Walking— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be concise, use correct verb forms, plural/singular, and remove fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking phrase. Aim for natural phrasing: “I walk a lot” instead of “I do work a lot.”

Ejemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I walk to work most days, and at the weekend I often go to the local park to exercise and enjoy the fresh air.

Sugerencia: Use past tense consistently, correct vocabulary (e.g. ‘walked’, ‘camp’ vs ‘lodge’), and remove repetition. Give one clear reason and one specific detail. Link ideas with words like “because” or “so” correctly.

Ejemplo: Yes, I walked a lot as a child because my school was far from home, so I walked to school every day with my friends. At weekends we often spent time in the park playing and walking together.

Sugerencia: Avoid hesitations and use precise vocabulary. Keep present tense for general statements, and organize reasons with linking phrases like “First,” “Also,” or “Finally.” Avoid unclear phrases like “the natural of the park and us.”

Ejemplo: I think people enjoy walking in parks for several reasons. Firstly, parks offer fresh air and pleasant scenery, and secondly, walking there is a simple way to improve physical health and reduce stress.

Sugerencia: Use the correct conditional and verb forms: “If I had the chance, I would choose to walk” (not ‘work’). Avoid filler words and maintain subject-verb agreement. Provide one specific location and a brief reason.

Ejemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a national park or a quiet rural area because I enjoy natural scenery and fresh air.

Sugerencia: Use correct past tense and natural collocations: “went for a walk” and “he really enjoyed it.” Keep sentences short and clear, and include one specific detail linking the actions and reaction.

Ejemplo: I went for a walk with my son yesterday in the park near our house. We fed some dogs there, and he really enjoyed the experience.

× I do work a lot on my daily routines because I have to walk to work and also on the weekend I love to go to a parks and walk around in order to, uh, exercise and enjoy the fresh air.

✓ I work a lot in my daily routine because I have to walk to work, and on the weekend I love to go to parks and walk around to exercise and enjoy the fresh air.

Errors: unnecessary 'do' auxiliary for simple present statement; 'on my daily routines' wrong preposition and plural; 'a parks' incorrect article and plural; 'in order to, uh, exercise' wordiness and filler. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions (I work), use 'in my daily routine' or 'in my daily routines' depending on meaning but 'routine' is more common; plural 'parks' without 'a'; remove filler and use 'to exercise'.

× Yes, I walk at the lodge when I was a child because my home was far from my school so that I have to work every day with friends to school and also on the weekend.

✓ Yes, I walked to the lodge when I was a child because my home was far from my school, so I had to walk to school every day with friends and also on the weekend.

Errors: present tense 'walk' used in a past context; 'have to' should be past 'had to'; word order 'work every day with friends to school' is incorrect and 'work' is wrong verb. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for past events (walked, had to), use 'walk to school' and place time expressions correctly.

× I love spend times on parks and have a walk with my friends.

✓ I love spending time in parks and taking walks with my friends.

Errors: 'love spend' should be 'love spending' (verb + -ing after 'love'); 'times' should be uncountable 'time' in this context; 'on parks' wrong preposition; 'have a walk' is acceptable but 'take a walk' or 'taking walks' is more natural. Suggestion: Use gerund after verbs of preference, use correct prepositions ('in parks') and singular 'time' for general activity.

× I personally think that uh, people loved walking in a park because they love to enjoy the fresh air, the environment, the natural of the park and us.

✓ I personally think that people enjoy walking in parks because they like to enjoy the fresh air, the environment, and the natural features of the park.

Errors: inconsistent tenses 'loved' vs 'love'; unnecessary filler 'uh'; 'the natural of the park' is ungrammatical; 'and us' is incorrect/unclear. Suggestion: Keep present tense for general statements (people enjoy/like), use 'natural features' or 'natural beauty', remove filler and unclear phrases.

× At the same time, they can improve their physical health by exercising through walking.

✓ At the same time, they can improve their physical health by exercising, such as by walking.

Original sentence is mostly acceptable but slightly awkward 'exercising through walking'. Suggestion: Rephrase to 'exercising, such as by walking' or 'by walking' to be clearer and natural.

× If I have the chance, I would choose to work in natural parks or a rural area because I enjoys, uh, natural scenery and the fresh air.

✓ If I had the chance, I would choose to walk in natural parks or a rural area because I enjoy natural scenery and the fresh air.

Errors: Mixed conditional: 'If I have the chance' should be past subjunctive 'If I had the chance' when followed by 'would'; 'choose to work' is wrong verb (should be 'walk'); 'enjoys' wrong verb form for subject 'I'; filler 'uh'. Suggestion: Use correct conditional structure (If I had..., I would...), use correct verb forms and remove filler.

× Oh I just went to a walk with my son yesterday at a park near my house and we fed some dogs which he was very enjoy.

✓ Oh, I just went for a walk with my son yesterday at a park near my house, and we fed some dogs that he really enjoyed.

Errors: 'went to a walk' should be 'went for a walk'; tense/word choice 'which he was very enjoy' incorrect: use past tense 'he really enjoyed' or 'he enjoyed it very much'; relative clause use 'that' or 'which' with correct structure. Suggestion: Use correct collocations ('go for a walk'), correct past tense for reactions ('enjoyed'), and natural adverb placement ('really enjoyed' or 'enjoyed it').