Building— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Cần rút gọn câu, sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nối các ý bằng liên từ phù hợp và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể hơn. Ví dụ: sửa thì và số (there aren't many tall buildings), sửa cấu trúc (If I cross the road and go to the city centre), tránh từ sai (saw → tall/modern) và thêm mô tả ngắn về tòa nhà (ví dụ: kính, hiện đại).

Ejemplo: I live on the outskirts of the city, so there aren’t many tall buildings near my home. However, if I cross the road and go into the city centre, I can see several modern office skyscrapers. They are mostly glass buildings used for companies and shops.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng câu hoàn chỉnh, sửa ngữ pháp (take photos, when I travel or explore the city), sử dụng mệnh đề quan hệ đúng (which have unique designs), và thêm nối từ để mạch lạc. Ngoài ra nêu một ví dụ cụ thể về tòa nhà đã chụp để tăng tính chi tiết.

Ejemplo: Yes, sometimes I take photos of buildings when I travel or explore a city. I especially photograph buildings that have unique designs or attractive decorations. For example, last year I took many pictures of a historic cathedral because of its intricate façade.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và rõ ràng hơn: dùng thì phù hợp (have always wanted), sửa cấu trúc câu (I have visited it once before), hoàn thiện mệnh đề cuối (It is a historical ...). Nêu thêm chi tiết cụ thể về kiến trúc hoặc lý do ưa thích để làm câu trả lời thuyết phục hơn.

Ejemplo: I have always wanted to visit the White Palace on the beachfront of Fong Tao Province. I visited it once before and was impressed by its unique architecture, especially the ornate balconies and columns. It is also a historical landmark that reflects local culture.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng cấu trúc tự nhiên hơn, sửa ngữ pháp và từ vựng (it doesn't matter whether, what matters to me is, well-equipped with amenities), rút gọn ý và làm rõ: muốn một căn nhà với tiện nghi và không gian xanh. Có thể đưa ví dụ cụ thể về tiện nghi mong muốn.

Ejemplo: It doesn't really matter to me whether a home is tall or short. What matters is that it is well-equipped with basic amenities, like good plumbing and heating, and that it is surrounded by green spaces. For instance, I would prefer a place with a small garden or nearby park.

× As I am living on the outskirts of the city so there aren't many tall building near my home.

✓ As I live on the outskirts of the city, there aren't many tall buildings near my home.

'As I am living' is unnatural for general statements; use simple present 'I live'. 'building' should be plural 'buildings' to match 'many'. Also remove the redundant 'so' after 'As'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual/state descriptions and ensure noun plurality.

× But if I across the road and go to the city centers, there are several saw buildings there.

✓ But if I cross the road and go to the city center, there are several tall buildings there.

Missing verb: use 'cross' for crossing the road. 'city centers' should be singular 'city center' in this context. 'saw buildings' is incorrect; likely intended 'tall buildings'. Ensure correct verb forms and word choice.

× They are used for offices or commercial skyscrapers.

✓ They are used for offices or as commercial skyscrapers.

Structure is awkward: 'used for offices' is fine, but 'or commercial skyscrapers' lacks a parallel form. Add 'as' to make the roles parallel: 'used for offices or as commercial skyscrapers'.

× Yes, sometimes. I normally take photo of the building when I travel or explore the city, especially when I meet some special buildings which unique design or attractive decorations.

✓ Yes, sometimes. I normally take photos of buildings when I travel or explore the city, especially when I see some special buildings with unique designs or attractive decorations.

'take photo' should be plural 'take photos' for general habit. 'the building' becomes 'buildings' to match context. 'meet' is wrong verb; use 'see'. 'which unique design' needs preposition 'with' and plural 'unique designs' to agree. Use plural nouns and correct prepositions.

× Actually, I have always wanted to visit White Palace which is located on the beach front of Fong Tao Province.

✓ Actually, I have always wanted to visit the White Palace, which is located on the beachfront of Fong Tao Province.

Use definite article 'the' before a specific place name 'White Palace'. 'beach front' is better written as 'beachfront' (one word). Add a comma before the relative clause for clarity.

× I used to visit it once before and I was impressed by its unique architecture.

✓ I visited it once before and was impressed by its unique architecture.

'Used to visit' implies a habitual past action; for a single past visit use simple past 'visited'. Then 'I was impressed' can be shortened to 'was impressed' to avoid repetition of subject.

× Also is an historical UMM model.

✓ It is also a historical UMM model.

Missing subject 'It' at sentence start. Add article 'a' before 'historical'. Also 'historical' pronunciation rule aside, 'a historical' is acceptable. Clarify 'UMM' if needed. Ensure complete sentence structure.

× Actually, to me it's not a matter to live in a tall or short building.

✓ Actually, to me it doesn't matter whether I live in a tall or short building.

'not a matter to live' is ungrammatical. Use 'doesn't matter whether I live in...' for expressing indifference. Also include subject 'I' in the subordinate clause.

× The thing I matter is whether the building is equipped with full amenities and is surrounded by green spaces because I would like to live in a house.

✓ What matters to me is whether the building is equipped with full amenities and is surrounded by green spaces, because I would like to live in a house.

'The thing I matter' is incorrect; use 'What matters to me' or 'The thing that matters to me'. 'full amenities' is acceptable but 'fully equipped with amenities' could be better. Add comma before reason clause. Ensure correct subject-verb structure.