Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: 文法と単語の選択を改善し、答えを簡潔にまとめてから具体例を付け加えてください。例えば、「commit to the university」は不自然なので「commute to university」に直し、動詞の形（"like go"→"like to go"）も修正しましょう。回答は最初に直接答え（I don't usually walk much.）を述べ、その後に理由と具体的な状況（朝の公園での散歩）を短く説明してください。

Ejemplo: No, I don't usually walk much because I commute to university by subway and bus. However, I like to take walks in the park in the morning because the fresh air helps me feel refreshed before classes.

Sugerencia: 時制と語彙を一致させ、自然な表現に直してください。"went for works"は不自然で、"went for walks"が正しいです。また、過去の習慣を説明する際は過去形で統一し、理由や具体例を短く加えましょう。

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child because I enjoyed being outdoors. I used to play games in the park with my friends, which was good exercise and very fun.

Sugerencia: 内容が不明瞭で語彙の誤りが多いです（"packs", "flash ears"など）。まず明確なトピックセンテンスを述べ、理由を2つか3つに絞って具体例を添えてください。語彙は"parks", "fresh air", "green space"など正しい形を使い、接続詞でつなぎましょう。

Ejemplo: I think people enjoy walking in parks because parks offer green space and fresh air, which help them relax. Also, parks provide paths for exercise and places to play sports, so both young and older people can stay active.

Sugerencia: 場所の表現と文法を明確にし、理由を具体的に述べてください。"nearby city in my home"は不自然なので"a nearby city"や"a city near my hometown"などに直しましょう。冗長な語（"it it"）を省き、どんな道や景色を期待しているか説明すると良いです。

Ejemplo: I would like to take a long walk in a nearby city close to my hometown because I rarely visit it. Walking there would be good exercise and a great way to explore streets and local parks I haven't seen before.

Sugerencia: 語彙と発音に注意し、答えを簡潔で流暢にまとめましょう。"went for works"は"went for a walk"に直し、冗長なフレーズ（"so good and beautiful to see", "Uh nature"）を避け、具体的な描写を一つ加えると効果的です。

Ejemplo: I recently went for a walk around the lake near my home because I wanted to relax. The scenery was beautiful, with calm water and trees, so it was both peaceful and a good form of exercise.

× However, I like go for work in the park and enjoy walking out in the morning.

✓ However, I like going to the park for work and enjoy walking in the morning.

The verb 'like' should be followed by the gerund (verb + -ing) when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Use 'going' instead of 'go'. Also 'go for work in the park' is unnatural; 'going to the park for work' is clearer. Use 'in the morning' rather than 'out in the morning' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, when I was a child I went for works because I enjoy being outdoors.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I went for walks because I enjoyed being outdoors.

The noun 'works' is incorrect; the correct plural is 'walks' (singular/plural issue but here lexical). Also maintain consistent past tense: 'went' and 'enjoyed' should both be past tense. Change 'enjoy' to 'enjoyed' to match past time reference.

× Also I enjoy playing games in the park and I think it was a nice exercise.

✓ Also I enjoyed playing games in the park, and I thought it was nice exercise.

The speaker refers to childhood (past), so present 'enjoy' should be past 'enjoyed'. 'I think it was a nice exercise' mixes present and past; change to 'I thought' to keep past reference. 'Nice exercise' does not need the article 'a' here, but 'a nice exercise' is also acceptable; 'nice exercise' is more natural.

× In my opinion that is because packs have a nice use, flash ears and green space for example.

✓ In my opinion that is because parks have nice trees, flowers and green space, for example.

Multiple word choices are incorrect: 'packs' should be 'parks' (spelling), 'use' is wrong; likely 'trees' intended, 'flash ears' is wrong; likely 'flowers' intended. These are lexical/adjective-noun choices. Correct to 'parks have nice trees, flowers and green space' to convey intended meaning.

× Today, enjoy playing sports, stay free and older people can learn and enjoy.

✓ People can enjoy playing sports, relax, and older people can learn and enjoy themselves.

Original sentence is fragmented and lacks clear subject and parallel structure. Add subject 'People' and create parallel verb forms: 'enjoy playing sports, relax, and older people can learn and enjoy themselves.' This clarifies meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I would like to go to nearby city in my home because it I don't often go to there.

✓ I would like to go to a nearby city near my home because I don't often go there.

Use the article 'a' with 'nearby city'. 'In my home' is wrong; use 'near my home'. 'Go to there' is incorrect prepositional use; say 'go there'. Also remove the extra 'it'.

× I think it it would be a nice form of exercise and training following the way.

✓ I think it would be a nice form of exercise and good training for walking long distances.

Sentence has duplication 'it it' and awkward phrase 'training following the way'. Remove duplicate, rephrase to 'good training for walking long distances' to convey intended meaning. This fixes sentence structure and word choice.

× I went for works to the lake near my home because I wanted to feel relaxed and calm.

✓ I went for a walk to the lake near my home because I wanted to feel relaxed and calm.

Use 'a walk' (singular) not 'works'. Maintain past tense 'went' and 'wanted' are correct; just correct the noun. This fixes lexical error and singular/plural choice.

× The scenery was so good and beautiful to see.

✓ The scenery was so beautiful to see.

'Good and beautiful' is redundant; 'beautiful' alone is sufficient. Use a single adjective that accurately describes scenery. 'So beautiful to see' is natural; remove 'good'.

× Uh nature. I think it was nice exercise.

✓ The natural surroundings were lovely. I think it was nice exercise.

'Uh nature' is a disfluent fragment; expand to a full noun phrase 'The natural surroundings' or 'The nature'. Maintain 'was' for past tense. 'Nice exercise' is acceptable. This corrects fragmentary sentence into a complete sentence.