Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming the favourite food, then give one or two specific reasons or details using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid redundancy and keep to under five sentences. For example, mention specific toppings you enjoy and why you prefer Domino's.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is pizza. I especially enjoy pizza with mushrooms and extra cheese because I like the contrast of textures. Also, I often choose Domino’s because their delivery is fast and their crust is consistently good.

Sugerencia: Begin with a clear topic sentence about what you liked as a child. Use past tense consistently and provide a specific reason or short anecdote. Replace unclear words (‘homegrade’) with ‘homemade’ and correct grammar (e.g., “my mother warned me not to eat fast food”).

Ejemplo: When I was young, I preferred homemade food. My mother warned me not to eat fast food, so I usually ate soups and rice dishes she cooked at home. I remember liking her chicken stew because it was comforting and healthy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and clearly. If the truthful answer is ‘no’, say why and give a specific example or a short contrast about seasonal foods. Use correct grammar and linking words like ‘however’ or ‘but’ and keep sentences short and coherent.

Ejemplo: Not really — I tend to eat the same kinds of dishes year-round because I cook similar meals at home. However, in winter I sometimes make hot soups, and in summer I prefer salads and fruit because they feel fresher.

Sugerencia: Organize the response: start with a clear yes/no and one sentence explaining the change. Use past and present tenses properly and avoid repeating the same idea. Be specific about what changed and why, using linking words like ‘because’ and ‘so’.

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I often ate burgers, especially when I felt down, but now I prefer homemade meals because they taste fresher and healthier. Since I moved away from home a year ago, I miss my mother’s cooking and try to recreate her dishes when I can.

× I like something that I can go fast food and pizza.

✓ I like foods such as fast food and pizza.

Original sentence uses incorrect pronouns and structure ('something that I can go fast food' is ungrammatical). Replace vague 'something that I can go' with 'foods such as' to list examples. Use plural 'foods' to match multiple items.

× I like various topping in my pizza.

✓ I like various toppings on my pizza.

Needs plural 'toppings' because 'various' implies more than one. Preposition 'on' is correct for toppings on pizza. Also include article 'my' correctly.

× I like Domino's Pizza so.

✓ I like Domino's Pizza.

The sentence ends with an unnecessary conjunction 'so' making it incomplete. Remove 'so' to form a complete statement.

× Well, actually I was young.

✓ When I was young,

Alone 'Well, actually I was young.' is awkward as an answer fragment. Use 'When I was young,' to introduce past-time information and connect to following clause.

× I like homemade food because my mother scolded me to don't eat fast food, so I prefer to eat homegrade food.

✓ I liked homemade food because my mother scolded me not to eat fast food, so I preferred home-cooked food.

Tense should be past to match 'when I was young'. Use 'not to eat' instead of 'to don't eat' for correct infinitive negation. 'Homegrade' is incorrect; use 'home-cooked'. Also keep verbs consistent in past: 'liked' and 'preferred'.

× No, I don't think you have any eat different kind of food at the same moment.

✓ No, I don't think people eat many different kinds of food at the same time.

Original mixes 'you' and awkward phrasing. Use general subject 'people' for generalisation. 'Many different kinds of food' is correct quantifier and plural. 'At the same time' is the correct phrase.

× But I wish to eat variety of food in future at the same time.

✓ But I wish to eat a variety of foods in the future at the same time.

Add article 'a' before 'variety' and plural 'foods'. Include 'the' in 'in the future'. 'Wish to eat' is acceptable; keeping 'wish' indicates desire for future.

× Absolutely, my favorite food was strange when I was younger I liked eating burger when I was sad but now I like homemade food because I live in far from my home so I don't eat homemade food since one year so I like homemade food.

✓ Absolutely. My favorite foods were different when I was younger. I liked eating burgers when I was sad, but now I like homemade food. I live far from my family, so I haven't eaten homemade food for a year, and I miss it.

Multiple errors: 'was strange' is odd—use 'were different' for plural 'foods'. Use past tense 'liked' for past habit and plural 'burgers'. 'I live far from my home' should be 'I live far from my family' or 'from home'. For time duration up to present, use present perfect 'haven't eaten' plus 'for a year'. Combine sentences and punctuation for clarity.