Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers and repetition, and add one specific detail about why you like salads (e.g., ingredients or health benefit). Use a linking phrase if giving an additional reason.

Ejemplo: I like salads, especially mixed green salads with avocado and grilled chicken because they are healthy and filling. For example, I usually add spinach, cherry tomatoes and a light vinaigrette, which keeps my energy up at work.

Sugerencia: Correct grammar and avoid hesitation. Begin with a direct topic sentence in past tense, then give a brief specific example and a reason. Reduce repetition and fix verb agreement.

Ejemplo: When I was a child, I loved chocolates and ice cream. My parents often bought them for me as treats, and I especially remember enjoying chocolate ice cream after school.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer and use linking words to contrast seasons. Use correct tense and avoid self-corrections. Give one or two specific seasonal examples and explain why you prefer them.

Ejemplo: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For instance, in summer I enjoy cold salads and mangoes because they are refreshing, whereas in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm.

Sugerencia: Be more concise and use clear contrast language. State the change directly, give a reason and one concrete example of foods you prefer now. Avoid filler words and tense errors.

Ejemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. As a child I preferred sweets like chocolates and cakes, but now I choose healthier options such as salads and grilled fish because I care more about nutrition.

× My favorite food is salads.

✓ My favorite food is salad.

The phrase 'favorite food' typically takes a singular noun to indicate a general preference. 'Salads' (plural) is acceptable if you mean 'types of salads,' but given the sentence structure, use singular 'salad' to express a general favorite food. Suggestion: say 'My favorite food is salad' or 'My favorite foods are salads' if you mean multiple items.

× I make different types of salads in lunch and it's easy to make and it's convenient too.

✓ I make different types of salads for lunch; they are easy and convenient to prepare.

The original sentence has awkward preposition 'in lunch' and mixed subjects ('it's' referring to salads). Use 'for lunch' and make subject-verb agreement clear by using 'they are' for plural 'salads' and 'prepare' (infinitive) rather than 'make'. Suggestion: restructure sentences to keep subjects consistent and use correct prepositions.

× And also it is quickly, uh, we can prepare it quickly.

✓ Also, it is quick to prepare; we can prepare it quickly.

'Quickly' is an adverb modifying verbs; using 'it is quickly' is incorrect because a linking verb (is) should be followed by an adjective ('quick'). Repeating 'quickly' is redundant; better: 'it is quick to prepare' or 'we can prepare it quickly.' Suggestion: use adjective after 'is' and place adverb next to the verb it modifies.

× As a child, I likes I wear likes chocolates and ice creams.

✓ As a child, I liked to eat chocolates and ice cream.

Multiple errors: 'likes' is third person singular present form, but the subject is 'I' and the tense refers to the past, so use 'liked'. 'I wear likes' is incorrect word choice and structure; 'to eat' is appropriate. Use singular 'ice cream' as an uncountable noun when speaking generally. Suggestion: use past tense 'liked' and correct verb 'eat.'

× My parents often buy chocolates and ice creams for me, and I also like to eat.

✓ My parents often bought chocolates and ice cream for me, and I liked eating them.

Context is childhood, so past tense should be used: 'bought' and 'liked.' Also use 'ice cream' as uncountable and 'liked eating them' is a natural phrasing. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when talking about childhood.

× Yeah, of course I tried different type of foods, uh, of the year, uh, I tried the food as as per seasons, uh, like in the summer I like uh, cold starters and mangoes and also I like to have soups and hot.

✓ Yes, of course I try different types of food throughout the year; I eat according to the seasons. For example, in summer I like cold starters and mangoes, and in winter I like to have hot soups.

Mixed tenses and incorrect forms: 'tried' (past) conflicts with general 'throughout the year' which is habitual present so use 'try.' 'Different type of foods' should be 'different types of food.' 'As per seasons' is non-native; use 'according to the seasons.' The last part 'soups and hot' is incomplete; pair 'hot' with a noun like 'soups' and specify season 'winter.' Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions, pluralize correctly, and complete comparative phrases.

× Yeah, over the years I have changed my favorite foods, uh, in the, uh, in my childhood I like to have chocolates and cakes, but currently my taste has developed and I prefer to eat healthy foods.

✓ Yes, over the years my favorite foods have changed. In my childhood I liked to have chocolates and cakes, but now my taste has developed and I prefer to eat healthy foods.

The original mixes tenses and word order. Use present perfect 'have changed' for change over time, then past simple 'liked' for childhood habits. 'Currently my taste has developed' is awkward—use 'now my taste has developed' or 'my tastes have changed.' Maintain tense consistency and natural collocations. Suggestion: split into two sentences and use appropriate tenses for each time frame.