Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Nói rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn; bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và dùng thì ngữ pháp đúng. Thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ khoảng cách đến thị trấn hoặc số tầng) và một liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ: dùng “There aren’t many tall buildings near my home. I live in a village, and most houses are one- or two-storey, although there’s a small apartment block about 10 minutes away.”

Ejemplo: There aren’t many tall buildings near my home. I live in a village, and most houses are one- or two-storey; the nearest apartment block, which is only three floors, is about a ten-minute walk away.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và dùng cấu trúc ngữ pháp đúng (I don't like taking photos). Có thể đưa ví dụ để làm rõ quan điểm. Dùng liên từ như “because” để mạch lạc.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t usually take photos of buildings because I find it uninteresting; I prefer photographing nature or people when I travel.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng và thêm thông tin cụ thể như lý do, vị trí hoặc hoạt động bạn muốn làm ở đó. Hạn chế tiếng ừm, tránh lặp và dùng thì quá khứ/hiện tại phù hợp. Thêm liên từ để câu mạch lạc hơn.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit Landmark 81, the tallest building in my country. I’ve seen many videos about its observation deck on TikTok, and I’d love to go there to see the city view and take photos.

Sugerencia: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích rõ bằng nguyên nhân cụ thể, dùng cấu trúc chính xác (“afraid of heights” not “afraid of high”) và nối các ý với liên từ để mạch lạc. Bạn cũng có thể nói thêm về loại nhà bạn thích để làm phong phú câu trả lời.

Ejemplo: No, I don’t want to live in a tall building because I’m afraid of heights. I prefer a small house on the ground with a garden where I can feel more comfortable and relaxed.

× Umm I'm living in the village now so umm they are not many tall building around my house, they're just some like small house or small apartment.

✓ Umm I'm living in a village now, so there are not many tall buildings around my house; they're just small houses or small apartments.

The sentence has multiple present tense and pluralization problems. Use 'a village' as countable noun (article needed) and 'there are' to state existence of plural items (There be issue, ID 3). 'Many' must modify plural 'tall buildings' rather than singular 'building'. Also pluralize 'house' and 'apartment' when referring to multiple items. Suggestion: use 'there are' + plural noun and include the indefinite article 'a' before 'village'.

× No, actually I don't really like take photo. So I and I I think take taking photo of building is really boring. So I don't do that.

✓ No, actually I don't really like taking photos. I think taking photos of buildings is really boring, so I don't do that.

The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when expressing preferences (ID 8). Use the plural 'photos' and 'buildings' to match general meaning. Remove repeated words and unnecessary 'I and I'. Suggestion: use 'like taking photos' and plural nouns for general statements.

× Umm yes, I want to visit the highest building in my country, umm as I remember its name of Landmark 81 I've saw, I saw it in Tiktok several times, so I really want to go to that building.

✓ Umm yes, I want to visit the highest building in my country. As I remember, its name is Landmark 81. I've seen it on TikTok several times, so I really want to go to that building.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: 'its name of Landmark 81' is incorrect phrase order and article use (ID 26 sentence structure / ID 17 article). 'I've saw' uses incorrect past tense; after 'have' use past participle 'seen' (ID 9). Use 'on TikTok' as correct preposition (ID 11). Also separate into clearer sentences. Suggestion: use 'Its name is Landmark 81' and 'I've seen it on TikTok several times'.

× No, I don't want to live in a high place because I'm afraid of high. So umm, I just want to live in a house.

✓ No, I don't want to live in a high place because I'm afraid of heights. So I just want to live in a house.

'Afraid of high' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'heights' to express fear of high places (ID 13 incorrect use of adjective/adverb and ID 26 sentence structure). Suggestion: use the noun 'heights' after 'afraid of' rather than the adjective 'high'. Also remove filler words for clarity.