Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, um), fix count and verb agreement, and add one specific reason or detail using a linking word. Keep to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is fried chicken because it's widely available and easy to make at home. Additionally, my husband loves it too, so it’s a convenient choice for family meals. For example, we often prepare a simple herb marinade that makes the chicken juicy and flavorful.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with past tense and a clear topic sentence. Remove hesitations and complete the final thought. Give specific examples and use linking words to explain reasons or habits from childhood.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I loved chocolate and ate it as a special treat. For example, my parents gave me chocolate as a reward whenever I got good grades, so it became associated with celebration and comfort.

Sugerencia: Be clearer and more precise: use present simple for habits, avoid repetition and fillers, and give specific seasonal examples if possible. Use linking words like 'however' or 'but' to contrast and expand briefly.

Ejemplo: Not really; my diet doesn't change completely with the seasons, but I do try different cuisines throughout the year. For instance, at work I often sample traditional dishes from visiting colleagues, so I eat more spicy foods in autumn when a food festival takes place.

Sugerencia: Use a clear topic sentence in present perfect or simple past to state the change, avoid fillers, and give specific reasons and examples. Keep it concise and correct grammar (e.g., 'I have changed' or 'My tastes have changed').

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. I used to prefer chocolate when I was a child, but now I choose healthier options because I am concerned about my diet and I want to set a good example for my children. For example, I often opt for grilled fish or salads instead of sweets.

× I absolutely love fried chicken 'cause you can find it anywhere and even if I make it in my home, uh it's always a good dishes and also my husband love fried chickens too so it's perfect match.

✓ I absolutely love fried chicken because you can find it anywhere, and even if I make it at home, it's always a good dish. My husband loves fried chicken too, so it's a perfect match.

Multiple issues: 'in my home' is incorrect preposition use; correct is 'at home' (preposition error, ID 11) but this sentence also contains article/adjective errors: 'a good dishes' mixes singular article with plural noun (singular and plural issue, ID 1 and article error, ID 22) and should be 'a good dish' or 'good dishes'. 'my husband love' lacks third person singular -s (third person singular issue, ID 2). 'fried chickens' is unnecessary plural; uncountable/plural usage is wrong (singular/plural issue, ID 1). 'cause' is informal; use 'because'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('at home'), match singular/plural and articles, add third-person -s for 'loves', and keep noun form consistent ('fried chicken' or 'fried chicken dishes').

× I love chocolate so much when I was younger umm it's something like a very great snacks that I ever eat and it is also been a reward for me whenever I got a good grades or I did something good, I get it from my.

✓ I loved chocolate so much when I was younger; it was one of the best snacks I ever ate, and it was also a reward for me whenever I got good grades or did something good. I received it from my parents.

Tense and form errors: The main clause refers to the past, so present 'love' should be past 'loved' (past tense issue, ID 5). 'a very great snacks' mixes singular article with plural noun (singular/plural and article errors, IDs 1 and 22) and uses awkward adjective order (use 'one of the best snacks' rather than 'a very great snacks') (adjective use, ID 13). 'that I ever eat' should be past 'ate' (past tense, ID 5). 'it is also been' is incorrect passive/perfect formation; use 'it was also a reward' (incorrect use of tense/voice, IDs 9/21/5). 'a good grades' has article with plural noun (article/singular-plural, IDs 22 and 1) and 'I get it from my.' is incomplete (sentence structure error, ID 26) and missing object ('parents' or similar). Suggestion: keep past tense consistently, match singular/plural and articles, and complete the sentence with the correct object.

× It is not really totally different, umm, from year to year, uh, but I try a lot of new cuisines, umm, because I have a wider circle now at the office so I can taste uh, any traditional food from the city.

✓ It is not totally different from year to year, but I try a lot of new cuisines because I have a wider circle at the office now, so I can taste many traditional foods from other parts of the city.

Preposition and word choice errors: 'not really totally different, umm, from year to year' is redundant; 'not totally different from year to year' is clearer (adverb placement and redundancy, IDs 20 and 26). 'I try a lot of new cuisines' is acceptable but 'try a lot of new cuisines' could be 'try many new dishes' for clarity (quantifier/adjective use, IDs 14 and 13). 'wider circle now at the office' is word order awkward; place 'at the office' after 'wider circle' or 'a wider circle at work' (sentence structure/order, IDs 26 and 18). 'taste uh, any traditional food from the city' should be 'taste many traditional foods from other parts of the city' because 'any' is odd here and 'food' plural is more natural (quantifier and singular/plural issues, IDs 14 and 1). Suggestion: remove redundancy, fix word order, and use plural 'foods' or 'dishes' with appropriate quantifiers.

× Yes, absolutely change umm, now because uh, from what I said, I love chocolate so much when I was younger, but I realized that it's not really good for my diet. So I try to be either healthier food now and because I have kids so I really make a limit for sugar and chocolate.

✓ Yes, it has changed. From what I said, I loved chocolate when I was younger, but I realized that it is not good for my diet. Now I try to eat healthier food, and because I have kids, I really limit sugar and chocolate.

Tense and verb form issues: 'Yes, absolutely change now' is ungrammatical; use 'Yes, it has changed' or 'Yes, it changed' (present perfect or past tense depending on context) (present/future/past tense issue, IDs 7 and 6/5; primarily present tense issue ID 6). 'I love chocolate so much when I was younger' mixes present 'love' with past time marker 'when I was younger' (present vs past tense conflict, ID 6/5). 'I try to be either healthier food now' is incorrect structure — 'try to eat healthier food' is correct (verb + noun form error/verb choice, IDs 8/13). 'I really make a limit for sugar' is awkward; better: 'I really limit sugar' or 'I set limits on sugar' (verb choice and preposition/article issues, IDs 11 and 13). Suggestion: use consistent past tense when referring to past, use present simple/present continuous appropriately for current habits, and use correct verb phrases like 'try to eat' and 'limit sugar'.