Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Improve grammar and sentence structure, use a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and add a specific detail or example. Also use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., 'however', 'for example'). Keep answers natural and within 3–4 sentences.

Ejemplo: I enjoy reading depending on the material. For example, I dislike IELTS reading passages because they often feel boring and dry; however, I love my favourite book, The Psychology of Money, because it teaches practical lessons about investing and managing money.

Sugerencia: Correct word choice and grammar, begin with a clear topic sentence, and give concise reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words (uh) and redundant phrases. Provide one or two precise reasons (cost, convenience, ecology) and a short example if helpful.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on a screen now. Because the internet is more accessible and digital books are often cheaper, I find screens more convenient; moreover, I try to be eco-friendly, so I avoid buying many paper books.

Sugerencia: Use correct tense and clearer structure: start with a topic sentence, then give two contrasting specific examples using linking words (e.g., 'for example', 'but'). Fix grammar (e.g., 'I had to read slides in detail' not 'have to'). Avoid vague phrases like 'the fakes' — be specific (e.g., 'social media posts').

Ejemplo: I need to read carefully when studying medical materials. For example, during anatomy courses I had to study lecture slides in detail because mistakes can affect clinical practice; but I read less carefully when browsing comics or casual posts on my phone.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear topic sentence and correct vocabulary (use 'detailed reading' not 'deteriorate leading'). Use correct verb forms and concise reasons with linking words. Give one specific example for each mode (detailed vs scanning) and avoid repetition.

Ejemplo: It depends on the purpose: I prefer detailed reading for study and scanning for exam practice. For instance, I use detailed reading when learning anatomy to remember facts for tests, but I scan quickly when doing IELTS practice to improve speed and find key information.

× If I talk about IELTS reading, I really hate to reading them because sometimes it's made me bored.

✓ If I talk about IELTS reading, I really hate reading it because sometimes it makes me bored.

Use the gerund 'reading' after 'hate' (not 'to reading'). Also 'reading' here refers to the activity (singular/uncountable), so use 'it' rather than 'them'. Use present simple 'makes' for habitual effect, not 'made' or 'is made'. Suggestion: Use 'hate + verb-ing' and match pronoun number to the noun.

× But if I talk about my favorite book Psychology of Money, I really into them because whenever I read them I gain a lot of knowledge about investment and money.

✓ But if I talk about my favorite book, The Psychology of Money, I am really into it because whenever I read it I gain a lot of knowledge about investing and money.

Use 'am really into' (correct verb + preposition). 'Book' is singular so use the singular pronoun 'it' not 'them'. Use 'investing' (gerund) after 'knowledge about'. Also add article 'The' for the book title and commas for clarity.

× In the past I used to wait on the paper because it's more affordable and cheap.

✓ In the past I used to wait for paper because it was more affordable and cheaper.

'Wait on the paper' is incorrect; use 'wait for' when expecting something, but context likely means 'read on paper' or 'use paper'. Also maintain tense consistency: 'used to' pairs with past 'was'. Use comparative 'cheaper' rather than 'cheap' when comparing.

× However nowadays uh social media and Internet is more accessible so it's going to be on screen and also I'm a eco friendly person so on screen is really convenient for me.

✓ However nowadays social media and the Internet are more accessible, so it's more common to read on a screen, and I'm an eco-friendly person, so reading on a screen is really convenient for me.

'Social media and Internet' is a compound subject and requires plural verb 'are'. Use article 'the' with 'Internet'. 'It's going to be on screen' is awkward; use 'more common to read on a screen'. 'A eco friendly' should be 'an eco-friendly' (use 'an' before vowel sound). Hyphenate 'eco-friendly'.

× When I was a medical student, when I have to read a slide, I have to read all of the detail because I have to do the clinic like studying about human anatomy.

✓ When I was a medical student, when I had to read a slide, I had to read all of the details because I had clinical duties, such as studying human anatomy.

Maintain past tense consistency: 'was' should pair with 'had to' and 'had'. Use plural 'details' and 'clinical duties' (or 'do clinical work'). 'Like studying about' is unnatural; use 'such as studying' and omit 'about'.

× Yeah, so I have to studying a lot and read all of the detail.

✓ Yeah, so I had to study a lot and read all of the details.

After 'have to' use the base verb 'study', not 'studying'. Keep past tense 'had to' to match earlier context and use plural 'details'.

× Uh, and when I didn't read carefully, it's going to be when I read the comic and the fakes on my phone.

✓ Uh, and when I don't read carefully, it is when I read comics and fake posts on my phone.

The sentence mixes past and future forms. For a general habit use present simple: 'when I don't read carefully'. Use plural 'comics' and 'fake posts' for natural phrasing. Replace 'it's going to be' with 'it is'.

× It would depends on what type of book.

✓ It would depend on what type of book it is.

After modal 'would' use base verb 'depend' not 'depends'. Add a clause 'it is' for completeness.

× Yeah, that I say if I studying about human anatomy, I prefer deteriorate leading because there is the things that require in the test day.

✓ If I am studying human anatomy, I prefer detailed reading because there are things that are required on test day.

'If I studying' should be 'If I am studying' (present continuous). 'Deteriorate leading' is incorrect — intended meaning is 'detailed reading'. Use 'detailed' (adjective) and 'reading' (noun). Use 'there are' for plural 'things' and 'required on test day' for correct phrasing.

× However, if I talk about scanning reading, I would I would prefer doing them and IELTS reading because it's really fast.

✓ However, if I talk about skimming, I would prefer doing that in the IELTS reading test because it's really fast.

'Scanning reading' is incorrect term; use 'skimming' or 'scanning' (choose one). Do not repeat 'I would'. Use singular demonstrative 'that' to refer to the activity. Use 'in the IELTS reading test' for clarity.