Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Your answer is relevant and gives reasons, but it has some grammatical errors, slightly repetitive phrases and an idiom that sounds unnatural here. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences), use correct verb forms and vary vocabulary. Add a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and a linking word for coherence.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk every day. I usually walk for about 30 minutes because it boosts my energy and helps me stay physically and mentally healthy. For example, a short walk before work clears my mind and improves my concentration.

Sugerencia: Good content and personal details, but there are problems with tense consistency, word choice (e.g., 'salad days' is awkward), grammar and redundancy. Use past tense consistently, choose simple natural expressions, and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide one specific memory or example to make it more vivid.

Ejemplo: Yes, I often walked with my parents when I was a child. We usually spent 30–40 minutes walking in the neighborhood park, which made me feel happy and relaxed. I remember picking wildflowers on those walks, which made them special.

Sugerencia: Your answer addresses the question but contains informal or odd phrases ('Talking Turkey'), grammar errors and vague wording. Avoid idioms unless used correctly, use plural/singular agreement, and give one or two clear reasons with linking words (e.g., 'because', 'for example').

Ejemplo: People enjoy walking in parks because the natural surroundings are relaxing and pleasant. For example, the trees and open space reduce stress and fresh air can make them feel more energetic.

Sugerencia: The idea is clear but phrasing is awkward and some expressions are unclear ('realistic behaviour'). Use conditional correctly, correct articles ('an open landscape'), and explain briefly why that place appeals to you with a concrete detail. Keep it natural and concise.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk across an open countryside. The wide views and quiet atmosphere would help me relax and think clearly, and walking there would be great exercise.

Sugerencia: Your answer is personal and descriptive but has tense errors ('go' should be 'went'), awkward phrasing and some redundancy. Use past tense for a past event, give one specific detail about the walk, and link reasons to effects clearly.

Ejemplo: A few days ago I went for a walk with my mother in the nearby fields. The fresh air and green scenery lifted my mood and helped me forget the stress of a busy week.

× Yes, I walk a lot in a day because it helps me to stay fit and give me energy to work properly.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot during the day because it helps me to stay fit and gives me energy to work properly.

Subject-verb agreement and tense consistency: 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Also 'in a day' is awkward; 'during the day' is natural. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree with their subjects and choose common time expressions ('during the day').

× Moreover, I walk about 30 minutes a day to keep my mental as well as physical health fit as a fiddle.

✓ Moreover, I walk about 30 minutes a day to keep my mental and physical health fit.

Idiom misuse and redundancy: 'fit as a fiddle' is idiomatic and can be used, but pairing it with 'mental as well as physical health' is awkward. Also 'mental as well as physical' is wordy. Use parallel 'mental and physical' and omit the extra idiom or place it correctly. Suggestion: Use parallel structure and avoid unnecessary idioms in formal responses.

× Yes definitely, I usually went for a walk in my salad days with my parents for about 30 to 40 minutes in a day and it also give me a true happiness whenever I go for a walk with my family because it uplift my mood and also maintain my health fit.

✓ Yes, definitely. I usually went for a walk in my childhood with my parents for about 30 to 40 minutes a day, and it gave me true happiness whenever I went for a walk with my family because it uplifted my mood and helped maintain my health.

Tense consistency and subject-verb agreement: Mixed present and past verbs cause confusion. 'Give' should be 'gave', 'go' -> 'went', 'uplift' -> 'uplifted', 'maintain' -> 'helped maintain'. Also 'salad days' is informal/archaic; 'childhood' is clearer. 'In a day' -> 'a day'. Suggestion: Keep past events in past tense and ensure verbs agree with subjects.

× Talking Turkey people mostly love to walk in parks because the green grass gives them happiness and fascinating view which improves their mental as well as physical health.

✓ To be frank, people mostly love to walk in parks because the green grass gives them pleasure and a fascinating view, which improves their mental and physical health.

Incorrect phrase and word choice: 'Talking Turkey' is informal and misapplied; 'To be frank' or simply omit it. 'Gives them happiness' is better as 'gives them pleasure' and 'fascinating view' needs an article 'a'. Use parallel 'mental and physical'. Suggestion: Use appropriate transitional phrases and correct articles with countable nouns.

× Working in park give them energy and also uplift their moods.

✓ Walking in the park gives them energy and also uplifts their mood.

Verb agreement and word choice: 'give' should be 'gives' to agree with singular subject; 'Working in park' is incorrect — likely 'walking in the park'. 'Uplift' -> 'uplifts'; 'moods' -> 'mood' for general statement. Suggestion: Match verbs to subjects and choose accurate nouns/verbs.

× To be honest, I would like to take a long walk on a open landscape whenever I give a chance in the future because it gives me a stress free view and also give me a realistic behaviour which helps me to stay fit.

✓ To be honest, I would like to take a long walk on an open landscape if I get the chance in the future because it gives me a stress-free view and also gives me a sense of realism which helps me stay fit.

Article and verb issues: 'a open' should be 'an open' because 'open' begins with a vowel sound. 'Whenever I give a chance' is incorrect; use 'if I get the chance'. 'Give' should be 'gives' to agree with 'it'. 'Stress free' -> 'stress-free' (hyphen). 'Realistic behaviour' is unclear; 'a sense of realism' fits better. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps me'. Suggestion: Use correct articles before vowel sounds, keep verb agreement, and prefer natural collocations.

× I vividly remember that a few days ago I go for a walk with my mother in the fields, which enhance my knowledge about the lush greenery and also uplift my mood.

✓ I vividly remember that a few days ago I went for a walk with my mother in the fields, which enhanced my appreciation for the lush greenery and also uplifted my mood.

Tense consistency: 'go' should be 'went' to match past time 'a few days ago'. 'Enhance' and 'uplift' should be past: 'enhanced', 'uplifted'. 'Knowledge about' is awkward; 'appreciation for' is more natural. Suggestion: Use past tense for past events and choose natural collocations.

× It helps me to reduce my stress from my hectic schedule and I also see our beautiful nature views.

✓ It helped me reduce stress from my hectic schedule, and I also enjoyed the beautiful natural scenery.

Tense mismatch and word choice: Original mixes present and past; since describing a past walk use past 'helped'. 'Reduce my stress from my hectic schedule' simplifies to 'reduce stress from my hectic schedule'. 'See our beautiful nature views' is awkward; 'enjoyed the beautiful natural scenery' is clearer. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use natural collocations like 'natural scenery'.