Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ; nói rõ tần suất và lý do cụ thể hơn. Dùng 2–4 câu, có câu chủ đề rồi dẫn lý do/chi tiết bổ trợ hợp lý.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot every day. Usually I walk about 1–2 kilometres in the morning because it helps me wake up and keeps me fit. I also enjoy it as a way to clear my mind before work.

Sugerencia: Cần sửa ngữ pháp (thời quá khứ), tránh lặp và trình bày mạch lạc: mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ở quá khứ, sau đó nêu ví dụ cụ thể (ai, làm gì, tại sao). Giữ 2–4 câu.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked outside with my family and friends when I was a child. We usually played football or explored the neighbourhood together, which was fun and helped us stay active.

Sugerencia: Nhiều lỗi từ vựng/diễn đạt (work/grew/walks). Cần câu chủ đề rõ ràng, dùng liên từ, nêu 2–3 lí do cụ thể (không khí trong lành, phong cảnh, an toàn). Tránh nói lan man, giữ 2–4 câu.

Ejemplo: People often like walking in parks because the air is fresher and the scenery is pleasant. Also, parks provide a safe, relaxed environment where friends and families can exercise or chat together.

Sugerencia: Câu điều kiện và mô tả cần chính xác hơn; tránh lặp từ (walk, really). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề với điều kiện rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 2 lý do cụ thể (khung cảnh, cảm xúc). Giữ tối đa 4 câu.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a peaceful forest. The tall trees and diverse plants would help me relax and feel closer to nature, which I find very refreshing.

Sugerencia: Cần dùng thì quá khứ vì hỏi về lần gần đây; sửa cấu trúc và từ sai (got legs). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn (nơi và thời gian gần nhất), rồi nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (vì sao thích).

Ejemplo: I went for a walk in a small, cosy park near my house last weekend. It has many trees and quiet paths, so walking there made me feel relaxed and refreshed.

× Yes, I walk a lot every day. I often go to walk 1 to 2 kilometers because I think it's a very healthy and good habit.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot every day. I often walk 1 to 2 kilometers because I think it's a very healthy habit.

The phrase 'go to walk' is incorrect; English uses 'walk' without 'go to' for this meaning. 'Healthy and good habit' is redundant; use 'healthy habit'. Use present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: say 'I often walk 1 to 2 kilometers.'

× Yes, I often go outside and have a walk with my family and with my friends when I were a child, when I was a child, because when I travel I usually have a lot of time and I usually play around with my friend. I play football and I often go to walk.

✓ Yes, I often went outside and had walks with my family and friends when I was a child, because when I traveled I usually had a lot of time and I usually played with my friends. I played football and I often went for walks.

Multiple tense errors: 'go' should be past 'went' to match 'when I was a child'. 'were a child' is wrong subject-verb; use 'was'. 'have a walk' -> 'had walks' or 'went for walks'. 'travel' to past 'traveled', 'play' to 'played'. 'go to walk' -> 'went for walks'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently when describing childhood activities.

× I think people like to work in parks because in parks you grew the water and see many walks with you too, so that you will feel really motivated and feel like you guys are walking together.

✓ I think people like to walk in parks because in parks you can see water and many paths, so you will feel motivated and feel like you are walking together with others.

'Work in parks' is wrong; context requires 'walk'. 'grew the water' is nonsensical; likely 'see water'. 'see many walks' should be 'see many paths' or 'walkways'. 'you guys' is informal and awkward; use 'you' or 'others'. Maintain present simple for general statements. Suggestion: use accurate nouns (paths, water) and correct verbs ('walk').

× And also working in parks will help you feeling more connected with the nature. You could walk and see nature, see the beautiful landscape of your city.

✓ Also, walking in parks will help you feel more connected with nature. You can walk and see nature and the beautiful landscape of your city.

'working in parks' should be 'walking in parks'. 'help you feeling' is incorrect; use 'help you feel'. 'the nature' is incorrect article use; use 'nature' without 'the'. 'could' is acceptable but 'can' fits general ability. Suggestion: use 'help + base verb' and omit unnecessary articles.

× If I have a chance, I would like to have a long walk in the cookful forest because it is a very big and green forest, so I want to go there and have a walk and also to see many trees and plants and it I think it is will feel really relaxed and really connected with the nature, really fun.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in the peaceful forest because it is very large and green. I would like to go there to see many trees and plants; I think it would feel very relaxing and make me feel connected with nature.

Mixed conditional forms: use 'If I had the chance, I would...' for hypothetical. 'have a long walk' -> 'take a long walk'. 'cookful' is not a word; replace with 'peaceful' or 'beautiful'. 'it I think it is will feel' is ungrammatical; use 'I think it would feel'. Use 'connected with nature' (no 'the'). Suggestion: use correct conditional structure and clear adjective choices.

× Let me go to work in my cozy park. It is near my house and I think it is a quite beautiful park too. It got legs and got many trees, so walking there makes me feel relaxed and it feels really fresh.

✓ I often go to my cozy park. It is near my house and I think it is quite a beautiful park. It has lakes and many trees, so walking there makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.

'Let me go to work in my cozy park' is unnatural; use 'I often go to my cozy park' or 'I went to my cozy park'. 'It got legs' is incorrect; likely 'it has lakes'. Use present simple for habitual action. 'really fresh' should be 'refreshed' to describe feeling. Suggestion: choose correct verbs ('has') and adjectives ('refreshed').