Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar; start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrases (e.g., 'the rice is the like foundation of every fruit').

Ejemplo: My favourite food is sushi. I enjoy it because it combines fresh seafood and seasoned rice, and I have loved seafood since childhood. For example, I often order salmon nigiri because I like its delicate flavor and soft texture.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and a clear structure: state the past preference, give a specific reason and one brief detail. Reduce fillers (umm, uh) and correct grammar (I were → I was; prefer eat → preferred to eat).

Ejemplo: When I was young, I preferred junk food such as pizza and burgers because they tasted exciting and were easy to get. For instance, I used to eat fast food after school with my friends almost every weekend.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and finish the thought. Use linking words (however, but) and correct verbs. Mention a clear contrast between seasons and give specific examples of foods or drinks for each season.

Ejemplo: Not really — I tend to eat the same foods year-round. However, I do change my drinks with the seasons: in winter I usually drink hot tea or cocoa, while in summer I prefer cold smoothies or iced tea.

Sugerencia: Provide a direct answer and concise supporting reasons. Avoid repetition ('now' repeated) and vague phrases. State specific reasons (health concerns, taste, smell) and one brief example of the change.

Ejemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I loved sausage pizza, but now I avoid sausages because I believe processed meats are unhealthy and I don't like their smell anymore. For example, I now prefer grilled fish instead.

× 'Actually, I'm a person who can eat everything, but nowadays my favorite food is the sushi because I really love this, combined with the rice and the seafood because seafood my favorite type of food from my childhood, and the rice is the like foundation of every fruit.'

✓ 'Actually, I can eat almost anything, but nowadays my favourite food is sushi because I really love the combination of rice and seafood; seafood has been my favourite type of food since childhood, and rice is like the foundation of many dishes.'

'Subject-verb agreement and general sentence structure errors: "the sushi" is unnecessary; use "sushi" as an uncountable noun. "this, combined with the rice and the seafood" is ungrammatical — rephrase to "the combination of rice and seafood." "seafood my favorite type of food from my childhood" lacks a verb and correct tense and agreement; correct to "seafood has been my favourite... since childhood." Also "the rice is the like foundation of every fruit" is incorrect word choice and structure; likely meant "many dishes." Suggestion: simplify and split into clearer clauses, ensure verbs are present where needed, and maintain subject-verb agreement.'

× 'When I were young, I prefer eat the really junk food like pizza, burgers and something like this because it gives me a lot of enjoy and umm, to be honest, when I was a child, I don't care about my health and I eat everything that I want and now I know uh, about.'

✓ 'When I was young, I preferred to eat junk food like pizza and burgers because it gave me a lot of enjoyment. To be honest, when I was a child I did not care about my health and I ate whatever I wanted; now I know better.'

'Past tense issue and sentence structure: "When I were young" uses incorrect verb form; use "was." Mixing present tense "prefer eat" and present/simple verbs with past context is incorrect — use past "preferred to eat." "really junk food" should be "junk food" and "gives me a lot of enjoy" requires past tense and correct noun "gave me a lot of enjoyment." "I don't care" should be past "I did not care," and "I eat everything that I want" should be past "I ate whatever I wanted." Suggestion: keep all verbs in past tense for past-time narration and use correct verb forms and nouns.'

× 'Actually, I don't need the different food in the different times of year, but if I tell about drinks, I drink the really different drinks in different times of year because when it was cold, I prefer eat the I prefer during the hot drinks and when it.'

✓ 'Actually, I don't need different foods at different times of the year, but if I talk about drinks, I drink different beverages at different times because when it is cold I prefer hot drinks.'

'Present tense and preposition issues: "I don't need the different food in the different times of year" is awkward and uses incorrect articles; use "different foods at different times of the year." "If I tell about drinks" is incorrect phrasing; use "if I talk about drinks." "I drink the really different drinks" is redundant; use "I drink different beverages." "when it was cold, I prefer eat the I prefer during the hot drinks" mixes past and present and has wrong verb forms — use present "when it is cold I prefer hot drinks." Suggestion: use consistent present tense for habitual actions and correct prepositions/word choice.'

× 'From a point of view, I think that yeah, because when I was a child I really love eating the pizza with sausages, but now I hate them because now I think that sausages are really harmful and terrible for our health and I just don't like the smell and the.'

✓ 'From my point of view, I think yes, because when I was a child I really loved eating pizza with sausages, but now I hate them because I think sausages are harmful to our health and I do not like the smell.'

'Past tense issue and sentence structure: "I really love eating" refers to past context; use past tense "I really loved eating." "the pizza with sausages" — article not necessary before uncountable/uncertain items; use "pizza with sausages." Repetition "now" removed for concision. "Harmful and terrible for our health" is wordy; "harmful to our health" is clearer. The sentence ended abruptly "and the." Suggestion: use past tense for past preferences, remove unnecessary articles, and complete the final clause.'