Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence naming the food, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (ingredients, why you like it) using linking words. Correct basic grammar (articles, verb forms) and avoid repetition. Keep it to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is a Frankie, a popular Indian street wrap. It’s made by stuffing a roti with spiced vegetables and plenty of melted cheese, which gives it a rich, satisfying taste. I like it because it’s quick to eat and full of flavour.

Sugerencia: Answer directly: state what you liked as a child, then contrast with recent preferences using a linking word (e.g., 'but', 'however'). Use specific vocabulary (spicy, sweets, Bengal sweets) and correct grammar (past tense, plural forms). Avoid fillers and unclear words.

Ejemplo: When I was young I liked spicy foods, though not extremely hot ones—just dishes with warm spices like cumin and chili. However, recently I prefer sweets, especially Bengali sweets such as rasgulla and sandesh.

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples: mention seasonal dishes or festival foods and use linking words ('for example', 'also'). Use correct verb forms and avoid vague phrases like 'many other people's food'.

Ejemplo: Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during festivals I enjoy special dishes such as biryani at weddings and sweet ladoos during Diwali, while on normal days I eat simple home-cooked meals like rice and vegetables.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and contrast past and present tastes with clear reasons. Use correct names and simple linking words ('when I was a child', 'now', 'because'). Avoid unclear words and unnecessary repetition. Provide one concise reason for the change.

Ejemplo: Yes. When I was a child I loved dosa, a South Indian crepe made from rice and lentils. Now I prefer Frankie, a spicy street wrap, because it is convenient and has bold flavours that I enjoy.

× 'I really like lots of food, but today I'm telling about the one of the favorite food of my life.'

✓ 'I really like many foods, but today I will talk about one of my favorite foods.'

'lots of food' is informal and count noun should be plural 'many foods'; tense and phrasing incorrect: use future/intent 'I will talk' not 'I'm telling'; 'the one of the favorite food of my life' is ungrammatical — correct: 'one of my favorite foods.' Suggestions: use plural for countable nouns, use simple future or present continuous for planned speech, and use possessive 'my favorite foods.'

× 'It's called Frankie Frankie.'

✓ 'It is called Frankie.'

'Frankie Frankie' is repetitive without reason; use a single name. Also avoid contractions in formal correction if desired. Suggestion: use the correct name once.'

× 'It's how to make.'

✓ 'This is how it is made.'

'It's how to make' is ungrammatical structure. Use passive 'how it is made' or active 'how they make it.' Suggestion: use 'this is how it is made' for description.'

× 'I'm telling you one made a roti make and some vegetable put in and lots of cheese over there.'

✓ 'They make a roti, put some vegetables inside, and add lots of cheese.'

Sentence has incorrect word order, unnecessary pronouns, and tense. Use simple present for describing a recipe; use correct verb forms 'make', 'put', 'add' and plural 'vegetables'. Suggestions: use subject 'they' or passive, correct verb sequence, and pluralize countable nouns.'

× 'What kind of food did you like when you were young? — MMM in my youngest I really like to spicy food, not a lots of spicy but some spicy species and stuff.'

✓ 'When I was young, I really liked spicy food — not very spicy, but mildly spiced dishes.'

Tense should be past 'liked' to match 'when you were young'. 'In my youngest' is incorrect; use 'when I was young'. 'like to spicy food' wrong collocation: 'like spicy food'. 'a lots of' incorrect quantifier; use 'very' or 'a lot'. 'spicy species' wrong word choice; use 'spices' or 'spiced dishes'. Suggestions: match tense to time frame, use correct noun 'spices' and correct quantifiers.'

× 'Uh, in re in recent time we really like the sweets food and specially called Bengal sweets, yeah.'

✓ 'Recently we have liked sweets, especially Bengali sweets.'

Use present perfect 'have liked' or simple present 'like' for recent habits; 'in re in recent time' is incorrect phrase; use 'recently'. 'the sweets food' wrong order; use 'sweets' or 'sweet foods'. 'specially called Bengal sweets' should be 'especially Bengali sweets.' Suggestions: use 'recently' and correct adjective form 'Bengali.'

× 'Obviously I'm commonly eat different food and I'm eat special food on special occasion like on a festival or a on a wedding occasion.'

✓ 'Obviously I usually eat different foods and I eat special foods on special occasions, like festivals or weddings.'

'I'm commonly eat' mixes contraction and wrong tense; use 'I usually eat'. 'different food' should be plural 'different foods'. 'on special occasion' needs plural 'occasions'. 'on a festival or a on a wedding occasion' contains extra articles; use 'like festivals or weddings.' Suggestions: use adverb 'usually', pluralize count nouns and occasions, and remove unnecessary articles.'

× 'But in normal days I generally eat food like, uh, many other people's food taking food.'

✓ 'But on normal days I generally eat the same kinds of food as many other people.'

Use correct preposition 'on normal days'. 'eat food like, uh, many other people's food taking food' is ungrammatical and repetitive. Correct comparison: 'eat the same kinds of food as many other people.' Suggestions: simplify and use comparative structure 'the same ... as.'

× 'Has your favourite food changed since you were a child? — Yes, of course, in my childhood era, I really like to dosa.'

✓ 'Yes, of course. In my childhood I really liked dosa.'

Question uses present perfect 'has changed since' requiring past reference; response should use past 'liked.' 'In my childhood era' is unnatural; use 'in my childhood.' 'I really like to dosa' wrong verb pattern; use 'liked dosa.' Suggestions: use past tense and correct collocation 'like + noun.'

× 'Dosa is a very famous item in South Indian culture.'

✓ 'Dosa is a very popular dish in South Indian culture.'

'Famous item' is unnatural collocation for food; use 'popular dish.' Suggestions: use 'dish' and 'popular' for foods.'

× 'But now I really like to. Frankly, Frankie is just a fast food and very popular in youngsters like we call Genzera.'

✓ 'But now I really like Frankie. Frankie is a fast food and very popular with young people; we call them Gen Zers.'

Tense 'like to' incorrect—use 'like Frankie.' 'Frankly' (adverb meaning honestly) is wrong here. 'popular in youngsters' wrong preposition and noun choice — use 'popular with young people.' 'we call Genzera' unclear; likely 'Gen Zers.' Suggestions: use correct noun phrase 'young people' or 'youngsters' and correct term 'Gen Zers.'

× 'It's a very famous in Jersey.'

✓ 'It is very popular in Jersey.'

'a very famous' requires a noun after 'famous' (e.g., 'a famous dish'); better use 'very popular.' Also 'in Jersey' may be correct if referring to place. Suggestion: use 'popular' or 'famous dish' with noun.'