Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make your answer clear, concise and natural. Start with a direct topic sentence naming the favourite food, then give one or two specific reasons using simple linking words. Avoid unclear words and redundant phrases, and keep to under five sentences.

Ejemplo: My favourite food is scrambled eggs with steamed broccoli. I like it because it is simple to make and very healthy. Also, my grandmother taught me to cook it with little or no oil, so it keeps the vitamins from the broccoli. For these reasons, I eat it often and feel energetic.

Sugerencia: Give a direct topic sentence about your childhood food preferences, then support it with a clear reason or example. Reduce hesitations and irrelevant comments about modern parenting. Use one or two linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: When I was young, I enjoyed almost any kind of food. Because my parents were not strict about meals, I tried many dishes at home and at relatives' houses. As a result, I grew up liking a wide variety of flavours.

Sugerencia: Answer directly whether you change your diet by season and give specific, coherent examples. Use clear linking words like 'for example' and avoid vague or confusing phrases. Keep sentences short and focused on concrete foods and seasons.

Ejemplo: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews to stay warm, while in summer I eat more salads and grilled vegetables to stay cool. Seasonal fruits such as strawberries in spring and apples in autumn are also popular in my family.

Sugerencia: Answer clearly whether your favourite food has changed, with a brief explanation and a specific example. Avoid unclear phrases and extra information about companies or attention. Use one or two coherent supporting sentences and linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ejemplo: No, my favourite food has not changed much since childhood. I still enjoy the traditional home-cooked vegetable dishes my grandmother made because they taste familiar and are healthy. For example, I still eat her steamed greens with a light sauce.

× Although I do appreciate all kinds of remember, one of the rescue, which is really very close to my heart is a scrambled egg with steamed broccoli.

✓ Although I appreciate all kinds of food, one of my favourites, which is really close to my heart, is scrambled eggs with steamed broccoli.

The original sentence uses incorrect nouns ('remember', 'rescue') likely meant to be 'food' and 'favourite'. Also 'a scrambled egg' is better as 'scrambled eggs' when speaking generally. Added commas improve clause separation. Suggestion: use precise nouns and match number (scrambled eggs for a general favourite) and insert commas around the nonrestrictive clause.

× Moreover, if you spoke without any kind of oil, it is taught to mean by my grandmother.

✓ Moreover, if it is cooked without any oil, it was taught to me by my grandmother.

The sentence contains wrong verb forms and word order: 'spoke' is incorrect; use passive 'is cooked' to describe preparation. 'It is taught to mean by my grandmother' is ungrammatical; correct form is 'was taught to me by my grandmother' to indicate past teaching. Suggestion: use correct passive construction and correct pronoun 'me'.

× It has lots of benefits and it is very good friendly.

✓ It has many benefits and is very healthy.

'Lots of' is informal but acceptable; 'good friendly' is ungrammatical. The intended meaning is likely 'healthy' or 'good for me'. Suggestion: replace 'lots of' with 'many' and 'good friendly' with 'healthy' or 'good for you'.

× Was very food retaining my younger days, when I looked at myself, I was eating almost any kind of food.

✓ When I was younger, I ate almost any kind of food.

Original has word order and unnecessary phrases ('Was very food retaining my younger days', 'when I looked at myself') that confuse meaning. Simplify to clear past-tense statement 'When I was younger, I ate...'. Suggestion: remove redundant phrases and use simple past tense for habits in the past.

× My parents, uh, didn't really, uh, work hard on me to make me eat every kind of food As of these days, we are seeing how parents are worried their children are not looking enough.

✓ My parents didn't really push me to eat every kind of food. These days, we can see that parents are worried their children are not getting enough to eat.

'Work hard on me' is an unnatural phrasing; 'push me' or 'encourage me' is correct. The second sentence misuses 'looking' and lacks clarity; correct phrase is 'not getting enough to eat'. Suggestion: use natural collocations ('push someone', 'get enough to eat') and split into two clear sentences.

× I was able to become.

✓ I was able to become more adventurous with food.

Sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. Add the intended result 'more adventurous with food' or similar to complete meaning. Suggestion: always include what you became or how you changed.

× We are experiencing several seasons and big change of season and changing temperature fluctuation in Windsor office changes and we pray for many different kinds of food.

✓ We experience several seasons and big temperature fluctuations in Windsor, so we eat many different kinds of food.

Original mixes progressive 'are experiencing' unnecessarily and repeats words ('changes', 'changes') and uses 'pray for' incorrectly. Use simple present 'we experience' for general facts and 'eat' to describe habitual action. Suggestion: avoid redundant words and use appropriate verbs ('eat' not 'pray for').

× For example during the seasons are going on deep fried energy with salt meat in the summer seasonally cracker joes and multi vegetables.

✓ For example, in summer people often eat deep-fried foods with salted meat, seasonal crackers, and many vegetables.

Original sentence has many wrong words ('energy', 'cracker joes', 'multi vegetables'). Replace with sensible food items and proper adjectives: 'deep-fried foods', 'salted meat', 'seasonal crackers', 'many vegetables'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns and use hyphenation for compound adjectives when needed.

× There is no that much difference.

✓ There is not that much difference.

Use 'not' with 'that much' rather than 'no' in this context. 'There is not that much difference' is the correct negation. Suggestion: choose correct negative construction for 'there is'.

× During my childhood I was always having home long vegetables and traditional foods which my grandma used to make and insisted us to have these kind of foods.

✓ During my childhood I always ate homemade vegetables and traditional foods that my grandma used to make and insisted we eat.

'Having' is awkward; use 'ate' for habitual past. 'Home long vegetables' is incorrect; likely 'homemade vegetables'. 'Insisted us to have' should be 'insisted we eat' or 'insisted that we eat'. Suggestion: use correct verbs for habits and correct collocations ('homemade', 'insist that someone do something').

× We were not in any company and today we had attention.

✓ We did not have many conveniences then, but today we have more conveniences.

Original is unclear: 'not in any company' and 'had attention' are wrong. Interpret as lack of facilities or company; corrected to 'did not have many conveniences' and contrast with present. Suggestion: make the contrast clear and use appropriate nouns ('conveniences', 'facilities').

× I itself inclined to to.

✓ I myself became more inclined to try different foods.

'I itself' is incorrect; use 'I myself' or simply 'I'. The sentence is incomplete and has a duplicated 'to'. Completed to show what the speaker became inclined to. Suggestion: use proper reflexive pronoun 'myself' and complete the idea.