Part 1
Examinador
What is your favourite food?
Candidato
Umm, my favorite food is noodle in Thailand, College Kway Teow Durga. It is my favorite food at at and I can eat there every day because in in the northern have a chicken and it's very delicious for me and I like it.
Examinador
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Candidato
When I when I young young when I baby, I younger I like uh eat noodle same umm my mother my mother cook northern everyday and I like it. I eating every day.
Examinador
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Candidato
Yes, now I'm studying it at Malaysia and I in Malaysia I like it nasi lemak. It is my favorite because lemang have a a sauce like a red sauce and I like it because it's very delicious and eat together.
Examinador
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Candidato
No, my not Chang because in in a young girl, I like noodle and now I like noodle same because this I'll I like Northern Kway teow because this very delicious and this the top choice when I go to the restaurant. I choose eat noodle when I go to the.
What is your favourite food?
Puntuación: 42.0Sugerencia: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence naming the dish, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix basic grammar (articles, singular/plural).
Ejemplo: My favourite food is Northern kway teow, a type of Thai noodle dish. I love it because it has tender chicken and a rich, savory sauce, so I could eat it almost every day. For these reasons, it is my top choice when I go out to eat.
What kind of food did you like when you were young?
Puntuación: 38.0Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence about the past and one specific supporting detail. Use past tense consistently and avoid hesitations and repetition. Use a linking word to connect idea (e.g., 'because' or 'so').
Ejemplo: When I was a child, I always liked eating Northern noodles that my mother cooked. Because she made them almost every day, I grew up eating that dish and still enjoy it now.
Do you eat different foods at different times of the year?
Puntuación: 45.0Sugerencia: Answer directly about seasonal variation first. If mentioning location, explain briefly and use one clear reason. Use correct nouns (nasi lemak, lemang) and link ideas with 'for example' or 'so'.
Ejemplo: I don't usually change food by season, but while studying in Malaysia I started eating nasi lemak often. For example, I like its coconut rice and spicy sambal, which makes it my favourite meal there.
Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?
Puntuación: 40.0Sugerencia: Give a direct yes/no topic sentence, then briefly explain why using past and present comparison. Use linking words like 'because' and keep to two supporting sentences with proper grammar.
Ejemplo: No, my favourite food has not changed since I was a child. I still prefer Northern kway teow because I find it very tasty, so I usually choose it when I eat out.
× Umm, my favorite food is noodle in Thailand, College Kway Teow Durga.
✓ Umm, my favorite food is noodles in Thailand, Kway Teow Durga.
Use plural 'noodles' for a general food item and remove unnecessary word 'College'. Use proper name 'Kway Teow Durga'. Articles: when speaking about a general category of food, use the plural form without an article. Suggestion: say 'noodles' or 'a noodle dish' if singular is intended.
× It is my favorite food at at and I can eat there every day because in in the northern have a chicken and it's very delicious for me and I like it.
✓ It is my favorite food and I can eat it every day because in the north they have chicken and it's very delicious and I like it.
Remove duplicate words and correct prepositions: 'at at' and 'in in' are errors. Use 'in the north' for region and 'they have' to refer to people/places. Use 'eat it' to refer back to the food. Suggestion: speak in short clear clauses and avoid repetition.
× When I when I young young when I baby, I younger I like uh eat noodle same umm my mother my mother cook northern everyday and I like it.
✓ When I was young, when I was a baby, I liked to eat the same noodles because my mother cooked northern-style noodles every day and I liked them.
Fix sentence structure and verb tense: add 'was' for past state and 'liked' for past habit. Remove repeated words and use 'to eat' or 'eat' with correct tense. Use 'my mother cooked' for past continuous habit and 'northern-style noodles' for clarity. Pronoun agreement: 'them' refers to 'noodles' (plural). Suggestion: use simple past for childhood habits and avoid repetition.
× Yes, now I'm studying it at Malaysia and I in Malaysia I like it nasi lemak.
✓ Yes, now I'm studying in Malaysia and I like nasi lemak here.
Use 'in Malaysia' not 'at Malaysia'. Omit 'it' after 'studying'. Place 'here' to show location. 'Like' remains present for current preference. Suggestion: use correct prepositions 'in' for countries and avoid extra pronouns.
× It is my favorite because lemang have a a sauce like a red sauce and I like it because it's very delicious and eat together.
✓ It is my favorite because lemang has a sauce, a kind of red sauce, and I like to eat it together with it because it's very delicious.
Subject-verb agreement: 'lemang' (singular dish) takes 'has' not 'have'. Remove duplicate 'a'. Use 'to eat it together with it' is awkward; better: 'I like to eat it with the sauce because it's very delicious.' Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree and avoid repeating words.
× No, my not Chang because in in a young girl, I like noodle and now I like noodle same because this I'll I like Northern Kway teow because this very delicious and this the top choice when I go to the restaurant. I choose eat noodle when I go to the.
✓ No, it hasn't changed because when I was a young girl I liked noodles and now I like the same noodles. I like Northern Kway Teow because it is very delicious and it is my top choice when I go to a restaurant. I choose to eat noodles when I go out.
Use present perfect 'hasn't changed' for change since childhood. Use past 'was' and past 'liked' for childhood habits. Use plural 'noodles' and add articles 'a' or 'the' where needed. Use 'it is' instead of 'this is', and 'choose to eat' for correct verb pattern. Remove duplicate words and incomplete sentence ending. Suggestion: use present perfect to describe change over time and maintain consistent tense.