I understand some people like to do that cause some of feelings has really unique aspect and make them impress.

✓ But I understand some people like to do that because some of their feelings have a really unique aspect and make them impressed.

Errors: 'cause' is informal; use 'because' in formal speech. 'some of feelings' needs a possessive determiner 'their' and 'feelings' is plural, so verb should be 'have' not 'has'. 'unique aspect' needs an article 'a' and 'make them impress' is incorrect — use 'make them impressed' or better 'impress them'. Suggestion: Use 'because', include 'their', match plural subject with plural verb, add article, and use correct verb 'impress' with object.

× Not really in my mind at the moment to be honest, but I'd like to explore more buildings that I might get interested in the future.

✓ Not really in my mind at the moment, to be honest, but I'd like to explore more buildings that I might become interested in in the future.

Errors: 'get interested in' is informal and slightly awkward here — 'become interested in' is more appropriate for future possibility. Also punctuation: commas around 'to be honest'. Suggestion: Use 'become interested in' when referring to a process of developing interest and include proper comma placement. Keep 'in the future' after the verb phrase.

× Yeah, I do want to live in a tall buildings in in the future because I like to look at this particular, umm, paranormal views of the entire of city at night.

✓ Yeah, I do want to live in a tall building in the future because I like to look at the particular, umm, panoramic views of the entire city at night.

Errors: 'a tall buildings' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'buildings' — must choose singular 'building' or remove 'a'. Double 'in in' is repetition. 'paranormal views' is wrong word choice; likely meant 'panoramic views'. 'the entire of city' is incorrect — use 'the entire city' and include article 'the' before 'particular' if needed. Suggestion: Match article and noun number, remove duplicate word, choose correct adjective 'panoramic', and use correct noun phrases.

× It makes me feel relaxed and it's a good opportunity to think about something. I'm concerned.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and is a good opportunity to think about things, but I'm concerned.

Errors: 'it's a good opportunity to think about something' is a bit vague; 'think about things' or 'reflect' is more natural. 'I'm concerned.' is abrupt and unclear how it connects; adding 'but' links it to previous idea. Suggestion: Combine sentences for clarity and use a linking word to show contrast; use clearer vocabulary like 'reflect' if that was intended.