Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like 'for instance' or 'such as' instead of repeating 'lots of'.

Ejemplo: Yes. I live in a large city, so there are many tall buildings near my home. For instance, there are several high-rise apartment blocks and office towers within a five-minute walk.

Sugerencia: Make your answer more structured and specific. Use one concise reason and a brief recent example. Avoid filler phrases like 'I think' and duplicate adjectives ('beautiful or pretty').

Ejemplo: Yes, I often photograph buildings that catch my eye because I enjoy sharing interesting architecture with friends. For example, last week I photographed a historic cinema near my neighborhood because of its ornate facade.

Sugerencia: Be more precise and avoid repeating similar adjectives. Provide one clear reason and, if relevant, a short personal detail that connects you to the building. Use a linking phrase like 'also' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: Yes. I would like to visit the church near my house because its architecture is beautiful and I am half Catholic. Also, I would like to go inside someday to pray and experience the atmosphere.

Sugerencia: Give a clearer topic sentence and a specific reason. Replace vague words like 'cute' with concrete reasons (e.g., more space, garden, quiet). Limit to two supporting sentences and use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: No, I don't want to live in a tall building anymore because I've always lived in apartments and prefer a quieter, ground-level home. In the future I'd like a one-story house with a small garden because it would be more peaceful and offer outdoor space.

× There are lots of tall buildings near my home because I live in a large city and for example there are lots of apartment buildings and office buildings near my house.

✓ There are lots of tall buildings near my home because I live in a large city; for example, there are many apartment and office buildings near my house.

Use 'many' with countable nouns instead of repeating 'lots of' and avoid redundancy. Also combine similar nouns ('apartment buildings and office buildings') into 'apartment and office buildings' for conciseness. Use a semicolon or a period to separate independent clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× I often take lots of pictures of the buildings if I find them beautiful or pretty, because I really like to share them with my friends and recently I think I took a picture of this beautiful cinema.

✓ I often take lots of pictures of buildings when I find them beautiful, because I really like to share them with my friends. Recently I think I took a picture of a beautiful cinema.

Split the long sentence into two for clarity and correct article use before 'beautiful cinema' to 'a beautiful cinema'. Use 'when' instead of 'if' to indicate habitual action. The clause 'recently I think I took' is awkward; separate into a new sentence to maintain correct tense and clarity. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× I would like to visit this church near my house because it looks really pretty and beautiful and I'm half Catholic so one day I want to go there and pray for some things.

✓ I would like to visit the church near my house because it looks very beautiful, and since I'm half Catholic, I want to go there one day to pray for some things.

Avoid redundant adjectives 'pretty and beautiful' — choose one. Use 'the church' if referring to a specific local church. Use 'since' to give reason and reorder 'one day' to 'one day to pray' for natural flow. Grammar problem type ID: 16

× I don't want to live in a tall building anymore because my whole life I've been living in a tall building like an apartment. So in the future I want to live in a small building or one story house because it's just so cute.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building anymore because my whole life I've lived in one, like an apartment. In the future, I want to live in a small building or a one-story house because it's just so cute.

Use 'lived' (present perfect simple is more natural here) and replace 'a tall building like an apartment' with 'one, like an apartment' for clarity. Add the article 'a' before 'one-story house' and hyphenate 'one-story'. Also combine sentences and add commas for readability. Grammar problem type ID: 22