Reading— Part 1 Informe

Sugerencia: Be more concise and correct minor grammar and fluency issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words (e.g., "on on", "to to").

Ejemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading. For example, in my free time I usually read novels for relaxation or articles about sports and world affairs to stay informed.

Sugerencia: Use a clear comparison structure and correct collocations. Begin with a direct preference sentence, then contrast with a brief reason for the alternative. Avoid vague phrases like "how it gives you" and fillers such as "uh."

Ejemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it gives a tactile feel and helps me concentrate. However, reading on a screen is more convenient and quicker when I need to find information fast.

Sugerencia: Make the contrast clearer and correct grammar. Use linking words like "however" or "whereas." Replace unclear words ("ener analyse") with precise verbs such as "analyze." Provide specific examples of what requires careful reading.

Ejemplo: I usually read novels casually for enjoyment. However, I read news about world affairs or job-related reports carefully because I need to analyze facts and understand how they might affect my career.

Sugerencia: Give a concise topic sentence and support it with a clear reason and a short example. Remove fillers and incomplete phrases. Use correct linking ("because" + reason) and finish your thought clearly.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I like to notice connections in the plot or details in news articles. For example, when reading a novel I pay attention to early clues that explain later events.

× Yes, I'd like to have some time for reading.

✓ Yes, I'd like to have some time to read.

The verb form after 'have time' should be the base form 'to read' or the bare infinitive 'read' (depending on context). Using 'for reading' is less natural in this context. Use 'to read' to express intention or preference.

× Even when I have free time, I prefer reading a novel or any article that is relevant to my to sports or what's going on on on world affairs.

✓ Even when I have free time, I prefer reading a novel or any article that is relevant to sports or to what is going on in world affairs.

Issues: repeated 'on' and incorrect 'my to sports'. Use 'relevant to sports' or 'relevant to my sports interests' and 'what is going on in world affairs' with 'in' for the area. Also remove duplicate words. Use 'what is' instead of contracted or missing verb.

× Well, if you ask me, I would definitely prefer reading on a paper because how it gives you the physical feel and you're more engaged while you're reading on a physical object.

✓ Well, if you ask me, I would definitely prefer reading on paper because it gives you a physical feel and you are more engaged when reading a physical object.

Use 'on paper' not 'on a paper'. 'How' is unnecessary and incorrect here; use 'it gives'. Reduce contractions for clarity. Use 'when reading' instead of 'while you're reading' for smoother phrasing.

× On the other hand, uh, reading on online gives you more quick.

✓ On the other hand, reading online gives you quicker access to information.

Do not use 'on online'; use 'online'. 'Gives you more quick' is ungrammatical; use an adjective/adverb like 'quicker' or phrase 'quicker access'. Also add an object to make the meaning clear.

× Well, when I am reading a novel I will very casually and very comfortably.

✓ Well, when I am reading a novel, I read very casually and very comfortably.

Mixes present continuous with future/modal 'will' incorrectly. For habitual or general statements about how one reads novels, use simple present 'I read' or present continuous without 'will'. Add comma for clarity.

× On contrast, when I'm reading something on world affairs or news that affecting jobs, I'm more focused and engaged because I like to ener analyse the information.

✓ In contrast, when I'm reading something about world affairs or news that affects jobs, I'm more focused and engaged because I like to analyze the information.

Use 'In contrast' not 'On contrast'. Use 'about' for topics, and the clause needs an inflected verb: 'news that affects jobs'. 'Affects' is present tense third-person singular. 'Ener analyse' is garbled; use 'analyze'.

× But for me, I always prefer detailed reading, even if it's reading stories or current act news.

✓ For me, I always prefer detailed reading, even if it's reading stories or current news.

'Omit 'But' at sentence start if not needed. 'Current act news' is incorrect; use 'current news' or 'current events'. 'Detailed reading' is fine but ensure the noun phrases are correct.

× Because even if I'm reading a novel, there will be a plot or part of the story which will be linking to the, uh, beginning stage.

✓ Because even if I'm reading a novel, there will be a plot or part of the story that links back to the beginning.

Use simple present 'links' for general truths about plots. 'Will be linking' is unnecessary future progressive. 'Link back to the beginning' is clearer than 'linking to the beginning stage'. Remove filler 'uh'.

× So I will always prefer to register the the.

✓ So I will always prefer to remember those links.

Original sentence is unfinished and repeats words. 'Register' is an odd verb here; 'remember' or 'note' fits better. Provide a clear object ('those links') to complete the sentence.