Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn theo cấu trúc chủ đề + chi tiết hỗ trợ, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và từ không phù hợp (ví dụ “suggesting map 31 or a loss of apartments” không rõ nghĩa). Nên dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý và cung cấp ví dụ cụ thể về tòa nhà hoặc khu vực. Giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home in Ho Chi Minh City. For example, my neighborhood has several modern apartment towers and office skyscrapers. These buildings have made the area feel more urban and provided more housing for residents.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời nên ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ thì động từ, danh từ số nhiều/ít). Nên nêu nguyên do cụ thể tại sao chụp, khi nào hoặc bằng thiết bị gì để làm câu trả lời sinh động hơn. Sử dụng liên từ đơn giản như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because I find their architecture intriguing. I usually photograph them during sunset when the light creates dramatic shadows. I use my phone and sometimes edit the pictures for social media.

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời khá rõ nhưng cần chính xác ngữ pháp và mạch lạc hơn: bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rồi nêu lý do cụ thể (ví dụ kiến trúc, lịch sử, không gian). Tránh các cụm từ lặp và dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "which" để giải thích.

Ejemplo: I would like to visit the Lotus Temple in India because of its unique lotus-shaped architecture. Many tourists go there every year to enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the beautiful gardens. I think it would be a very calming and inspiring place to see.

Sugerencia: Ý tưởng ổn nhưng câu thiếu rõ ràng và có lỗi logic ("educational institutions" trong tòa nhà dân cư không phù hợp). Nên bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rồi liệt kê 2-3 lợi ích cụ thể (tiện nghi, an ninh, vị trí) và kết luận ngắn. Tránh câu dài không rõ ý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because modern apartments often offer good facilities. For example, many complexes have gyms, playgrounds for children, and 24-hour security. Living high up also usually means a nice view and less street noise.

× I currently am living in Ho Chi Minh City and it has numerous skyscrapers suggesting map 31 or a loss of apartments near my local area for all the residents to settle down and find a pleasant place to live.

✓ I am currently living in Ho Chi Minh City, and it has numerous skyscrapers and many apartment blocks near my neighborhood for residents to settle and find a pleasant place to live.

The sentence has awkward tense and word choice. 'I currently am living' is grammatically acceptable but more natural as 'I am currently living' (Present continuous). The phrase 'suggesting map 31 or a loss of apartments' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'many apartment blocks' — this fixes noun selection and plurality (singular/plural and noun choice). Also split into two clauses with a comma and 'and' for clarity. Suggest using present continuous for current residence and clear nouns like 'apartment blocks' or 'apartments'. Note: explanation in English as requested.

× Definitely, I love capturing all the moments of the high rise buildings in my city since I see really intriguing and breathtaking with the stunning view from the top of the buildings, it provide a great view for me to.

✓ Definitely, I love capturing moments of the high-rise buildings in my city since I find them really intriguing and breathtaking; the views from the tops of the buildings provide a great perspective for me.

Errors include incorrect verb forms and subject-verb agreement. 'I see really intriguing and breathtaking' wrongly uses 'see' with adjectives and lacks an object; use 'I find them really intriguing and breathtaking' (verb + object). 'it provide' is wrong subject-verb agreement; change to 'the views ... provide' (plural subject with plural verb). Use present simple 'find' and 'provide' to express general truths. Also hyphenate 'high-rise'. Note: explanation in English as requested.

× It's definitely the Lotus Temple in India. It attracts lots of tourists come in, see everywhere and every year, and I think it could be a good place for everyone to invite and enjoy the peaceful and tranquil atmosphere.

✓ It's definitely the Lotus Temple in India. It attracts many tourists every year who come to see the site, and I think it is a good place for everyone to visit and enjoy the peaceful, tranquil atmosphere.

Pronoun and clause errors: 'attracts lots of tourists come in, see everywhere' is ungrammatical. Use a relative clause: 'attracts many tourists every year who come to see the site.' 'Invite' is wrong choice; the correct verb is 'visit'. Also simplify 'peaceful and tranquil' (both are adjectives; keep both with a comma). Maintain present simple for general facts. Note: explanation in English as requested.

× Absolutely. I think apartments can provide a wide range of modern facilities for lots of purposes such as education or entertainment. For some educational institutions it could be a good chance for children to live and to promote.

✓ Absolutely. I think apartments can provide a wide range of modern facilities for purposes such as education and entertainment. For some children, living there could be a good opportunity to access educational institutions and benefit from them.

Preposition and wording issues: 'for lots of purposes such as education or entertainment' is acceptable but 'for purposes such as' is clearer; use 'and' not 'or'. The second sentence 'For some educational institutions it could be a good chance for children to live and to promote' is unclear and uses wrong prepositions and verbs. Rephrase to 'For some children, living there could be a good opportunity to access educational institutions and benefit from them.' This uses correct prepositions and noun phrases and clarifies meaning. Use present simple for general statements. Note: explanation in English as requested.