Reading— Part 1 Informe

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Part 1

Examinador

Do you like reading?

Candidato

Absolutely, yes, I do. I like the reading, uh, especially, uh, right now I'm a student always I would like to reading some extra books, something about my knowledge and a strong my readings, uh, knowledge. And on the other hand, this is help me to make better for my speech. Reading especially is very well for everybody for making fuss their speech.

Examinador

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Candidato

Well, it's on the pen on my reason. If I am in a summer playing summer playing, uh, semi plane, semi train or a car, I prefer to read the in a screen that is very comfortably where you take care for my going. And when I'm in a home, when I'm realizing for my studying, I would like to study in a paper paper exactly Make you very well to see, uh, the text and something for reading books.

Examinador

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Candidato

Well, it's a good question. It's independent on my situation. Where I'm at home, I prefer trading very fast and improve my speeching in some place for the confidently. When I'm in the same way at university or somewhere when I speak in a coded of peoples, I would like to speak very carefully, confidently for myself. The time is that I have to show myself.

Examinador

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Candidato

Well, absolutely I would like to reading details, which is very important for me. Scanning also is not easy for some people. For me is a significant is that also learn scanning and it will be more important for my future. The perfectly is that the tiles will make you very well, you will rate definitely quickly and some exactly detail what you need and without.

Evaluación

Total

Total: 6.0Fluidez y coherencia: 6.0Pronunciación: 6.0Gramática: 5.5Recurso léxico: 6.0

Part 1

Do you like reading?

Puntuación: 55.0

Sugerencia: Говорите короче и структурированно: начните с прямого ответа на вопрос, затем дайте одно-два конкретных поддерживающих предложения. Избегайте лишних звуков (uh) и грамматических ошибок (например, неверные формы глаголов и артикли). Уточните, какие именно книги вы читаете и как чтение помогает вашей речи — это добавит конкретики.

Ejemplo: Yes, I do. As a student I often read extra books about my field to expand my knowledge. This helps me improve my vocabulary and makes me more confident when I speak in class.

Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?

Puntuación: 60.0

Sugerencia: Сначала скажите явное предпочтение, затем объясните причину и приведите контрастную ситуацию. Упростите фразы и используйте корректную лексику (например, 'on a plane' вместо 'on a pen'). Избегайте повторов и наполните ответ конкретными примерами условий.

Ejemplo: I prefer screens when I travel because they are lightweight and easy to carry on a plane or train. At home, though, I like paper books because they are easier on my eyes and better for focused study.

When do you need to read carefully, and when not?

Puntuación: 50.0

Sugerencia: Дайте четкое различие: когда вы читаете внимательно и когда поверхностно. Используйте связующие слова (for example, when / but / however) и уточните причины. Исправьте лексические ошибки ('reading' вместо 'trading', 'group of people' вместо 'coded of peoples').

Ejemplo: I read carefully when I need to learn or prepare for a presentation, because I must understand details. However, at home or during free time I often read quickly for pleasure and general ideas.

Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

Puntuación: 58.0

Sugerencia: Ответьте прямо, затем объясните оба варианта и скажите, почему вы отдаёте предпочтение детальному чтению, но также учитесь сканированию. Упрощайте формулировки, избегайте бессвязных фраз и непонятных слов ('tiles','rate'). Приводите конкретные примеры применения каждого типа чтения.

Ejemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I need to fully understand complex material. However, I also practice scanning for exams or when I need to find specific information quickly, such as dates or names.

Gramática

Article errors

× I like the reading, uh, especially, uh, right now I'm a student always I would like to reading some extra books, something about my knowledge and a strong my readings, uh, knowledge.

✓ I like reading, especially now that I'm a student I always like to read extra books to broaden my knowledge and strengthen my understanding.

Использование артиклей и неверная форма глаголов. В оригинале 'the reading' неверно, нужно неопределённое или нулевое использование артикля: 'reading'. 'I would like to reading' содержит неверную форму после 'like' — должен быть инфинитив без to (read) или герундий; здесь лучше 'like to read' или 'like reading'. Порядок слов и фразы ('a strong my readings') неверны и требовали перестройки: 'strengthen my understanding' или 'strengthen my knowledge'. Совет: уберите лишние артикли перед неисчисляемыми абстрактными существительными и используйте правильную форму глагола после 'like'.

Sentence structure errors

× And on the other hand, this is help me to make better for my speech.

✓ On the other hand, this helps me improve my speaking.

Структура предложения и форма глагола неверны. 'this is help me' должно быть 'this helps me' (подлежащее 'this' требует глагол в 3-м лице единственного числа). 'to make better for my speech' неестественно; корректнее 'improve my speaking' или 'improve my speech'. Совет: используйте правильную форму глагола для 3-го лица и простой глагольный оборот 'help someone do something' или 'help someone to do something'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Reading especially is very well for everybody for making fuss their speech.

✓ Reading, especially, is very good for everyone to improve their speaking.

Неверное употребление прилагательного/наречия: 'very well' — наречие, используется неверно с существительным; нужно прилагательное 'very good'. 'for making fuss their speech' бессмысленно и грамматически неверно; должно быть 'to improve their speaking' или 'to make their speech better'. Совет: подберите подходящую пару 'good/well' в зависимости от контекста (good для качества, well для действия) и используйте стандартные фразы 'improve someone's speaking'.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Well, it's on the pen on my reason.

✓ Well, it's based on my reasons.

Неправильное употребление предлога 'on': фраза 'on the pen on my reason' бессмысленна. Правильно 'based on my reasons' или 'for my reasons'. Совет: используйте устойчивое словосочетание 'based on' для указания основания или причины.

Sentence structure errors

× If I am in a summer playing summer playing, uh, semi plane, semi train or a car, I prefer to read the in a screen that is very comfortably where you take care for my going.

✓ If I am traveling in the summer by plane, train, or car, I prefer to read on a screen because it is very convenient when I am on the go.

Много ошибок в структуре: повтор 'summer playing', неверные слова 'semi plane', 'the in a screen', неверный выбор слова 'comfortably' вместо прилагательного 'convenient' и неестественная фраза 'take care for my going'. Совет: упрощайте фразу: 'traveling by plane, train, or car' и используйте 'read on a screen' и 'convenient when I'm on the go'.

Article errors

× And when I'm in a home, when I'm realizing for my studying, I would like to study in a paper paper exactly Make you very well to see, uh, the text and something for reading books.

✓ When I'm at home studying, I prefer to study on paper because it is easier to see the text in books.

Неправильное использование артиклей и предлогов: 'in a home' должно быть 'at home'. 'realizing for my studying' бессмысленно — вместо этого 'studying' достаточно. 'study in a paper paper' — дублирование и неверный предлог; правильно 'study on paper'. Совет: используйте 'at home' для обозначения местонахождения дома и 'on paper' для чтения печатных материалов; избегайте лишних слов.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It's independent on my situation.

✓ It depends on my situation.

Неправильный предлог и форма глагола: 'it's independent on' неверно; корректно 'it depends on' или 'it's independent of' (с инверсией смысла). Совет: используйте 'depend on' для обозначения зависимости от ситуации.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× Where I'm at home, I prefer trading very fast and improve my speeching in some place for the confidently.

✓ When I'm at home, I prefer reading quickly and improving my speaking in order to be more confident.

Неверные формы слов: 'trading' вместо 'reading', 'very fast' стилистически можно заменить 'quickly' как наречие; 'speeching' неверно — 'speaking' или 'speech'. 'in some place for the confidently' грамматически неверно; правильно 'in order to be more confident' или 'to feel more confident'. Совет: используйте правильные существительные/глаголы ('reading', 'speaking') и соответствующие наречия и фразы для выражения цели.

Incorrect use of pronouns

× When I'm in the same way at university or somewhere when I speak in a coded of peoples, I would like to speak very carefully, confidently for myself.

✓ When I'm at university or speaking in front of a group of people, I like to speak very carefully and confidently.

Неверное использование местоимений и выражений: 'in the same way' и 'in a coded of peoples' неверны; вместо 'a coded of peoples' нужно 'a group of people' or 'an audience'. 'for myself' лишнее. Совет: используйте устойчивые выражения 'in front of a group of people' и соединяйте прилагательные союзом 'and'.

Sentence structure errors

× The time is that I have to show myself.

✓ That is the time when I have to present myself.

Структура и выбор слов некорректны: 'The time is that I have to show myself' неестественно; более естественно 'That is the time when I have to present myself' или 'I have to show myself at that time'. Совет: переставляйте элементы и используйте 'when' для определения времени.

Verb + -ing form

× Well, absolutely I would like to reading details, which is very important for me.

✓ Well, absolutely, I would like to read details, which is very important to me.

После 'would like to' должен следовать инфинитив без -ing: 'would like to read' не 'would like to reading'. Также 'important for me' корректнее 'important to me'. Совет: используйте 'would like to' + infinitive.

Sentence structure errors

× Scanning also is not easy for some people.

✓ Scanning is also not easy for some people.

Порядок слов: 'Scanning also is not easy' звучит неестественно; корректнее 'Scanning is also not easy'. Совет: ставьте подлежащее перед 'also' в простых утверждениях для естественности.

Sentence structure errors

× For me is a significant is that also learn scanning and it will be more important for my future.

✓ For me, it is important to learn scanning because it will be useful for my future.

Нарушена структура: 'For me is a significant is that also learn scanning' — дублирование 'is' и неверный порядок. Лучше 'it is important to learn scanning' и объяснить причину. Совет: используйте 'it is important to do something' + причина 'because...'.

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× The perfectly is that the tiles will make you very well, you will rate definitely quickly and some exactly detail what you need and without.

✓ The advantage is that the skills will help you perform better: you will be able to read quickly and find exactly the details you need.

Много лексических и грамматических ошибок: 'The perfectly' неверно — 'The advantage' или 'The benefit'. 'tiles' должно быть 'skills' or 'techniques'. 'make you very well' не имеет смысла; 'rate definitely quickly' неверно — вероятно 'read quickly'. 'and without' обрывает мысль. Совет: используйте 'skills/techniques', 'read quickly', 'find details' и завершайте мысль логично.

Vocabulario

Better— Superior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Extra— Additional; Exceptionally; In addition; Addition; Walk-on
Fast— Speedy; Secure; Indelible; Promiscuous; Quickly
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Strong— Powerful; Forceful; Secure; Durable; Forceful
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