Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer more concise, correct grammatical errors, and organise information with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific details. Use linking words to improve coherence and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes. There are several tall buildings near my home, including the 43‑storey MBD Mall. Because it is mainly a business complex, many companies have their headquarters there, which explains why it is so tall.

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and natural: remove filler words, correct grammar (e.g. 'visit to' → 'visit'), and limit to a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific reasons or examples. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' appropriately.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings when I travel because I am interested in architecture. I use the photos as a reference later to study design details and to remember places I enjoyed.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the building, then give two specific reasons. Improve grammar (e.g. 'Lota' → 'Lotus', 'Delhi city' → 'Delhi'), use linking words like 'because' and avoid vague phrases.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Lotus Temple in Delhi because its lotus‑shaped architecture is very striking. I am also interested in its peaceful atmosphere and the way the design reflects unity in India.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise opinion with specific reasons and correct grammar. Avoid unclear claims (e.g. 'all person') and unnecessary repetition. Mention concrete benefits of living in a tall building and link ideas with words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building such as the MBD building in Ludhiana because higher floors offer better views of the surrounding area. For example, from the third or fourth floor you can enjoy sunsets and greenery, which I find relaxing.

× Yes, there are so many tall building near my home and there is one of the MBD mall and it is around 43 stories it have and the main reason it is the tall because it is the business complex and there are so many business companies have so many business head headquarters there.

✓ Yes, there are so many tall buildings near my home. There is one called the MBD Mall, and it is around 43 stories tall. The main reason it is so tall is that it is a business complex and many companies have their headquarters there.

Multiple errors with singular and plural nouns: 'building' should be 'buildings' to match 'so many'; 'there is one of the MBD mall' is incorrect—use 'one called the MBD Mall'; 'stories it have' is wrong because 'stories' as a feature is described with 'is 43 stories tall'; 'business companies have so many business head headquarters' mixes plural/singular and word order. Suggestion: ensure nouns agree in number with quantifiers and use standard noun phrases like 'many companies have their headquarters there'.

× So yes there are so many tall buildings near my home.

✓ So yes, there are many tall buildings near my home.

Redundant adverb 'so' is unnecessary and informal here; tense is present and correct but phrasing should be concise. Suggestion: use 'many' instead of 'so many' for a neutral response and include a comma after 'So yes'.

× Yes, definitely. When I visit to the tourist place and uh, I explore the architecture of the tall building and skyscrapers, then I often click the pictures for my memory because whenever I want to study more about the someplace then I give preference to use those pictures for my future reference.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I visit a tourist place, I explore the architecture of tall buildings and skyscrapers, and I often take pictures for my memories because when I want to study a place more, I prefer to use those pictures for future reference.

Errors: 'visit to the tourist place' should be 'visit a tourist place'; 'the tall building' should be plural or general 'tall buildings'; 'click the pictures' is informal—use 'take pictures'; 'for my memory' -> 'for my memories' or 'to remember'; 'someplace' and awkward 'give preference to use' -> 'prefer to use'. Maintain present simple tense for habitual actions. Suggestion: use correct verb patterns ('visit a place', 'take pictures') and consistent pluralization.

× Yes, there is A1 building which is known as Lota temple and it is located in a Delhi city which is crowded city and the main reason I visit there is it is Lotus like structure.

✓ Yes, there is the A1 building, which is known as the Lotus Temple, and it is located in Delhi, which is a crowded city. The main reason I want to visit it is its lotus-like structure.

Issues: missing definite article 'the A1 building'; 'Lota' is likely 'Lotus'; 'in a Delhi city' should be 'in Delhi' or 'in a crowded city'—here use 'in Delhi, which is a crowded city'; 'the main reason I visit there' tense and phrasing wrong—use 'I want to visit'; 'it is Lotus like structure' needs possessive and hyphenation: 'its lotus-like structure'. Suggestion: use articles correctly and hyphenate compound adjectives.

× The architecture is so much beautiful which represent the unity of the India.

✓ The architecture is very beautiful and represents the unity of India.

Pronoun/article errors: 'so much beautiful' is incorrect—use 'very beautiful' or 'so beautiful'; 'which represent' wrong verb form and should agree: 'represents'; 'the India' should be 'India' without 'the'. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and correct article use with country names.

× So that's why I really give preference to visit there.

✓ So that's why I really prefer to visit there.

Awkward verb phrase 'give preference to visit' should be 'prefer to visit'. Use present simple 'prefer' for habitual or general preference. Suggestion: learn common collocations like 'prefer to [verb]'.

× Yes definitely I want to live in a tall building and there is A1 building which is called MBD building and located in Ludhiana city and I really want to live there because it is so much tall building and all person can enjoy the all beauty of the nature by standing at the 3rd or 4th floor.

✓ Yes, definitely. I want to live in a tall building. There is an A1 building called the MBD Building located in Ludhiana, and I really want to live there because it is very tall, and everyone can enjoy the beauty of nature from the third or fourth floor.

Several issues: missing articles ('an A1 building', 'the MBD Building'); 'so much tall building' incorrect—use 'very tall' or 'such a tall building'; 'all person' -> 'everyone'; 'enjoy the all beauty of the nature' -> 'enjoy the beauty of nature'; use ordinals spelled out 'third or fourth floor'. Suggestion: use correct articles, quantifiers, and natural adjective placement.

× So I think it would be a great fun for me.

✓ So I think it would be great fun for me.

Article error: 'a great fun' is incorrect because 'fun' is usually uncountable; drop 'a'. The conditional 'would be' is appropriate for hypothetical future possibility. Suggestion: treat 'fun' as uncountable and use 'great fun' or 'a great experience' if countable noun desired.