Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (flavours, ingredients, or when you eat it). Use correct vocabulary (e.g. "aromas" instead of "ferry") and fix grammar (singular/plural, articles). Avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is Tom Yum, a spicy and sour Thai soup. I enjoy it because of its bold flavours — the chilli heat, tangy lime, and fragrant lemongrass — and I often eat it when I want something comforting and warming.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and specific supporting details. Correct verb tense and pronouns, avoid fillers. Use linking words (e.g. "because", "so") to explain why you liked it and a short example of how it was prepared.

Ejemplo: When I was young I loved broccoli. My mother used to bake it with cheese, so it smelled and tasted delicious; because of that I grew up enjoying vegetables.

Sugerencia: Answer directly then add one or two specific examples linked by words like "for example" or "sometimes". Reduce hesitations and correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms). Mention seasonal differences if possible (holidays, weather) to make the answer more relevant to the question.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. In the summer I prefer lighter foods like sushi and salads, but in winter I usually eat spicier Thai dishes such as Tom Yum to warm up. For example, during holidays I often eat special Chinese dishes with my family.

Sugerencia: Make a clear comparison between past and present. Use past tense for childhood and present tense for now. State why your taste changed with specific reasons (exposure, travel, new experiences) and use linking words like "but" and "because" correctly. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, it has changed. I didn't like spicy food as a child, but as I grew older and tried more dishes while traveling, I began to enjoy spicy flavours; now Tom Yum is my favourite because of its heat and tanginess.

× My favorite food is Tom Yum. Tom Yum is the Thai food because the Tom Yum have many ferry and they have a lot of the spicy, sour and a lot of tasty with the Thai Thai food.

✓ My favorite food is Tom Yum. Tom Yum is a Thai dish because Tom Yum has many flavors and it is very spicy, sour, and tasty like other Thai food.

Use of articles: 'the Thai food' should be 'a Thai dish' because we refer to one type of dish generally. Also remove unnecessary definite articles before 'Tom Yum' and 'spicy'. Subject-verb agreement and word choice are also corrected: 'have' to 'has' (subject-verb agreement but covered by article correction requirement). Use 'flavors' instead of 'ferry' (spelling/word choice) and simplify wording for clarity.

× When I was young, I really like uh, vegetable like broccoli because umm, I like spare or I mean I like smelling with the broccoli.

✓ When I was young, I really liked vegetables like broccoli because I liked the smell of broccoli.

Tense consistency: The sentence refers to the past ('When I was young') so verbs should be in the past tense ('liked' not 'like'). Plural for countable noun: 'vegetable' should be 'vegetables'. 'Smelling with the broccoli' is incorrect phrase; use 'the smell of broccoli'.

× My mother, they make broccoli with cheese for me.

✓ My mother made broccoli with cheese for me.

Pronoun error and tense: 'My mother' is singular so using 'they' is incorrect; use singular verb form. Also the action happened in the past ('when I was young'), so use past tense 'made'. Remove the unnecessary comma.

× I really love it and very nice flavor.

✓ I really loved it; it had a very nice flavor.

Adjective/adverb and tense: 'very nice flavor' needs a verb to connect ('had a very nice flavor'). Match past tense 'loved' with earlier past context. Use complete clause instead of fragment.

× Yes I eat the different foods every umm different day of the year because umm I like spicy with Thai food.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because I like spicy Thai food.

Sentence structure and preposition use: 'the different foods every different day of the year' is awkward. Use 'different foods at different times of the year'. 'Like spicy with Thai food' should be 'like spicy Thai food' to combine adjective and noun correctly.

× Sometime I like umm sushi and the Chinese food that is make me like.

✓ Sometimes I also like sushi and Chinese food.

Sentence structure and tense: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes'. Remove the ungrammatical clause 'that is make me like'; simply state 'I also like sushi and Chinese food.'

× Yeah, the my favorite food watching when I watch uh, because when I watch out, I like, I don't like spicy at all.

✓ Yeah, my favorite food changed when I was younger because at that time I didn't like spicy food at all.

Article and sentence structure: Remove incorrect 'the' before 'my favorite'. 'Watching when I watch' is unclear; interpret as 'when I was younger' or 'when I was a child'. Maintain past tense 'didn't like'.

× But when I grow up, I really like spicy food like Tom Yum Thai Tom Yum is very uh, favorite food.

✓ But as I grew up, I really liked spicy food like Tom Yum; Tom Yum became my favorite food.

Tense consistency: Use past tense 'grew up' and 'liked' because comparing childhood to later. Clarify repetition and structure: 'Tom Yum became my favorite food' is a clear past-state change. Avoid repeating 'Tom Yum' unnecessarily.