Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: ปรับโครงสร้างให้เริ่มตอบตรงคำถามก่อน แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดสั้นๆ อย่างชัดเจน ใช้วลีธรรมชาติแทนการแปลจากภาษาไทย เช่น "In my opinion" ให้เป็น "I usually..." ลดความซ้ำซ้อนและแก้ไวยากรณ์ (เช่น 'the canteen is small and has limited food options'). พยายามไม่เกิน 4-5 ประโยคและใช้คำเชื่อมสั้นๆ เช่น 'so' หรือ 'because'.

Ejemplo: I don't walk a lot, but I usually take a short walk during lunch with colleagues because our office canteen is small and has limited food options, so we go outside to find something different.

Sugerencia: เริ่มด้วยประโยคตอบตรง เช่น 'Yes, I did.' จากนั้นอธิบายโดยใช้คำกริยาที่ถูกต้องและเรียงลำดับเวลาให้ชัดเจน ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'usually' หรือ 'every' ให้เหมาะสม แก้ tense และรูปประโยค เช่น 'my parents used to take me' และลดความฟุ่มเฟือยของคำ

Ejemplo: Yes, I did. My parents used to take me to the public park almost every weekend, where I would run and play, so I grew up with a habit of exercising outdoors.

Sugerencia: ตอบให้ชัดเจนว่าเพราะอะไร ใช้ประโยคสั้นๆ และเหตุผลที่เฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น ได้ผ่อนคลาย ได้อากาศบริสุทธิ์ ประหยัดค่าใช้จ่าย หลีกเลี่ยงประโยคไม่สมบูรณ์และคำแปลที่ผิดพลาด แสดงด้วย linking words เช่น 'because' หรือ 'also' และให้ตัวอย่างสั้นๆ

Ejemplo: People like walking in parks because it's relaxing and offers fresh air. It's also an inexpensive way to exercise, and many parks have pleasant scenery that makes walks more enjoyable.

Sugerencia: ตอบโดยระบุสถานที่ชัดเจนและเหตุผลสั้นๆ ใช้โครงสร้าง 'I would like to...' ตามด้วยเหตุผลและรายละเอียดเฉพาะ เช่น เส้นทาง ง่ายหรือยาก ใช้ linking word 'because' หรือ 'since' และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อนหรือคำแปลผิดพลาด

Ejemplo: I'd love to take a long walk in Hawaii, especially to hike Diamond Head, because the trail is scenic and relatively easy, so it's perfect for a long, relaxing walk.

Sugerencia: ตอบให้ตรงเวลาและสถานที่โดยเริ่ม 'I went to...' แล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียดสั้นๆ เช่นกับใคร ทำไมไป และกิจกรรมที่ทำ ใช้ past tense ให้ถูกต้องและหลีกเลี่ยงประโยคไม่สมบูรณ์ ควรเชื่อมเหตุผลด้วย 'because' หรือ 'so'.

Ejemplo: Yesterday I went for a walk to Nang Len Market with a colleague. We took a break from work, had lunch there, and enjoyed walking around the market together.

× For my opinion, I think I usually walk when I have lunch with my friends in the office because of the canteen in my office is so small and limited of foods and is not a widened allocation for.

✓ In my opinion, I usually walk when I have lunch with my friends at the office because the canteen there is very small and has limited food and space.

Use 'In my opinion' not 'For my opinion' (incorrect preposition/phrase). Use 'at the office' for location. Remove redundant 'my office' and 'because of' + clause: use 'because' + clause. Use 'limited food' not 'limited of foods' and 'space' instead of 'widened allocation'. Use concise noun phrases. Suggestion: learn common opinion phrase 'In my opinion' and prepositions of place ('at the office', 'in the office') and how to link clauses with 'because'.

× Of course, my parent usually bring me to the public park to walk and run or exercise in the park at the weekend, and then I think that I am used to be the routine lightest.

✓ Of course, my parents usually brought me to the public park to walk, run, or exercise at the weekend, and I think I used to have this light routine.

Subject 'parent' should be plural 'parents' to match context (agreement). 'Bring' should be past 'brought' because question asks about childhood (past tense). 'At the weekend' is fine; remove redundant 'in the park'. 'I am used to be the routine lightest' is ungrammatical; correct to 'I used to have this light routine' (idiomatic past habit). Suggestion: match subject number and tense to context and use common expressions like 'used to' for past habits.

× It's more than exercise for good healthy, but it seemed the basic movement to relax myself and is the best way to exercise at a low price.

✓ It's more than exercise for good health; it seems a basic movement to relax myself and is the best low-cost way to exercise.

Use noun 'health' not adjective 'healthy' after 'for'. 'More than exercise for good health' is acceptable with 'health'. 'Seemed' should be 'seems' if speaking generally (present). Use 'low-cost' instead of 'at a low price'. Suggestion: use correct nouns/adjectives (health vs healthy), maintain present tense for general truths, and use idiomatic phrases like 'low-cost'.

× I think that working in the parks you can seeking in every.

✓ I think that walking in parks lets you explore everywhere.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and confusing. 'Working in the parks' likely should be 'walking in parks'. 'You can seeking in every' mixes verb forms and lacks object. Use 'lets you explore everywhere' for intended meaning. Suggestion: choose correct verb (walk vs work) and use proper verb forms and objects; keep simple clause structure 'subject + verb + object'.

× I would like to recommend to take a long walk that I have a chance to long walk in Hawaii is especially that you want to have a good exercise with the easy trekking to the Diamond Head.

✓ I would recommend taking a long walk in Hawaii, especially if you want a good exercise with an easy trek to Diamond Head.

Avoid 'recommend to take' — use 'recommend taking' (verb pattern). Remove redundant phrases and use articles correctly: 'an easy trek' and no 'the' before 'Diamond Head' if treated as proper noun (or 'to Diamond Head'). Also simplify tense. Suggestion: learn verb + gerund patterns after 'recommend' and use concise phrasing.

× It just seem like that it's accessible for.

✓ It just seems accessible.

Verb 'seem' must be 'seems' to agree with singular subject 'It' (third person singular). Remove unnecessary 'like that' and 'for'. Suggestion: use 'seems' and concise expressions.

× Yesterday when I invited my colleague to have lunch at Nanglen Market, is is a break about the work and we can help her share the time in a free time together.

✓ Yesterday I invited my colleague to have lunch at Nanglen Market; it was a break from work and we could spend some free time together.

Remove unnecessary 'when' after 'Yesterday' and use past tense 'was' for 'it was a break from work'. 'Is is' is incorrect repetition. Use idiomatic 'a break from work' and 'spend some free time together' rather than 'help her share the time'. Suggestion: use past tense for past events, correct idioms 'break from work' and 'spend time together'.