Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more coherent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use precise vocabulary to describe flavours and dishes.

Ejemplo: I like Thai food, especially Tom Yum, because I enjoy spicy and sour flavours. For example, Tom Yum combines hot chilli, lime, and fragrant herbs, which I find exciting and comforting.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and organise the answer: topic sentence plus a reason and a brief example. Replace vague phrases with specific details and link ideas with words like "because" and "for example."

Ejemplo: When I was young I liked vegetables, especially broccoli, because my mother used to bake it with cheese. For example, she would roast broccoli with melted cheddar, which made it tasty and helped me stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Clarify and correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking words (e.g. "in winter", "in summer") and give precise examples that fit the seasons. Avoid contradictory or unclear terms like "lighting food."

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. In winter I prefer hot and spicy dishes to keep warm, such as spicy soups or stews. In summer I choose lighter meals, like sushi or salads, because they are refreshing.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with a clear timeline and reasons for change. Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid repetitive or unclear phrasing. Give one concise reason why your taste changed.

Ejemplo: Yes, it has changed. As a child I didn’t like spicy food, but as I grew older I began to enjoy stronger flavours. For example, exposure to different cuisines at university taught me to appreciate spicy dishes like Thai curries.

× My favorite food is Thai food because I love spicy foods.

✓ My favorite food is Thai food because I love spicy food.

'Spicy' describes the general category of food here; using the plural 'spicy foods' is possible but awkward. Use the uncountable noun phrase 'spicy food' to refer to the flavor type in general. Suggestion: say 'spicy food' when referring to the general category rather than 'spicy foods.'

× Spicy foods make me leveraging and the spicy make me umm for example.

✓ Spicy food makes me feel energetic and excited, for example.

Multiple issues: 'make me leveraging' is ungrammatical; 'leveraging' is a verb form not appropriate here. The subject 'Spicy food' is treated as a general singular uncountable noun, so use 'makes'. Use the verb phrase 'feel energetic and excited' to express effect. Avoid filler words like 'umm' in formal sentences. Suggestion: use 'Spicy food makes me feel...' and choose clear adjectives like 'energetic' or 'excited.'

× I mean uh with the Tom Yum Tom Yum have a loss of the fairy.

✓ I mean, with Tom Yum, the soup has a lot of flavor.

Original sentence has severe structure and word choice problems: 'have a loss of the fairy' is incorrect. Likely intended 'has a lot of flavor.' Use a clear subject 'the soup' or 'Tom Yum' and correct verb 'has.' Remove fillers 'uh' and duplicate phrase 'Tom Yum Tom Yum.' Suggestion: say 'Tom Yum has a lot of flavor' or 'Tom Yum is very flavorful.'

× When I was young I like vegetable, for example the broccoli because my mom cooked me with cheese with the broccoli that is.

✓ When I was young, I liked vegetables, for example broccoli, because my mom cooked broccoli with cheese for me.

Tense inconsistency: the time marker 'When I was young' requires past tense 'liked' not present 'like.' 'Vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' or uncountable 'vegetable' becomes 'vegetables' here. Word order and prepositions are incorrect: 'cooked me with cheese with the broccoli' should be 'cooked broccoli with cheese for me.' Suggestion: use past tense for past time references and standard word order 'cook X with Y for someone.'

× I really love with the cheesy and the broccoli make me healthy as well.

✓ I really love the cheesy flavor, and the broccoli makes me healthy as well.

Remove incorrect preposition 'with' after 'love.' Use 'the cheesy flavor' or 'cheesy broccoli.' Subject-verb agreement: 'the broccoli' (singular) requires 'makes' not 'make.' Suggestion: say 'I love the cheesy flavor' and ensure subject-verb agreement 'broccoli makes.'

× Yes, I have to eat different foods every different time of the year.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Awkward phrasing and unnecessary 'have to' if describing habitual preference. Use present simple 'eat' for habitual actions. Use 'at different times of the year' not 'every different time.' Suggestion: use 'I eat different foods at different times of the year' to express seasonal changes.

× For example on the winter I have to eat spicy food and if the summer I have to eat lighting food like umm Chinese food or sushi.

✓ For example, in winter I eat spicy food, and in summer I eat lighter foods like Chinese food or sushi.

Use preposition 'in' for seasons ('in winter,' 'in summer') not 'on.' 'Have to' is unnecessary for preference. 'Lighting food' is wrong; intended 'lighter food' (less heavy). 'Chinese food or sushi' are examples; use plural 'lighter foods.' Suggestion: use 'in winter'/'in summer' and the adjective 'lighter.'

× Yes, when I watch how many a favorite food watching because on when I watch out I don't like spicy at all and when I grow up I really love spicy food.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I didn't like spicy food at all, but as I grew up I really started to love spicy food.

This sentence has tense and word-choice errors. Use past tense 'was' and 'didn't like' to describe childhood. 'When I grow up' should be past 'as I grew up' or 'when I grew up.' 'Watch how many a favorite food watching' is meaningless and removed. Suggestion: use clear past-tense sequence: 'when I was a child...as I grew up...'