Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct odd phrases (e.g. "as a book one") and avoid redundancy.

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. For the past ten years I have read widely, which I find inspiring because books introduce me to new ideas and opportunities. For example, reading biographies has helped me learn different career paths and think about my future.

Sugerencia: Provide a clear direct answer, tidy up phrasing, and limit to two supporting points with a linking word. Replace unclear phrases ("chat type feeling") with precise descriptions.

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and enjoy the tactile sensation of turning pages. In addition, paper is less tiring for my eyes, so I can read for longer periods without discomfort.

Sugerencia: Answer directly and use clearer vocabulary and structure. State the general rule then give specific examples; use linking words like "however" or "for example" and avoid hesitations.

Ejemplo: It depends on the material. For example, I need to read carefully for academic papers or legal documents because they require concentration and analysis; however, I usually read novels more casually for enjoyment.

Sugerencia: Give a clear direct statement, correct unclear words (replace "skinny"), and use one linking word to contrast the two modes. Be specific about when you use each method.

Ejemplo: I use scanning for news articles because I only need the main idea quickly. In contrast, I read in detail for important documents or research papers so that I can fully understand and analyze the content.

× Well, as a book one, I've been reading books for over 10 years now.

✓ Well, as a book lover, I've been reading books for over ten years now.

The phrase 'book one' is incorrect; it seems the student meant 'book lover' (a noun phrase). Also write numbers under ten in words; 'ten' is stylistic. Use 'lover' as correct noun to describe someone who likes books.

× I find reading very inspiring and I think that reading books can actually open doors for gaining opportunities and experiences of outside world.

✓ I find reading very inspiring, and I think that reading books can open doors to opportunities and experiences in the outside world.

The original has awkward phrasing and missing prepositions. Use 'open doors to' and 'in the outside world'. Also remove redundant words like 'actually' and 'gaining' which clutter the sentence.

× Well I'm more into reading physical words because I find it easier to concentrate and I like the chat type feeling of turning the pages on pages and they're also less tiring for my eyes so I can read for longer without discomfort.

✓ Well, I'm more into reading physical books because I find it easier to concentrate, and I like the tactile feeling of turning pages; they're also less tiring for my eyes, so I can read for longer without discomfort.

Multiple issues: 'physical words' is incorrect; use 'physical books'. 'Chat type' likely intended 'tactile'. Run-on sentence needs punctuation. 'They're' correctly refers to 'books'. Break into clearer clauses and use appropriate vocabulary.

× Well, I think it actually depends on what type it was that people are going to read.

✓ Well, I think it actually depends on what type of text people are going to read.

The phrase 'what type it was that people are going to read' mixes tenses and uses incorrect word order. Use 'what type of text' and keep future/intent 'are going to read' consistent.

× Because for some academics, I think I really, I do really need to concentrate and put in a lot of effort.

✓ For academic texts, I really need to concentrate and put in a lot of effort.

Redundant fillers 'I think I really, I do really' should be removed. Use 'academic texts' instead of 'some academics' (people vs texts). Keep present simple for general truth.

× But for some novels I can just read, you know, for fun.

✓ But for some novels, I can just read for fun.

Remove filler 'you know' for clarity; add comma after 'novels'. Present simple 'can read' is fine.

× What I would say I genuinely use scanning or skinny for news articles because I want to get the main idea quickly, but for important documents or you know, research papers that I need to understand fully so I read in detail so I can analyze.

✓ What I would say is I usually use scanning for news articles because I want to get the main idea quickly, but for important documents or research papers that I need to understand fully, I read in detail so I can analyze them.

'Genuinely' and 'skinny' are incorrect here; 'usually' and 'scanning' fit. 'Skinny' is wrong word. Sentence was a run-on: add 'is' after 'What I would say', insert commas, and include object 'them' after 'analyze' for completeness.