Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice, and avoid repetition. Use one or two supporting details with linking words. Also correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., 'tentative steps' -> 'daily step goal' or 'a set number of steps').

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I try to reach my daily step goal every morning, and I usually take the stairs instead of the lift to get more activity.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and give a specific detail with a linking word. Avoid repetitions and correct grammar (e.g., 'went' not 'go').

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. For example, my mother and I walked to the nearby park for about half an hour most afternoons because she wanted us to stay healthy.

Sugerencia: Organize your answer: give a clear main reason and then two supporting points with linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary (e.g., 'parks are peaceful', 'reduce anxiety') and avoid filler sounds.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because they offer a peaceful natural environment. For instance, being surrounded by trees reduces stress and you can exercise or rest on benches, which makes parks suitable for both walking and relaxing.

Sugerencia: Be specific and fluent: state the place clearly (e.g., 'the Cornish coast' or 'the coast of Cornwall'), give a reason and one detail. Avoid vague endings.

Ejemplo: I would like to walk along the Cornish coast because I love the sea; the coastal paths offer great views and fresh air, which makes long walks very enjoyable.

Sugerencia: Use past tense for completed actions and keep the answer focused: give one clear detail about the recent walk and then a brief reason. Avoid overgeneralizing about others unless asked.

Ejemplo: I walked on my terrace today and completed my daily steps. I prefer short walks at home because they help me stay fit and are easy to do every day.

× Yes, I walk a lot. I always complete my tentative steps every morning and I use stairs instead of instead of lift or lift and I usually try to walk more.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot. I always complete my tentative steps every morning, and I use the stairs instead of the lift, and I usually try to walk more.

Multiple present-tense sentences need standard present-tense forms and articles. Add comma before conjunction for clarity; use definite article 'the' with 'stairs' and 'lift'; remove duplicate 'instead of'. Ensure parallel structure with 'and I' connecting clauses.

× Yes, I often go outside to have a walk when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I often went outside for a walk when I was a child.

The time clause 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'went' not present 'go'. Also change 'to have a walk' to natural collocation 'for a walk'.

× I go with my mother and walk and park for half an hour straight and and complete steps and I and my mother wants to stay healthy.

✓ I went with my mother and walked in the park for half an hour straight and completed steps, and my mother and I wanted to stay healthy.

Mix of tenses: because sentence refers to childhood, use past tense verbs 'went', 'walked', 'completed', 'wanted'. Correct word order 'my mother and I' as subject and remove duplicated 'and'. Use 'in the park' rather than 'and park'.

× People like to walk in parks because park have a park's car.

✓ People like to walk in parks because parks have a peaceful atmosphere.

Original phrase is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Park' as singular without article is wrong; 'park have' violates subject-verb agreement. Replace with clear noun phrase 'parks have a peaceful atmosphere' using plural subject and correct verb 'have'.

× MO more about nature, uh umm, it actually calm and help your anxiety become out in part.

✓ They enjoy being close to nature; it actually calms and helps reduce anxiety when you are in a park.

Sentence is fragmented and misuses verbs. Use plural subject 'they' to match 'people', verb 'calms' (third-person singular) and 'helps'. Replace 'become out in part' with natural expression 'reduce anxiety when you are in a park'.

× You can even walk run.

✓ You can even walk or run.

Missing conjunction 'or' between verbs; when listing actions after modal 'can', use base forms 'walk or run' not 'walk run'.

× You can when when you get tired, you can sit and.

✓ When you get tired, you can sit down.

Redundant 'when when' removed, and complete verb phrase 'sit down' is used. Keep simple present tense for general truth after 'when you get tired'.

× I would like to walk on a Cornish because I love sea and seaside at the best place to walk around so I think.

✓ I would like to walk on the Cornish coast because I love the sea and the seaside; they are the best places to walk around, I think.

'Cornish' should be 'Cornish coast' and needs definite article 'the'. Use 'the sea' and 'the seaside' with articles. Improve sentence structure and parallelism; add punctuation and 'I think' at end.

× I walk on my terrace today and I walk and completed my daily step.

✓ I walked on my terrace today and completed my daily steps.

Because speaker refers to today (past action completed), use past tense 'walked' and 'completed'. Also plural 'steps' is more natural.

× I love to stay healthy and I always keep people around me healthy and I try to make everyone stay healthy and keep checking on themselves.

✓ I love to stay healthy, and I always encourage people around me to be healthy; I try to help everyone take care of themselves and keep checking on their health.

Use present simple consistently; 'keep people around me healthy' is awkward—use 'encourage people around me to be healthy'. Improve verb choices and pronoun agreement ('their health' instead of 'themselves' ambiguity).