Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one supporting detail. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., “I work in a restaurant,” “pick up orders”). Use linking phrase for clarity.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. I work in a restaurant, so I walk a lot during my shifts because I have to walk around to take and deliver customers’ orders.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently and avoid filler. Give a complete reason with a linking word. Correct phrases ("I liked" not "I'll like") and finish the sentence with a clear point.

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. I often went to the park near my home with friends because we enjoyed playing games there and it was a good way to get exercise and fresh air.

Sugerencia: Be specific and use appropriate vocabulary. Avoid repeating phrases ('In my opinion, I think'). Give 2–3 clear reasons and use linking words like 'because' or 'also'. Correct word choice (e.g., "good views" or "good wildlife").

Ejemplo: I think people enjoy walking in parks because the environment is pleasant — there are big trees and nice scenery — and also because parks often have wildlife and quiet paths for relaxation.

Sugerencia: Use conditional correctly and keep sentences natural. Start with the conditional phrase ('If I had the chance, I would...') then give specific reasons. Correct grammar ("there are tall trees," "a great environment").

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the park near my house because it has tall trees, a peaceful atmosphere, and fresh air.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and pronunciation. Replace 'lately' with 'recently' or rephrase. Use one conditional correctly ('if I have a chance' or 'I will go'). Keep it concise and finish clearly.

Ejemplo: I haven't gone for a walk recently because I've been very busy with work, but if I have the chance I will go to the park near my house.

× I need to work a lot per day because I work in restaurant and I need to pick a order from customer.

✓ I need to work a lot each day because I work in a restaurant and I need to pick up an order from a customer.

Multiple subject-verb and article issues: 'work in restaurant' needs the article 'a restaurant'; 'per day' is better as 'each day' or 'per day' but 'each day' sounds more natural; 'pick a order' needs 'pick up an order' (phrasal verb) and 'an order' because 'order' starts with a vowel sound; 'from customer' requires an article: 'from a customer'. Suggestion: include appropriate articles and use the phrasal verb 'pick up'.

× That's why I walk a lot in the day.

✓ That's why I walk a lot during the day.

Preposition choice: 'in the day' is awkward in this context; native speakers say 'during the day'. Change the preposition to 'during' for natural phrasing.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

This question is already correct for past habits; no grammatical correction needed.

× I'll like to go outside with my friends to play in the park nearby my home and I enjoy these activities because, uh, I can exercise and have.

✓ I used to like going outside with my friends to play in the park near my home, and I enjoyed these activities because I could exercise and have fun.

Tense and modal/verb form errors: 'I'll like' incorrectly uses future modal; for past habit use 'I used to like' or 'I liked'. 'Go' should be 'going' after 'like' when describing a habitual activity. 'Nearby my home' should be 'near my home'. 'I enjoy' should match past context: 'I enjoyed'. 'I can exercise and have' is incomplete—add 'fun'. Also change 'can' to 'could' to match past context. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for childhood habits and use gerund after 'like'.

× In my opinion, I think because of environment, because in the park have, uh, big trees, uh, and Good Wife, so people like.

✓ In my opinion, it's because of the environment: parks have big trees, good facilities, and fresh air, so people like them.

Several issues: redundancy 'In my opinion, I think'—use one phrase ('In my opinion' or 'I think'). 'Because of environment' needs the definite article 'the environment'. 'Because in the park have' is ungrammatical; use 'parks have' or 'the park has'. 'Good Wife' is incorrect—likely 'good facilities' or 'good wildlife'; context suggests 'good facilities' or 'nice environment'. Sentence needs an object 'them' after 'like'. Suggestion: simplify and use proper subject-verb order and articles.

× Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

✓ Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?

This sentence is correct and requires no article correction.

× For me, I like to take a long walk and park nearby my house because there has a long tree and great environment and have fresh air.

✓ For me, I like to take a long walk in the park near my house because there are tall trees, a great environment, and fresh air.

Multiple issues: 'and park nearby my house' missing preposition 'in the park' or 'to the park'; 'there has a long tree' is ungrammatical—use 'there are' for plural or 'there is' for singular; 'long tree' should be 'tall trees'. 'great environment' needs an article or can be fine as 'a great environment'. 'and have fresh air' should be 'and fresh air' as part of the list. Also subject-verb agreement: 'there are'. Suggestion: use 'in the park near my house' and correct 'there are tall trees'.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

Word choice: 'lately' and 'recently' are similar but 'recently' is more natural in questions about past activities with 'did'. No tense change needed; suggest 'recently' for naturalness.

× I didn't go for a walk lately because nowadays I'm super busy with work, but if I have change I I will go to the park nearby my house.

✓ I haven't gone for a walk lately because these days I'm super busy with work, but if I have the chance I will go to the park near my house.

Tense and word choice errors: 'I didn't go for a walk lately' mixes simple past with 'lately'; use present perfect 'I haven't gone' to describe recent absence. 'Nowadays' and 'lately' overlap; use 'these days' instead of 'nowadays' for fluency. 'If I have change' should be 'if I have the chance'. Remove duplicated 'I'. 'Nearby my house' -> 'near my house'. Suggestion: use present perfect for recent experiences and correct collocations.