Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Give a clear topic sentence, avoid slang ('yeah'), correct grammar, and add one brief reason or example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ejemplo: I sometimes enjoy reading, especially when a book has an engaging plot or interesting ideas. However, if a book is boring or poorly written, I quickly lose interest and stop reading it. For example, I recently enjoyed a mystery novel because its twists kept me turning the pages.

Sugerencia: Start with a clear preference sentence, correct grammar (use present simple and proper phrasing), and add a concise reason with a linking word. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ejemplo: I prefer to read on paper because it feels more comfortable and less tiring for my eyes. For instance, reading on a screen often strains my eyes after a short time, so I choose printed books for longer reading sessions.

Sugerencia: Answer directly with two clear parts (when you need to read carefully and when not). Fix grammar and use linking words like 'when' and 'but' to contrast. Provide a short specific example for clarity.

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when the topic is unfamiliar or complex because I have to understand the details. But when the material is simple or written in plain language, I can read more quickly without focusing on every sentence.

Sugerencia: State your preference clearly, correct grammar (use 'scanning' vs 'scan', plural/singular), and give one concise reason plus a brief comment on time. Use linking words like 'because' and 'although'.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I find scanning makes it hard to grasp important information. Although detailed reading takes more time, it helps me understand the material better and I find it more engaging.

× Sometimes yeah when a book is interesting I like to read but when the book is so boring I just hate reading.

✓ Sometimes, when a book is interesting, I like to read, but when the book is very boring, I just hate reading.

Run-on ideas and informal fillers: add commas to separate clauses and replace 'so boring' with 'very boring' for natural register. No major tense change needed; maintain present tense. Suggestion: use commas to separate dependent clauses and choose more appropriate intensifier words.

× I prefer to read on paper because for me it is more comfortable than reading on a screen. My eyes just been going very hard to read in the screen.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it is more comfortable than reading on a screen. My eyes have just been straining too much when I read on a screen.

Incorrect verb form: 'just been going very hard' is ungrammatical. Use present perfect continuous 'have been straining' to show ongoing effect up to now. Replace 'in the screen' with 'on a screen' (preposition correction). Also remove redundant 'for me' and reorder for clarity.

× I need to read carefully when I do not understand And the topic and sometimes I not have to read carefully when the book is so simple and easy to understand.

✓ I need to read carefully when I do not understand the topic, and sometimes I do not have to read carefully when the book is very simple and easy to understand.

Errors: capitalization ('And') and missing auxiliary verb 'do' in negative 'I not have'—use 'I do not have'. Maintain present tense. Also move 'the topic' next to 'understand' for correct word order and replace 'so simple' with 'very simple' for natural usage.

× I prefer detailed reading because I just can't scanning the that the book because for me so difficult to understand and detail reading is more for me interesting. Maybe it's a little spend a lot time for it, but it's better.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I just can't scan the book; it is too difficult for me to understand, and detailed reading is more interesting for me. Maybe it takes a lot of time, but it's better.

Several issues: 'can't scanning' mixes modal + gerund incorrectly—use 'can't scan' (base verb after modal). Remove duplicated 'the that'. Use 'too difficult' rather than 'so difficult' and correct word order 'for me to understand'. Use noun-adjective order 'detailed reading' and replace 'a little spend a lot time' with 'it takes a lot of time' (correct verb and idiom). Maintain tense and meaning.