Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more fluent and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filled pauses (uh, umm), and keep to two or three supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “because” and “also”), and correct small grammatical issues (e.g. “on a daily basis”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I walk to school and to my extra classes every day, and I also enjoy taking walks early in the morning because it is peaceful and helps me start the day calmly.

Sugerencia: Give a clear past-tense topic sentence and avoid mixed tenses and unclear phrases. Remove hesitations and irrelevant fragments. Add one or two specific supporting details and link them (for example, “and,” “because,” “so”).

Ejemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. I used to take long walks with my family in the park after busy days, and I especially enjoyed exploring the paths and watching birds because it felt relaxing and fun.

Sugerencia: Provide a concise direct answer and use specific reasons without hesitations. Use correct collocations (e.g. “green spaces” not “a greenery area”) and complete the sentence. Include one or two clear reasons with linking words.

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because green spaces are peaceful and help reduce stress. Also, parks offer fresh air and pleasant scenery, so many people choose them to relax or exercise.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear conditional sentence (“If I had the chance, I would…”) and correct word choices and grammar (“a very big park,” “a 50-minute walk,” “early dawn”). Remove redundancy and keep to two supporting details that explain why.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the very big park in my town, which takes about 50 minutes to cross. I would choose the early dawn because it is quiet and relaxing and the air feels fresh.

Sugerencia: Answer directly in the past tense and avoid fillers. Use correct tense and phrasing (e.g. “I can't remember the last time I went for a walk; it was about five months ago”). Provide a brief reason and one detail about where you went.

Ejemplo: I can't remember exactly, but the last time I went for a walk was about five months ago. I was very busy with work and my schedule, and I walked once in a nearby park to relax.

× So I really love walking in my daily basis.

✓ So I really love walking on a daily basis.

The phrase 'in my daily basis' is incorrect collocation. Use the idiomatic prepositional phrase 'on a daily basis' to indicate frequency. Replace 'in my' with 'on a' for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× I used to go for long walks with my family in the parks.

✓ I used to go for long walks with my family in the park.

Plural 'parks' is acceptable if you mean many parks, but context suggests a general habit of walking in a local park; using singular 'the park' is more natural. This is mainly a noun choice rather than tense, but corrects natural reference. Keep past habitual 'used to' as is. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× I'll order in the streets, uh, just to relax after a busy day.

✓ I would walk in the streets just to relax after a busy day.

'I'll order' is likely an incorrect word choice and tense here. The intended meaning is past habitual action, so use 'I would walk' or 'I used to walk'. 'Order' is incorrect vocabulary; replace with 'walk'. Use past habitual form to match surrounding past narrative. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× And it was quite, uh, great and also an interesting thing for me when I was young.

✓ And it was quite great and an interesting experience for me when I was young.

'An interesting thing' is awkward; 'an interesting experience' is more natural. Also remove redundant 'also'. Maintain past tense 'was' to match context. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I think I go class.

✓ I think I went to class.

The original mixes present 'think' with incorrect verb form 'go' and missing preposition. The context is past, so use past tense 'went' and include 'to' before 'class'. If the intended meaning is present habit, say 'I think I go to class.' Adjust tense to match surrounding narrative. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× I think the main reason for this is because parks are a greenery area, so it's really peaceful and relaxing for people to have a, umm, their, umm, free time alone in, in these places, uh, which can be a really important for the.

✓ I think the main reason is that parks are green areas, so they are peaceful and relaxing places for people to spend their free time alone, which can be really important for them.

Several issues: 'reason for this is because' is redundant—use 'reason is that'. 'A greenery area' is ungrammatical; use adjective 'green' and plural 'areas' or 'a green area'. 'It's really peaceful' should agree with plural 'parks' so use 'they are'. Remove awkward filler and add 'for them' at end. This correction addresses article/adjective choice and pronoun agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× There is a beer big park in my town which takes 50 minutes walk and I think it would be really relaxing and great experience to take a long walk by myself in the morning because this place is always really quiet, especially in the early downs.

✓ There is a big park in my town that takes a 50-minute walk to reach, and I think it would be a really relaxing and great experience to take a long walk there by myself in the morning because it is always very quiet, especially early in the dawn.

Multiple errors: 'beer big' is a typo for 'big'; 'takes 50 minutes walk' needs 'takes a 50-minute walk to reach' or 'is a 50-minute walk away'. 'great experience' needs an article 'a'. 'early downs' is incorrect; use 'dawn' and phrase 'early in the dawn' or better 'early at dawn' or 'at dawn'. Also simplify pronouns: 'this place' -> 'it'. This addresses 'there is' usage and other structural fixes. Grammar problem type ID: 3

× I can't fully remember that I have take a walk in the few months umm because I've been busy with my uh, schedules and works.

✓ I can't fully remember; I haven't taken a walk in the past few months because I've been busy with my schedule and work.

'Have take' is incorrect: use the past participle 'taken' after 'have'. Use 'haven't taken' to express negative. 'In the few months' should be 'in the past few months'. 'Schedules and works' is uncountable/singular: use 'schedule' or 'schedules' appropriately and 'work' (uncountable) instead of 'works'. This corrects the present perfect and noun usage. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× So I think it was like umm, 5 months ago that I took a walk in the park.

✓ So I think it was about five months ago that I took a walk in the park.

'Like' as a filler is informal; replace with 'about' for clarity. Write numerals as words in speech corrections: 'five months ago'. Past tense 'took' is correct and matches context. This refines word choice and register. Grammar problem type ID: 5