Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar and avoid fillers. Include one brief reason and one specific detail. Use linking words if adding more information.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is Maggi. I like it because it’s quick to prepare—usually ready in two or three minutes—and it’s comforting after a long day. For variety, I often add vegetables or an egg to make it more nutritious.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence and avoid hesitations. Use correct tense and specific details. Limit to two to three sentences and connect ideas with a linking word such as "also" or "besides".

Ejemplo: When I was young, I loved eating bread with jam because it was sweet and tasty. I also often ate boiled eggs since they kept me full and helped me stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. Use present simple for habits and be specific about seasons or occasions. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases; give one or two clear examples using linking words like "for example" or "in summer".

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. For example, in summer I eat more seafood and salads because they feel light, while in winter I prefer warm, hearty dishes like stews.

Sugerencia: Make a clear comparison between past and present tastes using simple linking words like "when" and "now". Correct tense and avoid irrelevant details. Give one reason why the change happened and one brief example.

Ejemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed since childhood. When I was a child I preferred simple foods like bread and jam, but now I prefer quick comfort foods such as Maggi because I’m often busy and tired after work.

× Honestly speaking, I have many favorite cuisines, but mostly I like Maggi because it take only two to three minutes to cook.

✓ Honestly speaking, I have many favorite cuisines, but mostly I like Maggi because it takes only two to three minutes to cook.

Use third person singular: the subject 'Maggi' is treated as singular, so the verb needs an -s in present simple. Suggestion: for present simple with he/she/it add 's' (it takes).

× On that time, I would love to eat a bread and a jam because, uh, their taste was very different and sweetened.

✓ At that time, I loved to eat bread and jam because their tastes were very different and sweet.

Use 'at that time' for a past time reference. 'Would love' is inappropriate for past habitual—use past simple 'loved'. 'A bread' and 'a jam' are incorrect; 'bread' and 'jam' are uncountable. 'Their taste was' should be plural 'their tastes were' if referring to both items, and 'sweetened' is awkward—use 'sweet'. Suggestion: use correct preposition 'at', past tense, and uncountable nouns without articles.

× And I'll eat all that time up egg, boiled egg because it helped me to stay fit.

✓ And I used to eat boiled eggs all the time because they helped me to stay fit.

Mixes future 'I'll' with past context. Use 'used to' for past habitual actions. 'Egg' should be plural 'eggs' and 'boiled egg' needs plural form. Pronoun 'it' is wrong for eggs; use 'they'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and match plural pronouns to plural nouns.

× Honestly speaking, I'm a foodie person so I'll try a different different cuisines but in a over of time of the year recently I'll eat a seafood that I want to eat from a many day times so I'll try a different.

✓ Honestly, I'm a foodie, so I try different cuisines, but over the course of the year recently I have been eating seafood that I wanted to eat for many days, so I try different dishes.

Multiple issues but focused on pronouns and word choice: 'I'm a foodie person' is redundant—'foodie' suffices. Use present simple 'I try' for general habit. 'A different different cuisines' wrong number/agreement; use 'different cuisines' (no 'a'). 'Over the course of the year' is correct prepositional phrase. 'I'll eat a seafood' incorrect article and countability; 'seafood' is uncountable so no 'a'. 'From a many day times' is unclear—use 'for many days'. Suggestion: simplify and use correct noun forms and consistent tense.

× Yes, since my childhood my food taste was changed according what I want to eat.

✓ Yes, since my childhood my taste in food has changed according to what I want to eat.

'Since my childhood' requires present perfect to show change from past to now: 'has changed'. 'Food taste' should be 'taste in food' or 'food tastes'. 'According what' should be 'according to what'. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'since' and correct prepositional phrases.

× When I think this is the tastiest food.

✓ When I think a food is the tastiest,

Fragment and tense: original lacks clear structure and is a fragment. Use a complete clause: 'When I think a food is the tastiest,' to introduce consequence. Suggestion: complete the sentence and keep present simple for general opinion.

× So I prefer that food to eat because on that time I'm tired.

✓ So I prefer to eat that food because at that time I was tired.

Tense consistency: if referring to past, use past 'was tired'. Use 'at that time' not 'on'. 'Prefer that food to eat' is awkward—'prefer to eat that food' is natural. Suggestion: reorder verb and object and match tense to context.

× I don't think that it is a healthy or not, but I want to eat, so I eat.

✓ I don't think about whether it is healthy or not, but if I want to eat it, I eat it.

Original 'I don't think that it is a healthy or not' misuses 'that' and omits 'whether'. Also 'but I want to eat, so I eat' is vague—include the object 'it'. Suggestion: use 'whether' for alternatives and include the pronoun referring to the food.