Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes, I walk regularly), correct grammar (use 'jog' or 'go jogging'), and avoid redundancy. Add one specific reason with a linking word. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk regularly. After work I usually go to the park near my home and jog or walk for about 30 minutes because it helps me unwind and stay fit. Also, the fresh air there clears my mind, so I sleep better at night.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and be specific about activities. Begin with a topic sentence (Yes, I often walked outside as a child), then give details using linking words. Correct vocabulary (swings, slides) and keep sentences clear.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. There was a park near my home where I went with my friends, and we played on the swings and slides. Those outings are wonderful memories because we spent hours running and laughing together.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and organize ideas with linking words. Use precise vocabulary (greenery, peaceful environment) and correct grammar. Give one or two clear reasons with examples to support your opinion.

Ejemplo: People like to walk in parks because of the fresh air and greenery. For example, parks often have trees and lakes, which create a peaceful atmosphere, so visitors can relax, exercise, or spend time with family away from city noise.

Sugerencia: Make the conditional sentence clearer and use correct facts. Start with a topic sentence and add a brief reason using linking words. Keep it concise and natural.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in the Olympic Park. It hosted the Olympic Games and has wide paths and historic stadiums, so walking there would be interesting and inspiring.

Sugerencia: Use past tense correctly and avoid repeating 'just'. Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific details (when, who, what you did) using linking words. Correct unclear phrases like 'have work near the lake'.

Ejemplo: Last weekend I went to a park with a friend. We had a picnic by the lake and walked along the shore, enjoying the sunshine, so it was a fantastic day.

× Yes, I work hard too often.

✓ Yes, I work too hard.

The adverb 'too often' means 'frequently' and does not fit with 'work hard' which describes intensity. The intended meaning is likely that the speaker works with excessive intensity, so the correct adverb placement and choice is 'too hard'. To improve, choose the adverb that matches intended meaning and place it before the adjective or after the verb appropriately (e.g., 'work too hard' or 'work very hard').

× I usually go to the park near my home to jogging or walking for 30 minutes after work because it helps me only and relax from the day work.

✓ I usually go to the park near my home to jog or walk for 30 minutes after work because it helps me relax after the day's work.

After 'to' use the base verb (infinitive), not the -ing form, so 'to jog' is correct. 'Helps me only and relax' is incorrect word order and word choice; use 'helps me relax' and express 'after the day's work' for time and possession. Improve by using infinitive after 'to', correct verb order, and possessive form 'day's work'.

× Yes, when I was a child there a park near my home and I often go there with my friend and just walking and playing some swaying and a slide.

✓ Yes, when I was a child there was a park near my home and I often went there with my friends, just walking and playing on the swings and the slide.

Use 'there was' to indicate existence in the past. Maintain past tense consistency: 'went' not 'go'. Use plural 'friends' if more than one friend is implied or 'my friend' if singular but keep consistency. Activities should be in base or -ing forms consistently: 'walking and playing on the swings and the slide'. Improve by matching past tense and correct prepositions ('on the swings').

× So yes, it's amazing memory.

✓ So yes, it's an amazing memory.

Countable noun 'memory' needs the indefinite article 'an'. Use articles with singular countable nouns. Improve by adding 'an' before 'amazing memory' or rephrase to 'those are amazing memories' for plural.

× I think the park environment is very amazing and surrounding some green tree and a lake and the environmental peaceful and quiet.

✓ I think the park environment is very pleasant, with green trees and a lake; it is peaceful and quiet.

'Surrounding some green tree' is ungrammatical — use 'with' to describe what the park has and plural 'trees'. 'The environmental peaceful and quiet' is incorrect word order and article use; say 'it is peaceful and quiet' or 'the environment is peaceful and quiet'. Improve by using appropriate linking words ('with') and correct adjective order.

× It can help me people relax on their own way.

✓ It can help people relax in their own way.

Mixing 'me' and 'people' is incorrect; choose one. Use 'in their own way' not 'on their own way'. Pronoun 'their' matches 'people' as plural. Improve by removing extra pronoun and using correct preposition 'in'.

× Well, I would just say I if I have any chance, I would like to visit the Olympic Park.

✓ Well, I would just say if I had the chance, I would like to visit the Olympic Park.

This is a hypothetical condition about the future from a present perspective, so use the second conditional: 'if I had the chance' with 'would'. The original mixes 'would' with present 'have', which is incorrect. Improve by using consistent conditional structure.

× It's a famous park, just hold the Olympic Games.

✓ It's a famous park that hosted the Olympic Games.

'Just hold' is wrong tense and word choice. Use past tense 'hosted' to indicate that the park was the venue for the Games. Also use a relative clause 'that hosted' to modify 'park'. Improve by using past tense for past events and appropriate verbs like 'hosted'.

× OK, the last weekend I just went to a park with my friend and we just have some picnic and have work near the lake and yes, it's a fantastic day.

✓ Last weekend I went to a park with my friend and we had a picnic near the lake, and yes, it was a fantastic day.

Use past tense consistently for past events: 'went', 'had', 'was'. Remove redundant 'just' and correct 'have work' to 'had a picnic' or 'walk' depending on intention. Improve by using past tense verbs and correct collocations ('had a picnic').