Food— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Keep the answer short, direct and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. “it's very time. Detecting preparation”) and grammar errors. Use linking words like because or and to connect ideas correctly.

Ejemplo: I like salad the most because it is healthy and gives me more energy. For example, I usually include spinach, tomatoes and grilled chicken, which keeps me full without feeling heavy.

Sugerencia: Answer directly, then add a specific reason or contrast. Use past tense for childhood and clear linking words (for example, but, however, after). Avoid vague fragments like “a healthy 1” or “So I full stop that.”

Ejemplo: When I was young I ate a lot of chocolate and chips because they were easy treats. However, after studying nursing I learned about calories and switched to healthier options like fruit and homemade meals.

Sugerencia: Be concise and use specific examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific seasonal examples linked with a reason using linking words like because or for example. Reduce fillers (uh, umm) and repetition.

Ejemplo: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season because some fruits are seasonal. For example, I enjoy mangoes in summer and apples or pears in autumn because they taste best when they are in season.

Sugerencia: Give a direct comparison between past and present using clear linking words like when, but, and now. Use correct tense and concise phrasing (avoid “after adulting”). Provide a specific example of what you eat now instead of vague phrases like “nutritious.”

Ejemplo: Yes, it changed a lot. When I was a child I ate mostly oily snacks like chips and lots of sweets, but now I prefer balanced meals with vegetables, lean protein and whole grains because I want to stay healthy.

× My favorite food is salad because it's healthy food and gives me more energetic and also it's very time. Detecting preparation.

✓ My favorite food is salad because it is healthy and makes me more energetic, and it is quick to prepare.

Original sentence uses incorrect adjective/adverb forms and awkward phrases ('gives me more energetic' should be 'makes me more energetic'; 'it's very time. Detecting preparation.' is ungrammatical). Use 'healthy' as an adjective modifying food, 'makes me more energetic' (verb + adjective), and 'quick to prepare' to express ease of preparation. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('it is') and natural collocations.

× During my childhood times I usually take chocolate snacks, chips etcetera which were not at all a healthy 1.

✓ During my childhood I usually ate chocolate snacks, chips, etc., which were not at all healthy.

Errors: wrong preposition phrase 'During my childhood times' (use 'During my childhood'), wrong verb tense ('take' should be past 'ate'), and unnecessary quantifier 'a' before 'healthy'. Also remove '1'. Use past tense for past habits and correct adjective placement: 'not at all healthy'.

× After studying nursing I got some idea about calories and more nutritious food.

✓ After studying nursing, I gained some understanding of calories and more nutritious foods.

'Got some idea' is informal and awkward; use 'gained some understanding' (past simple). Use plural 'foods' or 'nutrition' to refer generally. Keep past tense for completed action.

× So I full stop that for my healthy body.

✓ So I stopped those habits for the sake of my health.

Original is ungrammatical ('full stop' is not used this way). Use clear structure: subject + past verb + object ('I stopped those habits') and idiomatic phrase 'for the sake of my health'.

× Yes, I will eat different food at different times of the year because it depends.

✓ Yes, I eat different foods at different times of the year because it depends on the season.

Talking about habitual actions use present simple ('I eat'), not 'will'. Also use plural 'foods' and complete the clause 'depends on the season' for clarity.

× Some fruits or foods were only available in particular season.

✓ Some fruits or foods are only available in particular seasons.

Use present simple to state general truths ('are only available'), and plural 'seasons' or 'a particular season'. Maintain subject-verb agreement.

× So during summer season we will umm, go for mangoes, right?

✓ So during the summer we usually choose mangoes.

Avoid filler words and future 'will' for habitual actions; use 'usually' + present simple. Use 'the summer' (definite article for seasons) and 'choose mangoes' is more natural than 'go for mangoes' in this context.

× Yes, during my childhood or in when I was a child I mostly prefer for oily food, chips and also for unhealthy dietary patterns like chocolate, ice creams etcetera.

✓ Yes, during my childhood I mostly preferred oily foods such as chips and other unhealthy items like chocolate and ice cream.

Mismatch of past and present: 'during my childhood' requires past tense 'preferred', not present 'prefer'. Remove awkward 'in when I was a child' and 'prefer for' (use 'preferred'). Use plural 'foods' and correct noun form 'ice cream' (uncountable or singular).

× After adulting I came to know about the calories and later on changed my schedule to nutritious.

✓ After becoming an adult, I learned about calories and later changed my diet to be more nutritious.

'Adulting' is informal; use 'becoming an adult'. Use past simple 'learned' and 'changed my diet' (not 'schedule') and 'to be more nutritious' or 'to include more nutritious foods' for clarity.